Blood

The chapters are so confusing! ! Can't understand🤫

Thoughts after reading: As a bookworm for more than ten years, I have read a lot of fictional historical novels. I have read nearly 500 chapters of this book, now let me talk about my thoughts after reading it. This book has more than a thousand chapters and more than five million words, and I probably won't be able to finish it. The reasons are as follows First, the writing style of this book is too biased towards vernacular, and it seems that the sense of substitution is not enough. After all, those who like to read this kind of novels still have some requirements in this regard. You don't need to be precise in every sentence, but at least it should have a little bit of ancient Chinese meaning in it. The second point is that the narrative in the book is fragmented and unclear. The author's literary skills are still a little lacking. After all, it is an imaginary historical novel. The paragraphs and descriptions are not clear enough. There is always a sense of disconnection between the first chapter and the last chapter. Even if it is divided into flashbacks, it always feels very abrupt. There is a feeling that the preface does not match the afterword, and the reading is not smooth. The third point is that the character description is not clear enough and the off-topic description is too wordy. Personally, I feel that the characterization in this book is relatively unsuccessful. Many descriptions are long, but basically miss the point. In the end, it feels like it is describing a person's past and personality, but there is no outstanding point. It was a lengthy introduction, but I didn't remember any of it. Just like the so-called venomous counselor, except that the author deliberately uses the word venomous in a few chapters, it actually doesn't leave a deep impression on people at all. The fourth point is that the character dialogue has no characteristics. In fact, this is the same as the third point. The characters in the article speak without any characteristics, and they are also long-winded and without focus. For example, in the conversation between Chen Xishen and Zhao Shi in Chapter 469, he introduced Nan Shiba in a long paragraph, but he did not describe Nan Shiba's characteristics. It would be better to say: This person has no plans and no desires. Comes simple and clear. The fifth point is that the description of the general environment in the book is a mess. It's probably because the author didn't have a structure at first, but even if the first few chapters are not complete, I've read nearly 500 chapters, and I still haven't seen anything added by the author, and it's still confusing. Since it is written about the timeline of the late Southern Song Dynasty, and the history itself is fictitious, it is necessary to describe the basic pattern, but the author just doesn't have anything about the Later Zhou and Shu, and it is easy for readers to confuse the Southern Song period with the period of the Five Dynasties and Ten Kingdoms. At least there should be a description of how many countries there are, the distribution of power, etc. The sixth point is that the description in the book is too bland and fails to grasp the key points. There is always a feeling that when you have just become interested, when you feel that you should take a close-up, it will be taken away with a single brush stroke, which ends in an anticlimax. For example, the details of military training in the book should be more described in writing. Zhao Shi, Du Shanhu, etc. Can be portrayed more vividly. This paragraph can also be used to connect the relationships and characters of the civil servants and generals in the court, making this paragraph a shining point in the book. However, I guess the author probably writes this type of novel, and the key events are not well captured, so the overall feeling of the book is too bland, without any sense of ups and downs. The final summary of this book is that the writing style is slightly lacking, the story structure is bland, the character portrayal is uncharacteristic, and the overall description is too poor. PS: I'm not trolling just for the sake of trolling, otherwise I wouldn't have the patience to read nearly 500 chapters. I just wrote down my true feelings after reading it. However, because I haven't written it for a long time, maybe the description above is a bit unsatisfactory. Generally speaking, as an old bookworm, I am not satisfied with this book. Although it is not useless, I can only give a tasteless review. This is not directed at the author, but when I read this book during a book shortage, I felt that the greater my hopes, the greater my disappointment. I hope the author can think carefully about his next book and have an outline before writing it. Come on💪.

The strange thing is, am I the only one who feels that such a ruthless character description of the protagonist Zhao Shi is the closest to the iron-blooded side of the male in reality. War is a purgatory-like existence on earth. Is this kind of character more convincing?

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After reading novels for more than ten years, only the protagonist Zhao Shi in this book has stuck with me. He really wrote about what I think is the iron-blooded side of men. It is impossible to find a novel whose protagonist is as majestic as the protagonist Zhao Shi, who lives in eight seats and has the aura of a majestic general.

The author seems to have suddenly lost a lot of quality. If you don't want to write, then don't write.

In the feudal dynasty, the leader has great achievements, and if he does not stand on his own feet, he will die.

I have been reading it since 2008, and I reviewed it again two days ago. I personally think it is a good book. A good man, he will be granted the title of Marquis, but he will take it immediately. The most exciting sentence is: Under the sky, those who are not my old friends are my enemies. Between the four seas, those who follow me will prosper, and those who go against me will perish.

I was originally very interested in this book, but I didn't want to read it for a moment.

One of my favorite protagonists at the moment, I like him as much as I like Han Lao Mo.

