Pokemon: a Different Gon

The author's writing style is new... Maybe. Anyway, I'm not used to such personal introductions… The content setting is quite fresh. The first PM fanfic I've ever read where I traveled through time and became Xiaogang. But I really don't like the writing style.

It doesn't matter to me whether Meow Meow catches me or not. I also feel very strongly about time traveling as Xiaogang. I just feel that the writing style is too low and the plot progression is too blunt. For example, after the system is turned on, a mission is issued saying that I want to travel with Xiaozhi, but in the end, he proposes to go on a trip without hesitation, without any regard for the operation of the gym and the lives of his younger brothers and sisters (Wuneng has not yet appeared at that time)