The Ruler of the Pitch

Lead the Chinese men's football team to reach the quarterfinals of the World Cup? Even if I give you a hundred years, it won't work. The root is rotten. If you don't dig out the root and replace it with a taproot, it will be useless for anyone to lead the Chinese men's football team.

I think the biggest taboo in system writing is too much system presence, and this is it.

The ending is too fast😭😭

The writing is okay, but the plot design is too young. Apart from anything else, the setting of Inter Milan's youth training draft is obviously wishful thinking - don't you know that the Serie A giants attach no importance to the use of youth training players? They hardly use any of their own people, not to mention Asians and Chinese. Is it more credible if you write about the Bundesliga, Premier League and La Liga?

To be honest, my first-generation football idols were also from the generation of Baggio, Bergkamp, ​​and Romario. Baggio, who has always felt completely healthy, now has no problem playing at Melo's level. The author of this book describes the protagonist's pursuit of dreams, the matches on the court, and the details of training very well. The only dilemma is, author, why do you want to molest so many women? It is generally accepted that romance novels are not well written in competitive novels. The difference is that men who read competitive novels basically don't pay much attention to love. Occasionally, it is only a few women in the entertainment industry who are teased by readers. To be honest, if you want to read this, just turn left when you go out and choose from thousands of urban love and urban superpowers. Therefore, the writing should be smooth, embellishment is acceptable, and some plots are interspersed. Don't include too many women, which will cause readers to get entangled in the book. It looks like the girl who gives the book to the protagonist looks like the heroine. Why do I think the girl playing football is cuter? . . She uses a lot of pen and ink, and her images are very full. What should I do? Whether a sports novel is good or not, some people say that the plot is the most important. I prefer the author's understanding of football to resonate with readers. It's in place, the plot ability is barely there, and the author's intentions can be seen. Come on, 16 votes for you.

Mission penalty erasure is a redundant thing

How could you, an unsystematic person, be so crazy? Ah? What Jun Yingzhi, Shi Lezhi! It really disgusts me to hear the protagonist say that he is a friend... The original supporting character is so arrogant and unrealistic in his strength, it is so unsightly! I endured emotional dramas, and I endured being suppressed by the system. What kind of mentality did you use to create a supporting character who is better than the main character who doesn't care? To put it bluntly, he wants to help the protagonist's national team. There are many talented young players, right? Wouldn't it be nice to have the protagonist kick out and promote him, and take in a younger brother? Is it interesting to have a supporting teammate who can be "equal" to you? I typed these words with depression in my chest. This is too cruel. It is more cruel than accidentally reading a stallion story to pollute my eyes. I can't wait for the protagonist to reach a higher level. When I think that this so-called frenemy and friend may also go to a higher place and be equal to the protagonist in the national team, I will fuck him!

All I can say is that it's a bit of a middle-of-the-road thing! What the hell are you writing about! Two agents, two players!

Alas, there is no one who writes novels nowadays who is not good at it.

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