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1 我 I Just Don't Want to Be a Magician Beilou Under the MoonNo CP593k WordsCompleted 46.5kFavorites104.8kClicks/ch41.1kGifts

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The setting is rough, the characters and events are too simple, and the pace is sometimes a bit rushed. In the male protagonist's article, in order to show the "rebellion" of the female characters, the author put more effort into shaping the parts of them that conform to stereotypes. I was numb. It's clear that the author's understanding of what women can be like needs to be improved.

2 咱 Is Our World of Cultivation All Filled with Stuff? Where to GoRomance742k WordsCompleted 52.6kFavorites42kClicks/ch46.4kGifts

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Conventional story background, tried to play some tricks on the characters but failed. The writing is really poor, the pace is slow, and the storyline is simple. The author is obviously a novice and has watched too many talk shows.

3 我 I’ll Be Empress! Who’s Against It, and Who’s in Favor? Hate SummerNo CP5.1M WordsCompleted 19.9kFavorites42kClicks/ch40.4kGifts

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The writing is mediocre and there are quite a few typos, to the point where it affects reading. But the author takes this matter very seriously, and even after a few years, someone caught the bug and still revised it. I admire this spirit very much. She will succeed.

4 改 Rewrite the Ending of Tuanjie Comics World RabbitNo CP779k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites15kClicks/ch14.1kGifts

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The setting is quite good, and I try to create a big world view, but the writing is not strong enough, whether it is character creation, background setting or the story itself.

5 大 Eat a Chicken [Hologram] Mini DingRomance313k WordsCompleted 14.6kFavorites48.8kClicks/ch10.6kGifts

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It's full of stereotypes, and even though the book is from a few years ago, it still affects reading.

6 星 The Strongest Player in the Stars [Hologram] Vast SeaRomance764k WordsCompleted 13.1kFavorites25.6kClicks/ch19kGifts

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The pacing is a bit off, and the characters are flat

7 无 Shameless [Interstellar] FengdiRomance971k WordsCompleted 7.2kFavorites14.5kClicks/ch2.2kGifts

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The author's language expression ability is somewhat lacking. She should have relatively complete things in her mind, but words are not a tool that she can control well.

8 狂 Wild Widow, Going Crazy Online The Beginning of the CloudsRomance1.0M WordsCompleted 131.3kFavorites216.8kClicks/ch405.5kGifts

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There is something good about it, a lawless heroine, a moral person. The setting of the story is an empire on the road to equality between men and women, with fantasy elements. Although there is no high-level strategy and no broad struggle for hegemony, the heroine's life is relatively unsatisfactory. The problem is that female words are used by men. It is equivalent to saying that men are the ones who are physically strong, take the initiative, and can do things outside the family, and women are the ones who are weak, passive, and stuck in the family. Doesn't this still emphasize gender stereotypes? Can you really connect the good stuff with female titles? Are you using the female pronoun to charm the guy? Isn't this article meant to break these remaining feudal dross? I feel that the author is also very contradictory. On the one hand, he is trying to create something subversive, but on the other hand, he is still bound by some stereotypes between the lines, which are revealed unconsciously. Feel sorry for her.