First editor: 4 stars (I've only read the first few chapters so far)
Setting: There are deliberately created conditions for the female protagonist to come into contact with the male protagonist. If you think about it carefully, it is not very reasonable (a small deduction), but the writing is still smooth, and it is okay to read a little sweet story if you lose your mind.
In terms of style: it's a sweet story. Yeah, both the male and female protagonists are cute. The heroine has a cold face and is cute, but she is a master of fighting ghosts and a low hand in life. The male protagonist has a cute puppy.
3 Stars
Editor 1: Just read the first two chapters! The writing is so contagious!
Keep checking it out when you have time!
Editor 2: I gave up after reading Chapter 25. I feel that the pace is a bit slow... The setting is not consistent enough and getting along with the relevant people is a bit confusing [Loading] I feel that the painter is a bit too heroine-centric, and no one else has their own thing to do, as if they were born to exaggerate the heroine. (For example: In the setting of a large sect (repeatedly exaggerated is the first), the sect leaders and elders are too idle. Even if the master is really good, the heroine should not have the elders mobilize the army when encountering a small problem. Analogy to a university, no matter how powerful the professor is, he accepts a disciple, she and Lu After the dispute between school AB, several teachers from B visited with a few students and apologized. It was impossible for the principal, party committee secretary, and other people to meet with the teachers of school B. Moreover, according to the frequency of friction in the cultivation world, the leader should not do other things...) In short, it makes people feel inconsistent. . I don't know if this setting will be made more logical later...
I also don't like to repeatedly describe the reactions of my fellow sects. I feel that my fellow sects have nothing else to do and only focus on the senior sister. Larger sects that are relatively standardized must have something to do each year. At most, the heroine will sigh like a senior sect. Other students, especially those who have advanced in cultivation, mainly do their own things. How can these senior brothers and sisters deliberately get together to discuss the heroine. There are also too many quarrels in the article to discuss the heroine (also because of these reactions, the pace is slow, and there is no progress in several consecutive chapters).
Five stars!
"Walk, doubt, fear, obey, give up thinking, and deliver. Just leave everything to others. As long as you are obedient, gentle, and tolerant, the world will love you."
The story of a girl who was taught to be submissive, struggling and hesitating.
The human heart is like this, fragile, repetitive, and easily broken, but also strong, determined, and pliable.
The writing is sophisticated, the story is short, and there are not many settings, but it is very touching [crying] [crying]
4 Stars
Ahhhhhhhhh why the recommendation I wrote before was deleted by mistake.
To add to this (it's a bit long, I may not remember it accurately): the heroine crushes everything and turns all living beings upside down (intelligence and appearance) with a bug-level appearance (already a bit like magic). It's a casual attitude that you can give it a try when it comes to male partners ~ Great! (The heroine baby controls everything!)
Deducting points from Goldfinger is a bit too confusing, making difficulties not difficult at all. Personally I like it better: enemies/friends all have gold fingers of similar weight, or the environment mechanism is comparable to gold fingers, and the protagonist meets his opponent in a confrontation.
4 Stars
Pig accommodation is so appropriate! The plot rhythm is also good [Star Eyes] [Comparison of Hearts] [Comparison of Hearts]
Convert between big head and small head [yellow heart]
But the later part is a bit too sadistic. I can't bear to watch it. I heard it's a bit unfinished.
3.5 Stars!
It's interesting and easy to read
But I feel that the protagonist accepts everything too easily (and is lucky). I always feel that there is a slightly more resourceful bad guy who will fall into trouble, so I didn't finish reading.
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