By Chapter 35, the heroine seemed to have an inside story. She said she couldn't stand the hero's dishonesty, and the female supporting characters competed for favors. In the end, nothing happened. The whole article was just a riddle. People couldn't understand it and it made people angry.
As the old saying goes, the mouth is sour and sweet, but if you have bad teeth, you can no longer bear the sour taste. Chapter 1, when everyone looked down on the heroine, already made me feel angry.
Not bad, not bad, the heroine is serious and independent, the hero respects others, the character creation is reasonable, the heroine's parents are not one-sided villains, they are very realistic.
The male and female protagonists don't deduct 1 star every time they do it in bed. It's easy to get hurt in the bathroom for the first time!
Why give the heroine an assistant whose brain seems to be underdeveloped? Is she particularly important? The entire plot fell apart at once when the assistant suddenly
The male protagonist said that he likes the female protagonist to be free and at ease, but even though he was given a divorce agreement, the female protagonist has always compromised. The male protagonist's living situation has no place to compromise with the female protagonist; the man who sexually harassed the female protagonist before has nothing to do and is firmly in a high position.
Too ancient! Moreover, the personality is suspended. The CEO with assets worth hundreds of billions has only one driver at home. Does his wife need to take a taxi when going out? Aren't you afraid of wearing out Madam's lambskin soles after a long walk from the manor to the intersection?
The logic doesn't make sense. Earlier, the heroine sent the maid back because she was flattering her. Later, when the maid said something wrong when talking to her, she explained it properly?
Last year, it was so-so. The setting of rebirth was almost useless. The part where the brother, sister-in-law and nephew seized power later was... Exaggerated and childish.
There are bugs all over the place, and the voting is sometimes 3, sometimes 2. I just said that same-sex people are not allowed to vote, but the result is later
Chinese goalkeeper in the Premier League, relaxed and funny, the main text is 5 points, the protagonist in the extra story turned into a slut and the tool man did not beat -2 is my last mercy
2 Abandon the position of emperor and queen mother using "feng"? Who sealed it? The general made the prince emperor? Is he crazy? The slave can't understand what he's saying at all? Who are you talking about your mother to? Is it the eldest sister or the mother?
This male protagonist is simply the worst in Jinjiang. He thought he had paid a lot for the 5-year relationship, but he ended up enjoying the mental and physical services of the female protagonist and still thought she was expecting a breakup fee. It's disgusting??
He became the male lead because the female lead chose him because he wanted to eat shit, otherwise he would have received a box lunch early.
Has the author written male videos before? I am used to describing the appearance of the heroine and the supporting character in unnecessary places. Who cares whether the supporting character has soft hands when talking to her brother? ? No one in the article has any brains. The father of the main and supporting characters is too disgusting to be offline. The ancient novels are interspersed with modern terms: fingerprints, congenital conception, etc.
It was interesting in the early stage, but the emotional line was too abrupt. In the later stage, the progress bar was quickly drawn like an outline, which was terrible.
1. Noctua restricted the male protagonist's use of spells when he was only about two years old. He could not use the spells after he violated the rules. He also gave many psychological hints after that. Is this the principal's education method or the old orange? 2. Because it might be Hui who made his wife sick, he hated and even cold-violated Xiao Hui, who was three or four years old. He was a huge character. 3. Facing the savior who saved his beloved wife's life, Shi'er not only failed to educate him seriously, but also tried to trick the three- or four-year-old male protagonist into selling destructive spells on the black market. It's a bit too dirty!
The writing is very good, but as long as Dazai is included, the whole book feels damp and wet. Considering the appearance of a series of male characters such as the Internet King's tutor, choosing Jie as the male protagonist is a bit undominant?
The first few live broadcasts were quite interesting. After the spiritual energy was revived, he started teaching everyone to cultivate immortality. I didn't like it.
The number of words in the first part of the extra chapter is too small, and the golden finger is a bit big. The points you pay and the rewards you get are almost the same, and it feels like all your hard work was in vain.
Really. A slap in the face is a fun story, not counting the male protagonist. The plot is a bit suspended and the golden finger is too wide. The words are a bit repetitive. Each time the face is slapped, the expression is dark, and the swear words are insulting. The pace is slow but the total number of words is small, but the slap in the face is really fun, and Obi Kabuto really slaps him in the face.
The article is quite thoughtful, but I don't know if it's the writing or the narration. It's too flat, the writing doesn't make me feel happy, the climax doesn't stir my emotions, and I feel choked.
The plot was so exciting that it was very fantasy, and the lady was called sir. After half a chapter, I found out that this person was a woman through the personal pronoun "she".
The writing is very good. The heroine is self-reliant and does not rely on men. Every step is taken step by step by the heroine relying on her smart brain. The only drawback is that there are some anachronistic and relaxed Internet terms such as little brother, moma, and love, but it seems understandable due to the writing time.
It's fun and entertaining, but I can't understand Werewolf, and I can't understand variety shows and games, so it's a bit unclear, and it's too short! I still wanted to see the male protagonist killing everyone, but it's over!
This is good. The relationship between the male and female protagonists' concepts is well written and they understand each other well. There is echo between the two protagonists. The career line of the female protagonist is also very good. However, it is not clear how the male protagonist fell in love with the female protagonist. Feel like you suddenly confessed?
The princess is female, right? The chapter describes holding the heroine's little hand and squeezing the heroine's snow-white and smooth little face, which really looks like a lily. Moreover, the heroine is described as being slender and practicing martial arts. How come she still has small hands compared to a younger princess? She is tall, has small hands and feet, and has a small face. It is like a cone. There are a lot of typos. I call Princess Changping Princess Weiyang, and I call the Imperial Concubine Queen Mother.
The article is very creative. The heroine looks strong and doesn't care about others, but there are always people jumping from the side and feeling that the heroine is weak; after every live broadcast, people related to the case will get the heroine's real information from the platform to visit her or send her a letter. This plot is not good, and it will only make people feel creepy when their personal information is leaked; case 1 has a competitive male anchor who has never cheated. The heroine then regretted it, it was too fake, she smoothly realized her mistake without even arrogating words; one case was even a mystery, and the specific murderer was not found in reality. The case was still controversial, so it was turned into a game for entertainment, and the ending of the game could even determine whether the investigation of the case would be restarted. It was so impossible.
Entering a V and abandoning it, the two male protagonists and the female protagonist broke up in a hurry, and the female protagonist and the male protagonist received their certificate in an even more hasty manner, a bit like rushing to catch up. The heroine's name is Ruan Li. I really doubt that her parents are hopelessly illiterate. Who would give their child a pear? I won't give pears as holiday gifts because the sound doesn't sound nice, even if I call her apple.
What does "not touching other people's women" mean? Even if you say you won't interfere with other people's emotions? The heroine is a toilet paper, glasses cloth or other objects, do you still share yours with mine? It's just a routine type of modern Chinese writing
3 Abandoned. Part of his soul penetrated the heroine's body and wrote a blank check, asking the heroine to conquer him. In the end, he couldn't give any information or strategies. He also asked the heroine to help him check this and that. Are you really acting like a party to your mother?