A Record of Raising Kids in the Interstellar Age

A person in the transformation stage cannot control the most basic emotions, so he has lived for so many years in vain. If she takes care of her children like this, it's understandable that there are so many naughty children now.

The heroine is the best in the world, all men are useless, none of them are worthy, and the father of the baby has no character and no personality. . . Bad review. If you don't have a male protagonist in the whole story, you can go to heaven by yourself. If you want to write a male protagonist, please establish a good personality.

Although the male protagonist in this article is generally a soy sauce, I think 🉐️ is still good-looking

The heroine said that after eight hundred years, she seemed to have no roots and was just like a passerby. She also said that the master and senior sisters loved her very much. Are those people being sentimental? The heroine didn't take those people seriously... It's an unjustifiable plot.

The author writes the heroine from a God's perspective. She is the most powerful in the book, with the highest mental power, IQ (this is not needed), and the highest force value. You can travel through any time and space you want. If someone offends him or those around him, he will immediately kill others in a group. Bad guy (actually there is really no need for a bad guy, she is God. What can a bad guy do!) In the end, I felt bored and even wanted to find a man to match me. Stop it! Isn't it just a waste of time to lower one's level like this? You have no sense of existence at all. Why do you need a man? In the past few hundred years of my life, I didn't think about men at first. In the following decades, I said that I wanted a man with a lot of appearance for my son. But you are already the God of this world, and you still think about these things, isn't it too tacky! Let's start talking about human beings. The story can develop very excitingly, and the writing is good at the beginning, but the overall situation is not well controlled. The villains are all too weak, and the heroine goes too far, which limits the room for growth. There was originally a lot of space in front, but it was a pity. The author's imagination is still good, but the overall control is too poor. There are loopholes almost everywhere. In the end, when the sky is not clear, he wants to get through by buying stupid people. Unfortunately, the pit is too big and cannot be blocked!

The daily plot of Rebirth and Raising a Baby is similar to this one. This feeling is really...

Bad review, bad review: the heroine is too fake

After eight hundred years of cultivation, you are still as innocent as an eighteen-year-old girl. What did you do for those eight hundred years?

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