A Few Rants About Male-Lead Romance 一点主攻文吐槽

1. 1 水 Narcissus's Redemption Countdown 水仙救赎倒计时 Wei Huo危火Danmei (BL)425k WordsCompleted [Main story complete; bonus chapters updating] ★ A narcissistic romance, updates promptly at 10 a.m. every day ★ The cover is meant to be viewed sideways ★ Blurb: “I know everything about who I was when I was young: my likes, my dislikes, my helplessness, my hardships, my breakdowns, and the pleasure I felt every time I lost myself while staring into the mirror.” Reader’s guide: 1. Shen Zhi is twenty-eight; Shen Jichuan is eighteen. Older Shen (Shen Zhi), top VS younger Shen (Shen Jichuan), 53.3kFavorites41.7kClicks/ch65.1kGifts

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   The writing style is okay, but the smell of Nana Gong Ning Gong is too strong. It's the same person who has been washing Narcissus Nana in the comment area. But why is there only a description of the clay sculpture in the whole text? It's so hard to guess.

2. 2 他 They're All Fighting to Call Me Daddy 他们都抢着叫我Daddy Eighty-Six Strokes八十六笔Danmei (BL)488k WordsCompleted Beta bodyguard gong & Alpha young master shou (The cover's character design isn't exclusive, and the designs in the bonus chapters differ from the main story.) Yu Zhi is a beautiful Beta. He used to be a mercenary, but now he's the bodyguard of Chi Yanxi, the eldest young master of the Chi family. The job is boring. Every day, he thinks about going back to the Delta. Until one day, Yu Zhi accidentally sees Chi Yanxi jerking off to a photo of him. “What are you doing?” The young Alpha freeze 22kFavorites17.2kClicks/ch14.3kGifts

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   The writing is mediocre, the plot is boring and mid-range, and the comments section is full of gk trying to train a dog. In the early stage, I was treating Shou as a dog. I was licked by Shou. It was so uncomfortable to watch because of the unequal feelings. I gave up halfway through it.

3. 3 妒 Jealous in Nature 妒烈成性[重生] Xing Shangxiang刑上香Danmei (BL)382k WordsCompleted [Complete. The audio drama of the same name is now available on Maoer FM (*^▽^*)] In his twenty years of life, the person the young marquis Wei Zan understood least was his archenemy, Shen Yuan. When he was at the height of his power, Shen Yuan envied him, resented him, and hated him. But when Wei Zan hit rock bottom and lost everything, Shen Yuan risked everything to save him. Wei Zan mocked him for going to such lengths. “Shen Yuan is jealous by nature. Some people are mine to torment.” Tha 204.1kFavorites222.3kClicks/ch149.8kGifts

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   Almost the entire book is about attack and pursuit, and the return arrow of attack is also very slow. I feel that the character of Shou is very contrived and pretentious, and there is a bit too much condensation. However, the author's writing style is good and the emotional line of attack and shou is quite sweet. I give it three stars.

4. 4 白 White Moonlight Guide [Quick Transmigration] 白月光指南[快穿] Hu Yang狐阳Danmei (BL)2.4M WordsCompleted Yun Jue was born in January, belonging to the Wood element that brings harm. Nothing ever went smoothly for him, and he was fated to die young. He was born to fulfill that fate, beset by one disaster after another, with illness and pain keeping him constantly on the brink of death. Even so, he held on until he was twenty-five. He thought his life was finally over, but who could have guessed that another stroke of fortune awaited him? 478: [Congratulations, chosen one! Your emotional intellige 52.5kFavorites72.9kClicks/ch250.2kGifts

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   I don't want to give it even one star. I looked at the character design and was disgusted by GK. The role of Shou in it is to highlight the heartthrob of the attack. Shou has a single arrow in the early stage and only returns the arrow in the later stage. There is not much love for Shou, and Shou is dispensable.

5. 5 重 Fixing Reborn Bugs [Quick Transmigration] 重生bug修复中[快穿] Neither Here Nor There不间不界Danmei (BL)826k WordsCompleted [The next story is expected to be "Keep Living by Watching Ads, Guide": a male lead in a Sentinel/Guide romance. If that sounds good, please add it to your favorites. Thank you!] The World Administration Code strictly prohibits unauthorized cases of being reborn. Fu Yaojin, Employee No. 01 of the Maintenance Department, is responsible for enforcing this rule. [World Three, Apocalypse: A top who is forced to use his looks to serve people x a powerful bottom 50.3kFavorites60.3kClicks/ch104.8kGifts

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   Although it is very sweet to have both attack and shou in the love line, I personally can't stand the weak attack and strong suffering and the weak attack in bed, so I can only give three stars.

