Grandmaster of Naruto Ninjutsu

Author, please note that Kakashi did not intentionally use his technique to kill the "unsuspecting Rin" (as described in Kakashi's flashback). Rin was captured by the Hidden Mist ninja controlled by Madara, who then sealed the Three-Tails inside her, intending for her to rampage through Konoha. Rin deliberately ran into Kakashi's Lightning Blade for the sake of the village.

Speechless, this book just keeps rambling on and on from beginning to end.

The very first chapter casually features the Third Hokage, and then the Third Hokage surprisingly sends someone of unknown origin, someone whose memories even the mountain can't detect, to keep Naruto company. Hah, that's the Nine-Tails!

I was hooked after reading Chapter 5. The protagonist is a five-attribute ninja. He asks the Third Hokage about it. The Third Hokage says that having all five attributes is useless. But the Third Hokage himself was a five-attribute ninja. Does he think he's useless? Is this a Third Hokage from a cultivation novel?! A single spiritual root system?

Speechless. What was the author thinking? The Third Hokage would send someone he'd just found to Naruto? Kakashi wasn't allowed to go for 12 years! Unbelievable!

It's a rambling account, yet it tries to explain scientific principles, elaborating on things you yourself can't even explain clearly, resulting in even more logical flaws. Most importantly, there are a lot of typos; it's dizzying to read. In short, I admire your perseverance and courage in finishing this book.

Five attributes are useless? The fourth, third, second, and first generations send their congratulations!

The people of Konoha are so stupid. They just accepted something with so many suspicious points. The logic is absurd, and I have no interest in watching any further.

Chapter Seven: The owner of Ichiraku Ramen is actually called Uncle Ayame?!

Six-year-old Naruto, thanks to good nutrition, was taller than Kakashi. A strangely awkward situation.