Witchcraft Power

Let me just say one thing, I thought it was a good idea. The first rule of the wizarding world: Wizards are not allowed to harm ordinary people for no reason, otherwise they will be targeted by the will of the plane. Exc? What's the difference between a wizard who can't harm ordinary people at will and a salted fish? Without the right of life and death, how can one have supremacy? Why should ordinary people be ruled by wizards? In this case, the wizard is just a more powerful hunter. Referring to the real world, soldiers with guns are infinitely more powerful than ordinary people, but they are not supreme. Because there are legal restrictions, just like the will of the world in this world, it is also impossible for wizards to gain much status.

The author doesn't understand what a wizard-style novel is. He writes more and more like an indigenous person. All kinds of sentimentality. You have traveled through time, brother, where do you get all the sense of identity? You are always looking for family, friendship, and love. One person dies, and another one appears below. The protagonist is really loved by everyone. . . The poison occurred on the pig's feet on the way to the college.

My advice to the author is to end this book and start a new one

The first ten chapters I think are bloody, the next ten chapters I think the protagonist deserves to die, the last ten chapters I feel that the author has watched too many romance TV series nowadays, zz30, the poisonous hair can't stand the protagonist and joins the apprenticeship, the author's female channel is suitable for you, you are suitable for writing romance, although it is a bloody plot

, Fellow Taoists, Pindao tried the poison himself, and after reading Chapter 21, he couldn't stand the poison anymore. 💀💀💀💀

I really have to persevere in writing this book. I guess this book won't be popular when it's finished. After all, the protagonist's character will not be accepted by the mainstream. And I think the soul slave contract and the cold character of the protagonist are really a failure.

I was introduced to it by the introduction. I haven't read it yet. I only looked at the number of words and scores. There are more than 1 million words and only more than 10,000 fans. The author's perseverance deserves support. He should really let the author of Eunuch, who has tens of thousands of fans complain when it is just released and thinks it is not a high-quality product, come to learn from it.

I really can't stand it. Is this the protagonist of a wizard novel? Let's not mention that the character is incompatible with the subject matter. The introduction says that there is only strength in the heart, but I can't see the protagonist's mentality and behavior of being desperate to strengthen himself. The key is that this protagonist actually wants to fall in love? Does the author want to attract some special groups of people? This is the first time I have seen such a weird protagonist in a wizard novel, let alone the Virgin Mary issue that others have criticized.

After reading the public chapter, I found that the previous plot was jumpy, incoherent, and seemed a bit laborious. There was basically no sense of immersion for the time traveler (this is very confusing). However, I was still looking forward to reading it. I don't know if there will be any progress or improvement in the paid chapter. Now I am hesitating whether to subscribe or continue reading. Can any of you guys tell me about the following chapters?

What is the reason why the protagonist confirms that he has not been betrayed? Is it because three people were said to have died? He suspected that his horse had been exposed. But the problem is, the protagonist was woken up by being burned. He was a seriously injured person. Why did the enemy bother to set him on fire? Is it okay to just draw A? Capture a family of three, torture them, poison them, and cut off their heads to collect the reward. Even if you have to set a fire, at least you have to surround it... This explanation only shows that there is something wrong with the protagonist's brain.

Is this a time traveler with a golden finger? Why does it look like he is an aborigine?

There are a little more than 200 chapters in the main text volume. I can't stand it anymore! As the protagonist is a 12-3 child, there is no description of how dark and bloody he is, which I can understand! But once we got to the real illusion, everything was a mess. There is no conflict of interest, just killing someone for no apparent reason. It's gone dark, and the hole I gave you earlier was just buried casually? Maybe it was influenced by others, saying that the character of the protagonist was not good, and that he did not live up to the standard template of the dark wizard novel.

A wizard's apprentice is always schizophrenic. Split personality is very important to the plot? Shang Feng: Who is Ender so entangled in? His normal growth strength is not good? I can't stand it

I can't stand it anymore. It's so vulgar. This is actually just a follow-up to the trend, not what I really wanted to write. I feel like the main character in it is so stupid. Are the characters' IQs in the entire book at the level of imbeciles?

The protagonist is obviously in a high-tech world, and there must be something like that in novels. Not to mention that the protagonist has never read it since he was a child, so the starting point of the protagonist should be very high-minded. Think of a planet-destroying world like Dragon Ball or other comics and animations. No matter how you say it, it is better than the so-called wizard. Even if it is fake, but you have traveled through time, what else will you miss? So why should you be surprised at the kind of power that even modern technology cannons and airplanes can't match?

This book is the starting point. There is a similar book that is much better than this one. I forgot the name. The plots are almost the same. There is a time travel knight and then a wizard and a beautiful teacher. 😅