I like it very much, that kind of light nourishing straight man feeling is so exciting. It is almost invisible that it is a self-propelled succubus in human form. It's obviously not a social animal, but it tastes like a social animal. I like it.
The cuteness makes people burst with happiness——
The rare eldest male mother's attack special attack, the two attributes are so well integrated, and at the same time, she also has the actions and beliefs of a model of male virtue, which is very delicious. It's also very interesting and exciting. You won't show off when you do it. It has maximum mobility, full experience of imprisoning people and is a cute treasure.
Moreover, the love between the two babies is so indestructible and logical. The elements are so complete that there are even childhood sweethearts, masters and servants, happy enemies, etc. The emotional line is cute and delicious, and both parties love it very much.
The article is relatively short, and the teacher said it is an outline article, but the content is comprehensive, the ideas are complete, and the writing is good. The viewing process is very smooth, the interesting points and some twists and turns are well integrated, the laughter and tears are well shaped, and the sand sculpture feeling is great.
The description sometimes feels a bit cumbersome and the writing style is not that amazing.
But the interaction between Gong and Shou is very cute. I really like the fact that Gong may seem like a control freak in the eyes of others, but Shou is miserable in love, and his love brain is infinitely beautifying. Both parties are very talented in love, which makes this story that is supposed to be serious and gloomy become lively.
The descriptions of some supporting characters are also very attractive. The arcs of the characters are moderate, and the description of the world is very complete. The main characters have their own shining lights and imperfections, which are very vivid.
I just hope that Teacher Cyan Wings' writing style can go further.
Teacher Socks wrote that cookies are also good cookies and delicious. Gong has a strong sense of paternalism, he is a long-haired man, and he likes cold-blooded animals like snakes. Occasionally, in front of Shou, he is a little bit like a dog, which is cute. She is very well-protected, reassuring, and warm. She has always been a treasure with her own pursuits and ideas. Moreover, the main text is in the style of futuristic science fiction, and the side story is actually in the country style. This is great, I like it.
The teacher's writing style is very sophisticated, and it's a great experience to watch. Each of the five small units is very attractive, and there is something special about the interactions between each young couple. It can satisfy everyone's wishes better than Kinder Wonderful Eggs.
Moreover, the little reveal episode left at the end is very surprising, and it feels unexpected and reasonable. Great little idea
The sense of youth is very strong, but sometimes it is too strong. I always feel uncomfortable when I see young couples falling in love, and the relationship line may make people feel a little unnatural.
A very complete career line and emotional line promote growth. The teacher spent quite a long time writing the article, and he has a good foundation in writing skills and so on. The article is very complete and the reading comfort level is not bad. The various supporting characters are not too shocking, and the overall reading experience is good.
This is a cute little cookie, loved by Guaiguai, soft and cute, it is indeed from Little Lizi. The attack is also quite shocking. Because I am a beta, I am afraid that I will not be satisfied, so I have a strong sense of service and go to the pearl... Is this something I can see? Anyway, this is it, there is almost no need to say more.
It is a very comfortable article. I understand Teacher Qingfeng's monster series. It really seems that there is a group of monsters in the world who live in peace with humans. They are ordinary and indifferent. Many of the descriptions in the article are very beautiful, which makes people feel calm when they read them. The ballad "Question", which has been created for the second time, can be listened to. It is very gentle and has a feeling of breaking the dimensional wall.
As a white snake that became a spirit after the founding of the People's Republic of China, Xiaobai is cute enough, hahahahaha, and a very bold snake who pursues love.
Make up for the comments I made after reading it
In the impetuous summer of 2021, after reading this article, I left a mark on my feelings. My Chinese skills are not good, so don't laugh at the weird metaphors, haha.
The love between Mr. Fu and Zhang Zhongbao makes people feel like the spring breeze blowing through Sijiu City, blowing away the irritability caused by the current Jinjiang. That kind of pure, sincere and natural love is more moving than the inexplicable blood and twists and turns, at least in my heart. Some people would like to weigh their love with a scale, but they think it is not necessary. Everyone behaves differently when facing their lover. If Xu Axian's way is as eye-catching as him, then Mr. Fu's should be like Begonia in the garden, which doesn't look so proactive. But it will emit fragrance and wrap Xu Axian carefully. It's a strange metaphor. In short, Mr. Fu's love may not be as good as Ah Xian's, but the love they have for each other is definitely the most sincere and unreserved. I hope some readers who are used to eating fast food can take a closer look.
Of course, this article is touching in more ways than just Fu Bai's love.
Love, Mr. Beihai throughout the text, descriptions full of real life shadows, many interesting people and monsters, the touching and tenderness of those two words... There are many, many more.
I feel that the author's great writing has carefully written tenderness and romance into the text, so that we have words that move us.
"The love in the world will never waver." "There is an echo when the stars fall to the ground, and the depth of time is my hometown."
Everyone may be confused and have sadness and setbacks caused by reality, but young men Keswell, Anping and Gu Zhi all use their stories to teach us how to do it and move forward.
There are regrettable stories, but happy ending stories can also be created.
This story that seems to have a fantasy color but cannot be separated from the traces of reality makes people begin to look forward to whether there will be their shadow in reality, and then start to recall that period of childhood. The Beiguo Special Train and Xiaonanshan are really like childhood dreams.
In the end, no matter what the ending of Mr. Beihai is, it is romantic enough and worthy of the man who brought us countless touches.
Thank you for the comfort this wonderful world brings.
It's a very cute article. The brother and brother are very human, and both of them have the feeling of being vaguely male ghosts. The brother's personality is also very full, and he is a reliable elder brother with a very young age. The younger brother is also well-raised, and his moral quality is very high, just like a puppy [poor]. It's really hard to say no to pseudo-orthopedics. The whole emotional line was handled very comfortably, and the CP party was ecstatic. Moreover, the author's writing skills are also very solid, the ancient flavor is very strong, and the occasional small plot is not out of place. The writing is also very good, and the dialogue is cute in a small theater
The overall setting is actually very cute. In the beginning, they can barely be considered an old married couple without knowing it. The senior brother who sews school uniforms and makes clothes for his junior brother conscientiously has a wonderful human touch, and then there is a cold-faced feeling. It is not a cold-faced cuteness (no). The junior brother is also very cute, a straight-ball puppy, and a very good baby.
But the author's narrative description can be practiced a little more. I'm not used to it in the early stage. It feels too bland and erratic. If it's ugly, it's a bit like a running account ()
It is full of flavor, and I feel that the author is very good at raising children online. Bo (Gong)'s character is full of character, but it's not overdone, and he won't really transform from daddy or papa into a cyber daddy, so his interactions with Xiao Jing are very satisfying. When reading the article, what impressed me most was that the author discussed some more sensitive female topics. The author handles this kind of place where it is easiest to see ghosts and monsters very well, and the expressions of both the attacker and the recipient are also very good. My favorable impression of the entire article has increased. And regarding the career point, although there is no extensive description, it can be seen that the author's intention and homework have made the article and world view more complete.
And there are many XP points that match the author and teacher, such as age, body shape difference, and affectionate and forbearing (?), Which is particularly cool. Although it is the Jinjiang version, it is still very cool.
Finally, there is the first extra chapter, which is really a bit superfluous. Although the basic core setting has changed, and the actions of Bo and Xiaojing in this section have undergone some corresponding changes, it still makes people feel that it is too complicated when looking at the back. Moreover, the serialization period lasted for a long time, making people tired of watching it. I hope the teacher can keep a good rhythm in his future writings.
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