Immortal Martial Ring

There are four kinds of women in this world that you cannot have! The first one is: the bus conductor, she often says: squeeze in a little bit more, squeeze in a little bit more, it's still empty inside! The second one is: nurse, she often says: Take off your pants! The third type is a primary school teacher. She often says: If you don't do it well, you will be punished by doing it a hundred times! The fourth type is of course the author. He often says: Please click on my avatar and author homepage to read my books! Please collect it! Please give me a reward! !

This is a novel about a sadist, the appraisal is complete!

With 116,000 fans, the author can write a new book. This result shows that the author is still popular. This book has laid the foundation for writing the next book.

I don't understand why Fang Haoran, who is not weaker than Medusa, still gives him pills for free, and why he always has such retarded conversations with women.

The things that were unreasonable from the beginning to now are, firstly, if you can travel through time and return at any time, then money is no problem. There is no defense against the Fang family who wants to kill you. The second point is that when I got the corpse refining secret book, I only saw that it would be used in the world of drizzle, and I started to describe the secret book as awesome. The third point is that as a time traveler, he clearly knew that the Huang family invited the goddess to kill him, but he only killed the goddess. The mastermind behind the scenes let it go like this. Is it just to enrich the plot? The fourth point is, is the time ratio between the plot world and the main world adjusted casually? Otherwise, it would not be suspected after traveling for such a long time. If time stops in the main world after traveling through time, why can't you go back to the zombie world to find the master when you encounter an infant ghost? In short, the routines are very old-fashioned, the main world has no characteristics, and the plot world does not have much new ideas. So the question is, can such a bad book be recommended?

It's amazing. The number of words is three times that of clicks.

Why do we need forty-two sutras? Didn't it say that the Great Qing Dragon Vein is in the Imperial Tomb in the eastern suburbs? Just go and get it.

It would be difficult to change it, or we might as well not write about Jin Yong at all.

The author didn't want to choose a good plot. In the beginning, a bully snatched his maid, and the protagonist learned a little bit about it and said a few pretentious words. Encountered a female head catcher and rescued her

It's also funny to write that the main world disappears later, and it doesn't matter what the priority is.

I feel awkward seeing the name Fang Haoran

I can only say that this kind of nice person is not suitable for me, he is too kind.

The idea of ​​bringing the great emperor who covers the sky to the world of immortality is a great idea. How could most people have thought of it? Someone finally broke away from fighting alone and started fighting in groups! This is the highlight in Infinite Streaming!

The first few pictures are a little bit toxic. It's so easy to be my apprentice and I just need to flatter you. You know that this is a fantasy world but you're still so arrogant. As soon as you get some strength, you jump out and pretend to be a slap in the face. The character of the protagonist is generally cliche, like he's the boss and I'm the second child, haha.

The writing is good, a group of readers who only know bb

There are too many loopholes and many places are unreasonable.

It's boring. It's another harem novel with the pretense of being unlimited. The writing is okay, but the plot is vulgar. It's a shabby novel and a waste of my time.

I have tried the drug and read about 4 volumes of more than 80 chapters. What I have concluded is that 1. The protagonist is sentimental and loves to pretend to be B. 2. The villain has no brains and has almost never done anything except make harsh words and give away experience, and the reasons for being hostile to the protagonist are all very weird. 3. The female has no brains and backstabs. 4. The narrative rhythm is very strange. In general, it is not as good as Xiaobai's novel. It feels like it just found a template for a cool novel and directly applied it. And it's very carefree. If you are really bored and want to pass the time, you can read it, but after reading it for a while, you won't want to add it to your bookshelf at all. The only thing worthy of praise is the author's perseverance, insisting on writing more than 400 chapters and there is still no eunuch. I think as long as the author continues to persevere, the new books he will publish in the future will definitely become popular...

Why is it that each of the protagonists is so arrogant and tough even when they can't even protect themselves? Don't you see how easy it is to get through this? It's a miracle that this character can survive to adulthood

I felt inexplicably embarrassed when I saw the zombies in the first game. There was no innovation at all.

It looks so cruel, the main character is being tortured all the time

There are very few readers of Chang Sheng. If you have nothing to write about, you are setting yourself up for a trap.

If you like corpse refining so much, can you act like a normal person? It's so perverted.

The plot is very retarded and I can't stand it.

Author, you have 8 good poems at once, but people don't believe you even if you say you didn't copy them? 🤭

I want to see the world of Chinese martial arts, the version of the great master Tony Leung, Tai Chi Chenjiagou. I want to watch the ghost movie Lin Zhengying. I want to watch the movie version of The Invincible. Come on, author, come on

More rewards! 🤭

The Lord of the Divine Court is the Golden Crow! Not Suzaku

No matter how good the writing is, messy editing will make people uncomfortable. Seeing Murong Fu changing the mop makes people uncomfortable, and it is easy to miss the text. This is what it means to copy a cat and paint a tiger. If you change the artistic conception, it will be gone. You can just write it according to the original name.

When I saw Su Qingyi and Su Jiajia, I knew she was a scheming bitch, as well as Doupo Ya Fei and the nun sect of Shuanglong. Really, looking at the scheming bitch makes me sick.