I think this book is very good, the writing is good, and the material is quite sufficient. As an old bookworm, I quite like this book. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง, support 😁 I have read all kinds of online articles in the past few years. Most of them are good in the first dozen chapters, but get worse as they go to the back. I want to vomit when I read them All kinds of pretentiousness. One book is all pretentious. You can try another one. The methods are all the same. Some are originally about an old monster who becomes more and more disgusting the more you watch them. Would you like to be more mature and even get recommended? Others feel that everyone is a fool and the protagonist is a genius, and those who oppose the protagonist are all kinds of bad guys. Haha, I won't mention it.

Are there any novels about characters like Zhao Shi, a fierce warrior? I have been reading books for 10 years and found this book. . . .

After searching through the starting point for ten years, this book is the only one that captures the style of a tough guy.

There are always people who feel that they must be emperor after traveling back in time, but they don't understand what is so worth fighting about in this small land of the Central Plains. Whether it is destroying India or unifying Europe is more meaningful than staying here. If not, building ships and opening up a new continent will be fine. All you need to do is clean up the non-my race. This is the greatest significance to your own race. Doesn't Zhao Shi have the opportunity to do this now? It is thousands of times better than staying there to be the emperor.

This book is indeed well written, but the author is too verbose. He talks a lot of nonsense before and after each chapter. I was so angry when I read the original version, but now I read the pirated version, I still can't help but come back to complain about you. A good book is a good book, but the author complains too much 🤐🤐

In the past 13 years, one book has been completed amidst persistent interruptions and requests for leave, and the other is about to be completed despite constant requests for leave and interruptions. Hahaha

Older books should be acceptable to those with older tastes. It does not meet the taste of readers in the past two years, and the description of women is very abstract. Not recommended to watch

I have been reading novels for more than ten years, and the best ones about war are those written in a hurry.

I can't remember how many times I've read "Iron-blooded Man" over the years, but I only remember that it's a book about the sweet dream of a passionate man!

I'm halfway through reading it, and I keep emphasizing that the main character's handwriting is embarrassing, and it's always from the modern past, so it's not that bad, maybe it's because people are judged for their shortcomings?

I have been following it since it was serialized, and now I have started anew just for this book. I think the characters portrayed in this book are more realistic.

As expected of the title of the book, will blood be shed? You should name the powerful minister, a proper stallion

After seeing more than 300 chapters, I have some doubts. Does the author have to fit her into the protagonist? 🤫🤫

This book is quite a classic. I have read it several times. Why do I only write one postscript?

I feel like the author didn't write the female characters well at all. Especially the female character Li Jinhua. Disgusting. The stop at Qingyang Mansion. Not to mention whether he would die without the protagonist? Let's just say that the protagonist helped him achieve such a big contribution. He just listened to suggestions and did nothing else. He said that he was the crab of the Li family. Not welcome. After changing hands, a great credit was given to the prince and his relatives, and they were not even given the pensions of the soldiers and subordinates who worked hard for him. Also be deducted. They don't come forward to solve this problem. It's better for him. With such a meritorious reputation, the following plot. Many people think he is a powerful general. Later, the author also used the protagonist's words to say that he would no longer have anything to do with him. In the blink of an eye, I wrote about this female character asking the protagonist for help. The scars are really healed and forgotten. The protagonist doesn't help, and this woman blames the protagonist for being callous. I still feel that I have been wronged. Here again it is written that the protagonist and he no longer want to have a relationship. As a result, we arrived at Tongguan in the blink of an eye. The author also said that he would give him a good ending. I was so sick. I really don't know what the author was thinking. How could such a plot be written? If you want to give this female character a good ending, you might as well let her die on the battlefield. Or just disappear. So far I don't think this book is bad. But just seeing this female character appear once makes me sick.

The previous writing is quite good, and I can tolerate writing a chapter or two of nonsense occasionally. Who can bear to write hundreds of chapters of nonsense later on? The layout becomes smaller and smaller as the writing becomes smaller and smaller. A big thing can take several chapters. Is it necessary to write down the fuel, rice, oil and salt so clearly? It's not like I'm here to learn how to live my life. I'm just writing a lot of side stories here and there.

If you can't write classical Chinese well, don't show off. Your level is ridiculous. You don't even have a bachelor's degree in ancient Chinese.

It looked good from the front, but the one where Li Jinhua won the title was so damn good, it made me sick, and I gave up the book. It was so fucked up. The man who worked so hard to kill this woman didn't do anything good, and she was the one who had it all.

I actually finished writing this book. When I saw "Beixiong", I realized that Hebiancao had started writing a book again. I had been waiting for a long time and didn't see the end of the book. I thought it was a eunuch. It really felt like I was still alive.

If you don't know how to write female characters, you don't have to write them. What kind of goblin is Li Jinhua? She's worthy of being the heroine.