God Storm

After reading thousands of things, I can persuade him to quit, but he is really poisoned to death. 1. The power system is completely confused, and it is impossible to distinguish between technology, low martial arts, high martial arts, magic, immortals and Buddhas, and dark matter. It is too confusing, a hodgepodge. 2. The plot is confusing. It's all about going wherever the ability is lacking. Since it's a directional shuttle, it won't go wherever the ability is. 3. There are too many flaws in the characters. The reality is either not written, or they go directly to other worlds and pretend to be in the real world without any awareness, especially those with relatives. Their abilities are so awesome that they have no precautions at all. It is superfluous to improve the character of the pig's feet. 3. The location of the pig's feet is not clear. I always feel that I am traveling for the sake of time travel. The theme is good at the beginning and the digging is also very good. It seems that it will jump later 4. You can watch it, but don't use your brain.

There are various bosses at the beginning, and the protagonist has problems with his outlook on life. He kills the whole family at every turn and destroys the whole family! The mother didn't react at all when she was killed. She even put people on the animal cards so that the pigs could have sex 24 hours a day. Showing off in the city, the rich second generation provokes and threatens. Unconscious, and with relatives, there was no precaution at all, and the power system was in a mess.

Brother, you are really a talented person. I have been drinking water for 5 years and I still haven't finished drinking it.

Let me tell you my own opinion. The levels are too confusing. In the main world, people have transcended tribulations and become gods. In the Marvel world, they are planning to create a god with a vibranium body. I just don't understand it. Seven of the ten chapters are in the water. I don't know how to comment. I can only read the first hundred chapters.

I sell individual systems, please let me know if you need them.

The protagonist is frustrated in the real world. He has a beautiful girlfriend, but ends up being taken advantage of. After the breakup, the author seemed to want to write a slap-in-the-face plot, but it disappeared halfway through. What about the follow-up to the ex-girlfriend? Isn't it still good? ? Then he pursues a beautiful woman from an aristocratic family, and because he wanted to date her, his mother died. As a result, the famous beauty has an owner, and the protagonist is given the good guy card. The protagonist is sad alone, but you have the courage to massacre tens of millions of people? ? What about the means you have after traveling through so many worlds? ? As a result, I just endured being a turtle. In the end, he could only pursue a girl with average looks, and even arranged for a sister to stop and imprison him. This author is poisonous.

In my mind, the time travel novels should have an orphan protagonist (no need to write fictional family relationships), unlimited time travel (no system, you can decide the time and space yourself), sex but no love (no need to write emotional drama, after all, you are not reading urban novels, you have to read a lot of urban novels with emotional drama), the protagonist and villain have an online IQ, and no time travellers. To enter randomly, it is best to follow the path of cultivating immortals (after all, it is the right path to attribute great power to yourself), occasionally have a leisure plane (to engage in entertainment and relax), and finally, you must follow the path of the emperor (having an absolutely obedient force, you can be cannon fodder when traveling to higher planes or occupy the plane to collect resources).

Damn it, you are so weak, you know that you are discovered by the enemy, but you still live, you have your mother killed, and you slowly preach to the enemy,

I know why I gave up the book 😰😰 The new Chinese Ghost Story is extremely poisonous, saying that it is unethical for a scholar to be a mistress. I will erase Yan Chixia's memory of Xiaoqian myself, and fuck Liu Yifei myself. I'll wipe it out! Feelings are what you want to have

I will look at you three quietly

The protagonist Bai Xiaofei is sometimes retarded and sometimes like a prophet. He relies on weapons and equipment, and despises the use of weapons and equipment by others. He does not want to improve his own strength, but only wants to gain energy from black technology. He has a lot of energy that is neither used to improve strength nor upgrade. The author racked his brains to figure out the plot. Some of the necessary things can be grabbed and left after entering, but he has to start from the beginning of the plot to the end. When I look at the chapters, dozens of chapters have passed.

In other worlds, I don't know how many countries have been destroyed, and half the universe has been filled by killing people. As a result, in the real world, I have no land, and I am subject to various demands He even kneels and licks me

My name is Bai Xiaofei. An unimaginable disaster has happened around me. Xiaowei, wait for me, I will definitely find you!

A rich man gave a beggar a shop. If the beggar still uses the shop, this is not good, that is not good. This beggar should die.

