Except for a few bugs that are inconsistent with the original work, everything else is perfect! Both the writing and the characterization are great. I really like the author's ending design, which allows Mo Mo Tou to go to hell while retrieving human emotions. It not only gives Mo Mo Tou a very cruel punishment, but also gives him the possibility of being with Kotonoha after reincarnation.
When I read the copy, I thought it was forced love, but I didn't expect it to be a sweet one. The male protagonist is surprisingly approachable. It was fun to watch the male protagonist self-strategize in the first half. After falling off the horse, it became a little dull, but the author is very good at describing some small details, which still impressed me. The disadvantage is that the story structure is loose, and the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists are rather abrupt. If you don't get this kind of quiet time, it may feel too bland.
It was so enjoyable to read. I haven't read a novel like this in a long time. The story has a loose thread, with multiple threads running in parallel, a tight rhythm, and an interesting world view (not the traditional world view of cultivating immortals). The only regret is that the post-production framework is too big and the author can't hold it in anymore. In addition, the update break takes a long time and the ending is hasty. I hope the extra chapter can handle the follow-up well.
I skipped through the second half. The plot setting is quite interesting in theory, but it feels too rushed, and the writing style is a bit out of touch... Some of the words and sentences are particularly period-feeling... And the heroine is sometimes too silly.
What a pity. It was quite interesting earlier. The plot gradually became boring as the protagonist's family turned into a powerful minister, and the heroine was gradually marginalized.
The first story is given 4 points. The second story feels a bit contrary to the author's desire to make it warm and cute, so I can only give it 2.5 Points.
It's okay, watchable, but the content of cultivating immortality is not high. The heroine's psychological description and growth are written in more detail, but the overall plot is still relatively weak, and it is relatively weak in the later stages.