A Fussy Reader's Recent Reading Log: Ten Thousand Reads and Counting 千本阅读量的杂食姐近期扫文记录

1 禅 The Zenin Clan and Their Special Horse-Racing Techniques 禅院与特殊的竞马技巧 Mechanical Squirrel机械松鼠Romance360k WordsCompleted 25.5kFavorites43.5kClicks/ch15.2kGifts

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I think it is the best-looking book among the Mechanical Squirrel's Curse Return trilogy. If you want to rank it, Zenyuan > Ten Thousand Fire Returns One > Scientific Curse Tools. The plot is smooth, and the emotional line is subtle yet contagious. The heroine, who has a vision of the future, is always right, and Shi'er, who has power but is confused about the future, move forward together, and they have the power to break free from the prison and change their destiny. This book is also one of the rare Mechanical Squirrel books that has a good ending. Although it is not completely disappointing, the sad ending in the original work will never happen again. What I like most about the article is the change of Zenin Naoya. He finally learns to face the power of the weak. The description of the character's cognitive changes is very natural and does not seem to be mechanical. It is really a highlight.

2 暗 Anbu Biographies 暗部列传 Mechanical Squirrel机械松鼠Danmei (BL)544k WordsCompleted 18kFavorites50.5kClicks/ch12.1kGifts

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Although this article ranks among the best among the Naruto fanfics on the site in terms of writing and plot, the second half is really unsatisfactory. The description of Obito made me feel that the author and I have too different understandings of this character, which is not interesting, so I regret to give it a three-point rating. After seven years of traveling as a divine examiner in a different world, the protagonist returns with advanced technology and ideological theories from a foreign country to build a ninja community of destiny, get revenge, and gain a love. Essentially, it is a story about a college student returning to his village to start a business, but there are some twists and turns in the middle. Points are deducted because the second half is too rushed (an old problem of mechanical squirrels), and there is no Black Zetsu or White Zetsu Kaguya in this world. The final BOSS is Obito and the Time Travel Army. Speaking of Obito, I wrote a separate paragraph, but I have to complain that even with Mr. Naru's skills, it took more than ten episodes to succeed in the mouth-breaking Obito. This book can actually be completed in two chapters. In fact, based on my understanding of Obito's role, it is unrealistic that he would cooperate with the Time Travel Army. For Obito, when he saw Kakashi had to kill Nohara Rin, his worldview had completely collapsed and was quickly rebuilt: people who love each other should not kill each other. If the world allows or even forces people to do this, then the world is wrong, so he denies this life. In the world built by Infinite Tsukuyomi, people have no desire or ability to stir up disputes, so it can become the other world Obito hopes for. The background of Obito's character is despair and a deep pessimism about the world. If we just start over, the underlying logic of this world will not change. No matter how many times we go back, people will eventually take up arms and fight each other. This solution was unacceptable to him. In the original work, the reason why he switched sides was basically because he knew that he was being used and his ideal was no longer achievable + the protagonist team proved his strength + Naruto's continuous acceptance and persuasion + the author's headbutt. In this article, the first item is not included, the second item is omitted, and the performer of the third item is the protagonist, but in a nutshell, the words are to believe in the wisdom of future generations. In this article, Obito even saw that the efforts of the protagonist and thousands of people similar to the protagonist never succeeded. It's hard to imagine how he reversed course within two chapters. Did it really all depend on the author's headbutt? This method of handling is inappropriate and disrespectful for a character who is so determined that he killed his mentor and master's wife, created the Blood Mist, and started a ninja war (I don't mean to say that what he did was right). For personal reasons, I can only give this article three points. If there are people who have a different understanding of the characters than I do, and people who accept other mechanical squirrel articles well, this story about love and peace can still be read as a bedtime reading.

3 佛 Buddha Says 佛说 AyeAyeCaptainDanmei (BL)283k WordsCompleted 180.5kFavorites97.7kClicks/ch99kGifts

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Nice free article. The writing style is very gorgeous, the metaphors are very brilliant, and some places are so beautiful that they are almost ostentatious (a compliment). For a few seconds, I felt like I was reading South American literature. The world view constructed by the author is very innovative, and the perspective of exploring love, life and intimacy is also very unique. It can be seen that the author has read a lot and has his own thinking. It is a pity that this kind of discussion fails when it is placed on the emotional line of the protagonist himself, and is even inversely proportional to the excitement of the novel. The deeper the love, the uglier the novel becomes. Moreover, the author may have gotten too excited in the second half, and the descriptions in some places were too intense and seemed artificial. If you want to have a good reading experience, it is recommended to master the timing of exiting.

