Sand Glyphs, I read it a long time ago. I remember that Shou seems to be transported by soul. The Shou in this world looks different from the Shou in time travel...
Xiaojia is such a responsible and conscientious baby, building such a good zoo from scratch. The tsundere is careful to avoid lightning (not the kind of superheroes nowadays who are generally tough-talking and soft-hearted). Juanjuan Xiaojia is so cute that I can do it! ! ! !
For being able to write about the subject of secret love in such a humanistic way, I first call this goddess "Jing" (Gong has a lot of suitors, which is a bit annoying)
Baby Heqing is really full of vitality, and a good baby who never gives up. The comment about Lu Lin, please save him, really made me cry. The overall article is flawed, but it is rare to realize that it is a child with subjective revenge. I love [hug] Baby Heqing. When I mention your happiness, I will shed tears first [cry] [cry]
The little grape is so cute, so adorable. The author has learned to copy melons, but the little grape is too cute [PIGEON][PIGEON][PIGEON] It could have been five stars, but one star will be deducted for the author
It is indeed an orthodox CP article, the double arrows are very thick. I thought it was very interesting when I was not sensible enough to read the pirated article, but now I really don't think it is right. [Pigeon] Changqing is a gentle and gentle beauty, even if it is a CP article, I would be willing to give Changqing five stars, but I don't know if the author knows that the character design of this article is very weak.
Cool article, okay, Jingzhe is really a man [come on]
In the early stage, it was written around Jingzhe. It perfectly showed the love and meaning of the protagonist Jingzhe. He is a very three-dimensional character. After the center of gravity shifted in the middle and later stages, it became less interesting. It had a sense of hydrology. In the later period, Jingzhe's female control attributes were too much described and the look and feel was very poor. There was also a lot of writing about middle-aged and elderly Tianli Ladybug. Some of the extra plots were a bit difficult for me to comment on [holding my chin] There is no article to read, so you can try reading it.
A very pure love book, Shen Yan is the perfect campus male idol! ! Delicate and excellent, I have been secretly in love with you for several years. Shen Yan, you must be happy [crying] [crying]
Omega, my baby water magpie... My baby bird... A completely beautiful article [hug] [hug] [hug] That... Water magpie, do you want me to send you a WeChat [hug]
Golden Toast, I really want to kiss you [Come on] [Come on]
Xue Qing's writing is very three-dimensional, and her mentality changes are very delicate. Overall, Xue Qing's portrayal is much better than Xing Jun's. Xue Qing's pain of being cut off when he was still in school, his short-term happiness when being adopted and subsequent confusion of thinking, and then his decisive breakup to achieve his own career. As a reader, you can quite feel his growth. So Xue Qing must be brilliant in the future [Come on]
In the early stage of tip's attack, people were a little uncomfortable watching the fans' and daddy's speeches. In the later stage, his personal growth was also very poor, and Xue Qing's career line was too perfunctory. There are some negative comments in the comment area. It is better to close the comments to see more. (Some people have dismissed Xing Jun as a sister. This is actually a false dismissal. It is a normal brother-sister relationship, and there is very little description of the relevant content.)
I re-read it and it's considered a Duan Shui CP novel. If you love dog and cat CP, you can read it. The plot is a bit average and the control will be a little bit uncomfortable.
There is a subtle sense of aggression in the body.
The article is very good, but the author's updates are really out of this world [Hold your cheek][Hold your cheek]
Part 2
Baby Xiaoxue is still too cute after repainting, so the rating was changed from 4 to 5.
A very delicious Holy Father Shou, Yuan Yuxue is completely from the owner?
The whole article portrays Xue very well, and many details depict and transform very delicately. Xue's inner changes and behaviors are very logical, and I like Xue's contrasting cuteness very much. She looks like a cold little girl, but in fact she loves sweets and is cute. Is Xue a complete baby? The content of the copy is very innovative and eye-catching. It is very absorbing but the writing style is a bit too simple.
There were some points that made me uncomfortable to watch. For example, after some of the supporting characters were rescued by me, they were like NPCs triggering dialogues. They did not help when facing dangerous situations, which made me feel angry. Secondly, the emotional line was too difficult to touch. Setting the attack as a background board was a very correct choice. Finally, the later chapters are quite watery.
Overall, this article is a must-see for anyone who likes Su Shou. Come and see us snow! ! ! !
A more orthodox CP article, Xiaoxue Baby, We Like You [Come on], the following extras are because I was so hurt by the author that I haven't read them yet, and the ending score alone seems a bit shocking? [Split]
Three stars are attached to the author. [Hug][Hug] Click on the directory to see that only twenty-five chapters of extra chapters have been updated for six months. This author was also in the underworld during the serialization period...
Both the plants and the shou are very cute, so use the background board (whisper bb, the shou also has a background board, I feel it is more to appease the plants)
I was really exhausted from reading the first thirty chapters. I'll read it whenever I'm interested in it again. For thirty chapters, three stars are a bit too much. It's too discouraging.
We wish the teacher is the sternest father of scumbag haha [hug] [hug] I wish the teacher is so cute when he rolls around when he misses home [hug] Attacker gives the arrow first, the little couple just crushes the shitty world so sweetly [hug]
Xin Xin is really cute and well-behaved. She really looks like a puppy. Let me give her a kiss and a hug. Overall, it's good. The biggest problem is that it's too long... It feels like it's too scattered.
One more thing: If you like sunny and cheerful puppies, please come and see our Xinxin! ! !
During the serialization, the focus was off-center. After the revision, some of the awkward words in the text were changed. Nan Xu's baby is also the only protagonist. The writing is okay. Nan Xu's personal charm is great. After reading it, I feel like Xu Bao has been covered with a layer of fog. I quite like this feeling. I think it's a blessing. It's not very good in the later stages, and it's a bit boring. It's best to finish this article as soon as possible, otherwise it will be very difficult to read the rest [Hold your cheek] because I only read it in a few days, and there is nothing attractive in the latter part [Hold your cheek] [Hold your cheek] Overall, I give it four stars [Hug]
Beautiful first-person article, our Cibao was really screwed over in his previous life [Cracked] A very sober baby [Hug] There was a bit of water at the end of the article [Empty bowl]
Generally speaking, it's okay, but there is a world attack that I find hard to comment on. I bought it but skipped it. I personally like the ancient world very much. It does feel a bit like sacrificing love in the end, but I really feel that the ending is amazing. It turns Fang Bao into a mature kitten. It's really delicious... [Hug] [hug] [hug] Leng Fang and we like you [hug]
Shou is the Proud Son of Heaven, Little Sun. Overall, it's not bad, but the author's writing style is really hard to compliment... If I had read it five years ago, I would have said it was good, but now it's five years later.
Jiang Jiang is really a good wife [poor]. He wears a lot of beautiful clothes, and you can tell he is a princess~ [hug] I feel very broken in the early stage, which makes people feel distressed. [Poor] He has low control and loves a wife. You can read it. The two attacks gave Jiang Jiang a lot of love, which is very easy to beat. The housewife demon Godangtang is coming! There are some descriptions of Gong's appearance, but there is no sense of gaze.
Pai: This author has a long-standing problem. There is a problem with the pacing and some typos. It is easy for impatient readers to read. Moreover, the statement that the cannon fodder is blocked on the first day of love is completely irrelevant to the main text (it is blocked but released within a few hours). Moreover, this seedy man often jumps around in the article and there is nothing to abuse him other than getting beaten twice [holding the cheek]
It's a sweet story, Shou'er is cute, but I don't like the overall plot... When Gong approached Shou at the beginning, he really wanted to do something [Pigeon]