The Wizard's Extraordinary Journey

Can you use a name? If you have to give the protagonist two names, why not just use the same name? Doesn't it look awkward? Anyway, I don't even look at things like this, I just delete them.

I feel like the writing is pretty good, but it's a pity for the eunuch.

Why do everyone like to write about Harry Potter? They are all so bad. I, who don't read Harry Potter, already know the plot.

Why is it a eunuch?🔪

I found that the biggest obsession of the protagonists in many time-travel novels is to go home. They would rather go back and live a poor life, or abandon everything to return to the earth. Emmm. Simply. What's good about the earth? Let so many heavenly gods, evil gods, true gods, demon kings and other indescribable beings want to come. Shouldn't the idea of ​​going home be included under the pursuit of truth? If you have enough strength, just go back and take a look. If you really can't find it, forget it. If you have to be so obsessed, I'm afraid it's not about being precise.

Those who have high martial arts have to learn ground martial arts. I can only say that it's okay to find some as a reference, but can you understand other things if your own height is not high?

"The Warlock" is one of the more outstanding wizard-style novels in recent years. The protagonist in it is good at everything, but is too ruthless... I hope the author's book can pay attention to this point. Of course, Mary's disease must not be present, but it cannot go from one extreme to the other... I wish the author good success with his novel! !

Let's take a look at what the author writes. If the protagonist becomes a person who has no love, no anger, no sadness, is ruthless and righteous, does not recognize any of his relatives, is only interested in profit, and is single. Then I'm going to abandon the book. I'm not interested in reading about robots.

The English name of the author and protagonist is fine, but interspersing the Chinese name is a bit unbearable.

I don't know what to say. I felt something was wrong at the beginning of the trial, especially since the author of the word "forbidden" must not be a fantasy writer. Then I started without any preparation. I won't tell you that I was originally taking on the most dangerous task. When I quit midway, I was so excited that I was embarrassed and lifeless. The protagonist doesn't deserve to use magic or be called a wizard. Fantasy skin, fantasy flesh. When I saw it was called "Gate of Time and Space", I thought it was about rebirth and transformation in the apocalypse, but I didn't expect it to be fantasy.

The writing is okay, but it's very messy.

The Harry Potter part was okay, but after that, I felt like the protagonist's IQ instantly became lower.

Don't forget that Dumbledore mentioned that no teacher could teach Defense Against the Dark Arts for more than a year since he rejected Voldemort. If Quirrell had been at Hogwarts a year before Harry, he would have been teaching for two years.