4 二 Half a Spoiler 二分之一剧透 Tianze Shiruò天泽时若Romance657k WordsCompleted 164.1kFavorites280.1kClicks/ch315.3kGifts

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A very nice story about a heroine. Amasawa Shiruo's article is like this. It does not try to preach anything, but directly shows everyone what a gender-equal world should look like. It is very comfortable, very satisfying, and very reassuring. On this basis, the strategy part of this book is even more pleasing to the eye. She is one of the few authors in Jinjiang, or indeed on all online writing platforms, who truly has ancient political sensitivity. If Jinjiang Wendu can reach this level, I will smile. The only problem is still that it's too short. It's finished after finishing the story of East, West, North, and South. I'm really begging you if you can come back and write another 100-chapter plot about governing the country.

5 史 Raising a Husband in Prehistoric Times 史前养夫记 Jue Jue决绝Danmei (BL)655k WordsCompleted 158.9kFavorites426.7kClicks/ch231.3kGifts

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In fact, I haven't read Juejue's other books because her writing style is really simple. But the background of this novel is in perfect harmony with this rustic feeling, making it almost immersive. In her writing, you feel that the protagonist should sleep in a cave or drink blood. From a certain point of view, they complement each other. The effect may not be so good if it is written by another person. The emotional lines of attacking and receiving are relatively convincing, and the career line of developing the community is also well written. One star is deducted because 1. Some places are slightly overwritten, and the writing is not so smooth when closing the pen. 2. In the later stage, the combat power system collapsed after going to the Beast Temple, and the plot fell into a rut. I felt like I had seen the same face-slapping template in a small book. But overall it's pretty smooth, with no particularly prominent flaws. You can take a look when you have time.

6 豪 The Bystander Butler in a Rich Family’s Melodramatic Romance 豪门狗血文里的路人管家 Chang'an by Day长安如昼Romance598k WordsCompleted 118.9kFavorites160.1kClicks/ch73.2kGifts

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The trick lies in the writing. What's worth extra points is that there is finally an article that doesn't describe the housekeeper as a vase. However, common sense does not prevent this from being a very mysterious novel. There were several parts that made me frown while reading this article, but in the end I couldn't help but read on. After being away for a while, I picked up the book again. After reading it for five seconds, I shook my head, wondering how I could have read half of this thing. After breaking away from the author's logic and plot, I found it a bit hard to swallow, but if I read it in one breath, I might just book it all. It's very mysterious, and those who are interested in copywriting can give it a try. Since an ugly man can win over a handsome guy with a sense of atmosphere, this article can probably be called a good article with a sense of atmosphere.

7 和 After Divorcing the Zerg General by Contract 和虫族上将协议离婚后 Peach and Plum Speak for Themselves桃李自言Danmei (BL)537k WordsCompleted 77.2kFavorites113.3kClicks/ch73.7kGifts

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It is rare in Zerg literature to depict the Zerg's inhumanity. The protagonist's emotional needs as a human being have not been met in this marriage (although there are also reasons for this person not to talk), and considering the plot, he decided to file for divorce after trying. The highlight of this book lies in the sour pull between the two, and the story of how the harder she works, the more she becomes a spoiled wife after she decides to pursue her husband. The main reason is that in the early stage, he was very career-minded in his eyes, but in the later stage, he showed his wifely side and became particularly humorous. The author must have read many short books, and Shou's words and deeds really made me read many classic posts. The second half is actually a bit of a stretch for its own sake, but it can still be watched for its funny feudal flavor. People who like i feudal i hell jokes can give it a try. The possible lightning points are that 1. Two people are raising a cub, but this cub may not be so likable (I personally think it is okay, but my friend can't stand it) 2. This cub is trying to reverse the course of history (meaning that he raises bandits to respect himself and wants to seize/power to become the great emperor) (this is actually a plus point for me, because it is really unreliable to achieve equal power in a hierarchical society like the Zerg), and the strategy part is very nonsense and cannot withstand any careful consideration. Everyone can decide whether to stay or go.

8 三 Three Sentences, and the Protagonist Shou Abandons His Evil Disciple for Me 三句话，主角受为我抛弃孽徒 Pluck Peaches and Ask for Wine折桃问酒Danmei (BL)680k WordsCompleted 45.9kFavorites46.7kClicks/ch22.1kGifts

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The core plot has been clearly written in the copy. In short, it is a sweet and sour love story in which the traveler and the reborn shou conceal each other. The original book is part of their play (it does not mean that the original book is innocent). Although the pulling part is often inexplicable. When it is sweet, it is like industrial saccharin, and when it is sour, it is more deliberate. It is inexplicable to be loved after being reborn, and it is also confusing to love through the book. It is not clear where the obsession of the original book comes from, but everything in this book can be explained by the fact that it is an ancient bloody novel. Okay, then I can only obey, and people who like this can watch it. The only thing I want to ask is why, as a Mahayana monk, his body is as fragile as paper? It's obvious that monks can repair cracks in the sky with just one hand, so why is it still so useless in some places? I started scratching my head when I saw that the villain would be overwhelmed by the memory of the apocalypse. I closed my eyes when I saw that Gong's junior sister is a powerful alchemist and can't cure the elixir of spring with all kinds of heavenly materials and earthly treasures. I even fainted when I saw that Gong would even catch a cold and fever after being exposed to the rain. The setting of cultivation has also become a part of the play of this article, and the sense of existence is almost zero. If the author hadn't deliberately emphasized it from time to time, I would have almost forgotten that there is such a thing. To be honest, this is the most important reason why people abandon writing in this book.

