Xiaoyao County Magistrate

The plot and writing are very good, are you a eunuch?

This is a romance harem novel, the kind that has no heart or courage. There is no martial arts, just a group of gangsters who know martial arts. There is no officialdom, just a background.

I've followed you all the way, so here's my personal opinion. Don't criticize if you don't like it. I originally saw "Magic Kung Fu" and thought it would be a martial arts novel of this type. However, later on, it started to adopt a fictional model, and martial arts almost disappeared. However, in the recent chapters, the plot of a martial arts novel started again. Personally, I prefer this kind of civil and military type, but the plot is over-switched and the priorities are a bit unclear. After all, as an official with a heavy responsibility, the first thing he did after falling off a cliff and waking up was to pick up girls... This is a bit unreasonable. At the very least, he has to get in touch with his subordinates. I have a small opinion and hope that the author Jun Yue can write better, come on!

You wrote the title of the book wrong, just write Xiaoyao Daxian instead! After reading more than a dozen chapters, none of them were developed, just killing monsters and upgrading. No wonder no one read it.

I've read Chapter 50. I'd like to apologize for you.

The front is okay, but the further you go to the back, the more watery it becomes, and it has nothing to do with the introduction.

This book is definitely worth reading. I started reading in 2003 and have nearly 2,000 books on my bookshelf, from fairy tales to games to history to cities... I can't read more than 200 books from beginning to end. Many of them were spent money and then gave up, because many books later became more and more stereotyped, tasteless, and tasteless (especially the fairy tales). Nearly 2/3 of the more than 2,000 books on the bookshelf in the past 15 years have become great authors (this shows that I have a good eye for reading 🤭). The author of this book was a bit messy at the beginning, and there was no motivation to read it. I gave up several times. It was not because I was in a book shortage on the high-speed train and on the plane. I downloaded it and took a look and almost missed the book. After about 50 chapters, it got better and better, and the thinking was clear. Although the writing style was a bit immature and the content was not enough. It is profound (the author is estimated to be under 35 years old), and some of the plots are familiar, but they do not deviate from the author's main idea. The author does not need to belittle himself. This is the author's first book. With this skill, I believe the author will get better and better. There will be great writers in the future. I wish the author a spring of literary thoughts and further progress!

A nonsensical monologue novel.

All fictional historical novels are all about stallions and I can't read them.

I have read three hundred chapters and it is generally good, but there are also unreasonable plots. Here are two examples: Fei Yan is obviously just a top brothel. However, the setting given by the author seems to be so important. A famous scholar without an official position can force her. And this is also on the premise that the protagonist has an official position. In the second one, the protagonist got a letter from the prince to rebel, but he dared not tell anyone, even if his backer is the emperor. It is evidence of his mortal enemy. But he didn't dare to tell his patron, the emperor, that he was ready to rebel and was his mortal enemy. He was still hesitant. It made me want to vomit. The political aspect was so poorly written, but life was okay.