I just read two chapters, and I have something to say. How can such a high-end artifact like the time shuttle use something as low as fingerprints and sounds? At least it should be soul bound. The most important thing is that the people in the group are all powerful people, and this shuttle is obviously for them. To put it bluntly, it is a high-end means of transportation, but it actually has so-called tasks. Wouldn't it be better to directly give a system and say that it can help the powerful people cultivate future generations?

Damn it, I'm still writing, that's awesome

This book survives the low intelligence at the beginning, and the author's writing is at least fluent later on. But he was just a licker, and I couldn't help it anymore. I convinced myself time and time again to continue watching. But the author's licks are getting stronger each time, and any woman can sit on the author's head and shit. My patience seems to be a joy, bye

After his real-life girlfriend was tortured and mutilated, the male protagonist was in a very good mood. He was happy about this and crazy about that! What kind of mentality is this? It's so uncomfortable to read. The male protagonist must be so hated when his girlfriend is treated like this. Are all kinds of pretense interesting? And because of the so-called laziness, I don't want to take care of this, and I don't want to deal with that. How many hidden dangers have been laid, how many losses have been suffered, and nothing has changed, right? This is the so-called intelligence dozens of times that of ordinary people. How stupid must ordinary people be? Can you bring some IQ? ? ?

My name is Bai Xiaofei. An unimaginable disaster has happened around me. I want to survive... Sorry, I went to the wrong place.

I would like to say that the characteristics of this book are that it is messy, chaotic, a quick-and-dirty plot, no details to speak of, a second-rate protagonist, etc.,,,,, I can't stand it anymore 88.

Have all the book reviews been deleted? ,, Are there too many people trolling?,, Why are there only so few comments? 😤😤😤

It can be seen that he really has no worries about food and clothing.

As long as the author does a few things, the book will not collapse. First, the power system needs to be done well. The author must get the speed right. What kind of power will not be too excessive in the main world? That kind of power is what the protagonist needs to have. For example, many authors of novels listened to the so-called readers' opinions and ran to travel through worlds where they could immediately obtain superpowers. Then they obtained superpowers, and then they thought about how to write the main world. For example, running through the world of internal martial arts, and then learning the internal martial arts Beiming Shen Gong or something like that. Then he would run back and give his internal skills to his family members, and they would pass them on to one person for decades. Then no one watched. Because there is nothing written in the main world. The main world of the truly infinite novel is more exciting than the movie world. Because you have learned a skill and don't slap your face in the main world, it will make readers unhappy and have no expectations. A novel that travels all the way through time will not make people look forward to it too much. Unless you write very enjoyable. What kind of power in the main world is not easy to collapse? The first is that the national arts are not easy to collapse, and the second is that the Taoism and theology are not easy to collapse. The third military skill is not easy to collapse. The fourth medical skill and art cannot be destroyed. There are other things, as long as the legendary things don't come and destroy the world, those who resist the army will not collapse easily. But superpowers are the easiest to collapse because they have no legendary backing.

A book written in 2016 and still being updated in 23

Fifteen million words, this achievement, poof~

Why is this book still being updated? I forgot when I added it. I'm just waiting to finish reading it😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬😬

I don't know if you can finally pick up the hole you dug at the beginning.

Now I'll just leave this book and see how many chapters he updates to it.

It's another year, come on, author!

Seeing the various touts in this book reminds me of how miserable it is to be discharged from the army in reality. I'm talking about the ordinary, no-background kind. More than 20 years ago, my friend worked on the Pearl River Delta Road. Later, he felt that it was too chaotic and dangerous, so he returned to his hometown to work. She mentioned the bodyguard of the boss of the place where she worked. He is also considered a legend in the field. He was just an ordinary elite Tetimo who was born in border warfare. He had no background connections after being discharged from the army, so he was directly assigned to work as a clerk in a certain unit. As a result, after being reported, he was squeezed out to the front door several times. He was often ridiculed. A man who fought on the front lines while serving his country was injured and left untreated. In the end, he was angered and was fired directly. The former King of Elite Soldiers was very unfit for ordinary life in society. He couldn't adapt to anything. His family also complained that he couldn't find a wife no matter how young or old he was. Later, someone introduced me to work there as a bodyguard for a boss who was involved in black and white business. Because of his loyalty and courage, he was brave enough to fight. It is said that he even took a bullet for the boss. He was a legend in that place. Alas, the King of Soldiers who honed his killing skills while serving Weiguo ended up in the underworld.