9 掺 A Manual for Self-Rescue by a Diluted True Liquor 掺水真酒自救手册 Fujino藤野Danmei (BL)841k WordsCompleted 43.9kFavorites86.4kClicks/ch72.4kGifts

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A free article worth reading, cp is the original protagonist of Ogihara Kenji x. The character of the protagonist is very three-dimensional, and the emotional scenes and logical lines can be self-explanatory, which shows the sincerity of the author. As a free article, there is basically nothing to criticize. To put it bluntly, since the protagonist is a member of the organization with a very high status and knows the plot, many things are handled by the protagonist. And due to space limitations (I really feel that only 800,000 is too little for a novel that spans seven years), many supporting characters have to be omitted. Therefore, there will be a so-called "stealing the highlight of the original character" situation. If you mind this, please don't enter.

10 出 The Tale of Leaving the Golden House 出金屋记 Yu Jing Peng Xiang御井烹香Romance351k WordsCompleted 25.7kFavorites90.9kClicks/ch4.5kGifts

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Beautiful, really beautiful. In her new life, Chen Ajiao has the king's love, a virtuous reputation, a stable status, and a capable relative. The scenery is infinite and everyone admires it, but what next? ——She walked out of the golden room. As a 12-year-old novel, its ideas are even more advanced than some ancient sayings currently on the gold list. The characters' IQs are online, and a plot involving palace fighting in the middle and later stages is amazing. As the heroine, Gillian's state of mind is always clearly visible and fully relatable, and the changes along the way are well-founded and logical. Although it was a bit unfinished in the end, it is still a good article worth reading.

11 [ Gotham's Vigilante Lawyer [Western Crossover] [综英美]哥谭法外律师 Red Date, Pork Rib, and Pigeon Soup红枣排骨鸽子汤Danmei (BL)795k WordsCompleted 23.7kFavorites16.9kClicks/ch42.7kGifts

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Very nice free text x3. In fact, I think this article can be rated as five stars. The deduction of one star is purely a disclaimer because I am not familiar with Daredevil and I am not sure whether he is OOC in this article. Apart from this point, the emotional and career lines of this article are well handled. It tells the story of how a protagonist who stands on the line between black and white is pulled back to the light by Daredevil, and how Daredevil finds the safety rope of a heroic career from this relationship. In summary, it may be a cliched two-way redemption, but the author's writing is not cliché at all. They rely on each other to save each other, but also (unintentionally) hurt each other and suffer from this searing love. Love is such a tossing and turning thing, especially in the author's writing. At the same time, the family relationship between the protagonist and Constantine is also well written, with a level of detail that I haven't seen in many paid novels. The author really takes this story seriously and recommends everyone to read it. Later addition: Change the rating to five stars. Because the writing of the Bat family in the extra chapter is so right. It is the first time I see this kind of 1234 in Jinjiang that breaks away from the stereotypes of the bird mother, the rebellious, the young, the cunning, the black-bellied, the little CEO, the mixed-race little super hero. The most important thing is that the Bat family's love-yet-hateful family atmosphere is very well described and vivid, and it doesn't give people the feeling of everyone making dumplings together in the Gotham version that is common in the British and American derivatives. It's right!

12 万 All Flames Return to One 万火回一 Mechanical Squirrel机械松鼠Danmei (BL)487k WordsCompleted 22.8kFavorites39.4kClicks/ch14.3kGifts

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It looks good, but the copywriting is a scam. The protagonist's setting of exchanging memory for combat power is hardly reflected in the article. It is only mentioned in a few words and slightly shown at the end. Forget it if you come here just for this. The narrative of this chapter is the same as that of Curse, starting with the timeline of this chapter → high school timeline → continuing with the timeline of this chapter (Hyakuki Night Walk). The character of the protagonist has indeed been established. The image of a gentle, powerful, and tired spellcaster comes to life on the page. The mental journey and the reasons for the personality change along the way are relatively clear and smooth. The bond with the original characters is also well written. Even though it is completely different from the original idea, everyone is firmly on the path of their choice. A bonus point is that during the high school time period with Xia Youjie as the main perspective, the gap between magicians from big families like Gojo and the protagonist and civilian magicians is very vividly written. This feeling of looking higher than the top and not treating people as human beings is very familiar. To a certain extent, I think it fills the gaps in the original work and more intuitively shows the reasons why Xia Youjie completely turned to the magician. This is something that many fans have failed to do, or do not want to do. One point is deducted because the article is still too short and some things are not explained clearly. The description of the battle scenes is vague and confusing, which doesn't give people a good impression. However, it is still a rare masterpiece among the cursed derivatives and is worth reading.

