My Great-Aunt Has Returned from Cultivating Immortality

I love the combination of my aunt and Yueyue, haha. Congratulations on the release of Yoyo's new book. The new book is a big hit. From the copy, it seems that there are more than one who have come back, so I am looking forward to the future direction (off topic: It seems that the plane wall has turned into a sieve hahaha)

The limited exemption is even, what can I say, I just feel uncomfortable. Seeing that the family of immortal cultivators was about to become extinct, their spiritual energy revived, and people who traveled through time returned one after another as if they had accidentally traveled through it. The heroine's aunt came back by tearing apart the space with her power. The boss' position is firmly established and no one dares to mess with him. Because the heroine is the only descendant of the family, the tide is rising. But it's hard for me to understand the heroine's thoughts. My aunt gave it to me, saying there were only two bottles of century-old nectar, but she sold it for a few thousand yuan! The elixirs that my aunt made casually were sold for 80,000 yuan. There are also people who my aunt told me not to associate with, but she always contacts them. Anyway, I just don't listen to what you say. If you flirt with a little boy and he likes you, your family will get engaged and you will have to break off the engagement. I was very speechless. Another thing is that after the space was torn apart, a space crack remained, and people from the world of cultivating immortals discovered this place. The discovered sect commanded its disciples to invade, and a fight broke out between the two sides. After the defeat, I discovered that the cultivators here were protecting the mortals, and actually tricked the ten major sects into attacking together. Alas, in front of the strong men, the lives of mortals are like grass. The cultivators here are few and suffer numerous casualties. What I can't figure out is that my aunt has a ceiling of strength in another world. Why does she have to retreat in seclusion and continue to improve before the war? Can't you give it a shock first? There wouldn't be that many casualties, right? Even if you want to improve yourself, you can wait until later!

Shopping at leisure

It's a bit strange. After watching more than 100 times, I feel a bit baffled. The part about entering the army feels like it is just for the sake of plot (why should I go for the popular route when I have high resources).

It's pretty good at the beginning, but the more I look at the heroine, the more she looks like a waste. She has taken the lead for so long and doesn't know how to work hard. When in danger, she can only wait for others to save her 😒

Anyway, the beginning of this book is quite novel, which is good. But the language is a bit too immature, which detracts from the book. Then, the biggest shortcoming of this book is that the author does not specify whether this is an fictional world or a non-fictional world, which will make readers feel particularly strange. For example, why did this aunt conjure a pill? This is simply impossible in reality, right? Then, you exaggerate real life, which proves that this is a scientific world, and there should be no such thing as mana. An originally good book was ruined by two-thirds by your writing, and the content of this book is wrong.

The title of this book should be called My Golden Finger. It has come back from cultivating immortality.

I have read more than 100 chapters and I really like this setting, but I always feel like something is wrong. The layout is too small and the plot is too strange.

Author! Christmas is coming soon, let's reward our hard-working operations officers! Send a Christmas gift 🎁, for example, send a Christmas dress to the operations officer to keep warm, I think this one is good

Why did this book end just as I was reading it? I felt like I hadn't finished the book yet. It was a bit sudden.