6. 6 黑 Rules for Playing the Dark Moonlight Top 黑月光攻扮演法则 Chi Haiyun池海筠Danmei (BL)593k WordsCompleted World-hopping anthology, top-focused. The first four worlds are complete. Original title: How the Black Moonlight Ruins the Protagonist There is a department in the Space-Time Administration whose members specialize in playing kind, beloved white moons in small worlds. They cleanse the tragic protagonists’ dark hearts and guide them toward a better path. When the time comes, they must also die, becoming the one pure, white jasmine flower whose loss will remain an eternal regret. It may seem l 45.7kFavorites44kClicks/ch29.5kGifts

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   The whole unit article is almost full of paranoid shou and inferiority complex. In the early stage, shou loves to attack with a single arrow to the point of death and only returns the arrow in the later stage. The extras on the penultimate interface are even more ugly. The shou from the parallel world dreams of interacting with the original world and immediately falls in love with him. When the parallel world shou sees the original world shou who has traveled through time, he frantically woos him. The classic Shou is jealous of himself just to prove that Gong is more charming. The most disgusting thing is that Gong from the original world hugs Shou from the parallel world while looking at Shou from the original world and says that he will comfort Shou from the parallel world but will not have any intimate behavior with him. Chj Did you write the plot with your feet?

7. 7 捡 After Picking Up the Rival Boss, It Smells Really Good 捡到情敌大佬后真香了 Red Blossoms Flying Past the Painted Tower画楼飞红Danmei (BL)398k WordsCompleted [Complete!! My next book, Playing A, is also complete. Rebel army captain gong × scheming city lord shou, double-A age gap romance, Smith couple. I’m begging for your support!] There were two things Qin Gou found hardest to talk about in his life. One was being kidnapped as a child and losing his core, leaving him without a mental sea and branded a useless cripple by his family. The other was having the white moonlight he treasured stolen from him, then being exiled to a remote island amid eve 27.5kFavorites25.3kClicks/ch8.3kGifts

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   The plot is boring and ugly and the attack is weak

8. 8 影 The Film Emperor Doesn’t Want a Shura Field 影帝他不想修罗场 Chi Haiyun池海筠Danmei (BL)352k WordsCompleted Top: actor × bottom: CEO / Fu Yanrong × Song Linyu Fu Yanrong entered the entertainment industry at seventeen and won the Silver Bear for Best Actor at the Berlin Film Festival on his debut. At twenty-two, he took home the Palme d’Or at Cannes. At twenty-six, he was nominated for an Academy Award. His life seemed to go smoothly at every turn. With stunning looks, top-tier acting skills, and incredible luck, he was adored by countless people, even though his temperament was unpredictable, willfu 24.9kFavorites24.4kClicks/ch20.1kGifts

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   The author writes that Gong loves Shou very much, but Gong's behavior can't tell how much he loves Shou. It feels like Gong is enjoying Shou's love for him while using Shou's love for him to torture Shou. In the extra story, Gong directly admits that he doesn't love Shou that much. It's so ugly.

9. 9 狗 The Scum Top from a Melodramatic Novel Awakens His Powers and Gets a Happy Ending [Quick Transmigration] 狗血文渣攻觉醒异能后HE[快穿] Baby Shark奶鲨Danmei (BL)201k WordsCompleted [Three worlds in total, and in all of them both leads are pure in body and mind] [Three short, slightly bittersweet-sweet treats 🍪 Feel free to pick and choose what you read. Hope you enjoy! "V"] There is a kind of story known as melodrama. And scum tops, perennial fixtures in melodramatic stories, often mistake someone else for their moonlight, find themselves face-to-face with the real thing while looking for a substitute, get into bed with the wrong person while drunk, and end up in the crem 15.6kFavorites13.6kClicks/ch6.5kGifts

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   I only watched the first unit and it was so ugly. The author's writing style is also average. He portrays Gong as both wanting and wanting. He says he loves Shou but regards Shou's efforts as charity. He feels that Shou looks down on him and at the same time he naturally hates Shou. There is a class gap with his unequal status. Shou is even weirder. As a sponsor, he is humble in front of Gong and is not long-mouthed and cannot explain. He only repeats himself over and over again that he loves Gong. The plot is driven by the supporting character's words. Gong Shou constantly misunderstands the opponent

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