13 哥 Gotham Worker Simulator 哥谭打工人模拟器 Autumn奥特姆No CP325k WordsCompleted 17.4kFavorites30kClicks/ch6.3kGifts

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It does not prevent you from reading this article if you have not played the Esoteric Cult Simulator, but if you read it after playing it, you will feel that this article has more flavor. What I really like about this article is that when I read the middle and saw the protagonist using his own power to help the original character, I subconsciously thought that like the protagonists of other derivative articles, he would become the spouse, logistics or other things of the original character. The protagonist of this article firmly rejected this path and chose to continue climbing up, to Mansu, and to a brighter place. Very suitable, worthy of being the leader of the lamp. I deducted one star because it was too short, the ending was a bit rushed, and some things were not finished. And because the protagonist himself is a rational and almost cold-blooded figure, this article is more about watching the development of events from the perspective of a bystander, which will inevitably be a bit dull (although this dullness itself is the characteristic of this article). After all, "Twelve lights are bright. There is no room for shadows here, and there is no room for kindness."

14 圣 Paladin 圣骑士 Ode at My Fingertips指尖的咏叹调Danmei (BL)305k WordsCompleted 14.4kFavorites32.2kClicks/ch3.4kGifts

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Although it has only 300,000 words, it does not prevent me from thinking that it is one of the most beautiful Western fantasy novels in Jinjiang. The saint from thousands of years ago woke up again, and the world has changed. Things and people have changed. What he experienced, what he insisted on, and what he loved were all buried in the fog of history. But He is always strong and always saves. The point of deduction is: too short! It's too short! It's too short! Many settings are only briefly mentioned, and the duel with the villain BOSS is almost mentioned in one stroke. Many stories in the middle have room for refinement. If this is a million-word article, then you can remove one of the previous reviews. Bonus points are: 1. This is a Western fantasy 2. The protagonist is my favorite, The Holy Father And: This book also has a side chapter, which mainly tells the story of the protagonist's fixed team. If you feel satisfied after reading this article, you can read it. But if you want to read other articles in the author's column, I advise you to think twice. Except for what FGO said, everything else is ugly. Jpg

15 当 Being a Hero Is Worse Than Raising Pigs: Western Crossover 当英雄不如养猪[综英美] Disrespect不敬Danmei (BL)548k WordsCompleted 8.6kFavorites14.6kClicks/ch7kGifts

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Nice looking, but the title is deceptive. The actual content related to the farming industry is less than 500 words, and the protagonist's life is still focused on entangled with various heroes and villains. The protagonist is essentially a spoiled, selfish little kid, and his brother aka Superman's Twisted Deep Cabinet. Those who like watching Big House Destroy Houses will also like this book. By the way, the emotional line of this book is pretty good, which is to my liking.

16 人 Androids Also Want to Be Popular! 人造人也想受欢迎嘛！ Disrespect不敬No CP422k WordsCompleted 4.9kFavorites6.2kClicks/ch5.5kGifts

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Nice. All in all, this is a story about an unstable thing with great power becoming a human being through the water of human love. The theme of the story is relatively old-fashioned, but the author's writing skills are very good, especially the section where the flag society is completely destroyed, which is very contagious. The protagonist's anger and sadness are simply beyond words and are completely conveyed to the readers. The problem is that the main character really likes to cry. Although it is understandable (after all, he is only a ten-year-old child), the tear content is a bit too much for me. I recommend it to anyone who doesn't mind this.

17 野 Ambition Mother Earth [Greek Mythology] 野心地母[希腊神话] Reluctant to Give Up舍自不甘心Romance304k WordsCompleted 4.5kFavorites6.3kClicks/ch3.5kGifts

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A very nice story about a heroine. People who don't know much about Greek mythology can also watch it. In short, it tells the story of how the earth mother Gaia resisted the established destiny, firmly established herself as the God King, and used love, marriage and other means to tame the originally powerful male gods so that their power could be used by the goddess. The story is smooth, logically clear, and there is no deliberate subterfuge. The author's writing style is also good, and it will not make people feel like they are in a drama. Extra points are that authors who love to write about heroines often have a characteristic, which is that they hope to integrate their own thoughts into their novels so that readers can see and think about them. I have no objection to this kind of behavior, but many people often fail to grasp the appropriateness in this process. It is written more like a political manifesto than a novel. And this article is a well-controlled one. It is mind-blowing, but at the same time it does not detract too much from the readability of the novel itself.