When I tied it the day before yesterday, I thought it looked very good, but looking back today, I feel that the content is a bit shallow. To be more precise, the character portrayal is not three-dimensional enough and is somewhat labeled, especially Shou. But I really like the protagonist who is calm and sincere in situations.
Nice! This is supposed to be a cure, the sunshine puppy cures the gloomy boss. But it's not that shallow. The character portrayal and plot design are very good, and it's quite touching. I admire the protagonist very much. After experiencing so many setbacks, he can still maintain such a sunny attitude and take care of himself so well. I really like the protagonist.
The author's writing is not bad, but the plot rhythm of this article is not well grasped. It is too compact. Keynes died twice and was seriously injured four or five times. As a result, in the end, watching these supposedly sadistic plots, my heart did not fluctuate and I even wanted to laugh a little. Secondly, I feel that there is a lot that needs to be explained in the plot but has not been written, such as the relationship between the insect king and the protagonist, and the relationship between the supernatural phenomena in another world and the insect world. I dislike the Insect King and Yu Wenjing very much. The author failed to create these two characters very well: 1. There was no clear explanation of their real relationship with the protagonist. After the protagonist returned home, he found that the usurper who killed his parents was smiling at him, and Yu Wenjing is the son of his adoptive parents, which shows that there is definitely a relationship between them. 2. I don't understand the logic behind the behavior of the Insect Emperor and Yu Wenjing at all. First, it was said that the Insect Emperor was the leader of the last uprising. In order to promote the androzoin potion, too many people died, so he decided to block the potion. I don't understand why he wanted to kill everyone who knew about it (including the uprising he led and this potion). Isn't this the best thing to do? Moreover, this matter has caused such a big fuss, and I am speechless that the person who knew about it was still able to kill him. The second thing is that he did not communicate well with those who wanted to promote this potion, but instead rushed to kill them all. I don't think this is the behavior of a person who cares about the people. I think he just wants to keep his position as the insect king and the noble status of the male insect. I don't understand why the protagonist has to cover up for them and promote the potion in the name of the royal family. It is obvious that he died because of the two of them in the end, and they are his enemies, and he himself belongs to the royal family. I don't understand Yu Wenjing very much. I really can't see that this Theo xx (can't remember his name) is a person who has experienced socialist education for more than 20 years. The fact that he wants to kill the protagonist because of his own selfish desires shows that he is a person with no bottom line, and he has no tolerance at all. He has completely integrated into the identity of a female insect and turned into a dog of the Insect King. I don't know why the author contains praise for Yu Wenjing between the lines, saying that he was a chemical genius who finally died fighting against evil forces. In the end, he became the same kind of person as the evil forces he fought against before. Why are the two of them hugging each other in the flames of war? It's really disgusting. In the end, I felt that the two protagonists were very holy, especially Calisil, and I didn't understand why this point of conflict was designed: Calisil stopped the star thief from killing a male bug and said that he shouldn't be too impulsive. As a result, when the protagonist was seriously injured and about to die, he himself wanted to kill the insect. It doesn't hurt to stand and talk, but I feel like he still has a somewhat condescending mentality. In addition, when the protagonist was having a debate with the Insect King, what the protagonist said was not convincing at all. The Insect King was unwilling to promote this potion because he was afraid of repeating his previous mistakes. Then the protagonist said what if so many people have died now. In short, the statement was quite childish. However, it cannot be said that this novel has no merits at all. I think the temperament of Keynes in the early stage and the plot before Eric came were well written.
A rare novel with Jade Rakshasa as the protagonist. Overall, the plot of this novel is a bit bland, and the author's writing is average, but I still enjoyed reading it, but I felt that it lacked a more three-dimensional and detailed portrayal of the characters. In addition, I think this article has a shortcoming, that is, the author seems to like to combine male and female characters. I have nothing to say about the protagonist and Chu Liuxiang. I think Ye Gucheng and Ximen Chuixue are okay, but when it comes to Gong Jiu and Lu Xiaofeng, I feel a bit strange. It's weird, especially when it was almost over, when Lu Xiaofeng said that I wanted to get married to Gong Jiu, and Gong Jiu said that he would not kill innocent people, I felt that it was completely OOC. I felt that Lu Xiaofeng was not someone who would say such things, even if he met her. What I really like is the same, and then there is Gong Jiu. I think he is really not that kind. He should be the kind of person who is both good and evil and does not regard human life as human life, so it seems very strange. Moreover, it is the protagonist who suggested that the two of them fall in love. What is even more strange is that there is a person in this article who expresses surprise at the union of two men. Even if he is originally a straight man, he has no emotional change from self-doubt to acceptance when faced with his becoming a cut sleeve.
Nice. The protagonist is immortal and has the strange ability to see ghosts, gods, fate, etc. I really like this kind of light writing style. There are pleasures and grievances in the world, but also bloodshed, poetry and distant places. CP Su Meng Pillow, the emotional line is thin and the water flow is long, very warm. The only shortcoming is that although they will travel to other worlds after staying for a period of time, the article only involves them traveling through different timelines, and they cannot travel to earlier or later times, which lacks some new ideas.
The plot of this article is relatively simple and has no profound connotation. It mainly tells the story of Ciro, the super boy who reversed the world, traveled to the main world, looked for kryptonite to eat, and then naturally had an intersection with the Bat family. Personally, I feel that the extra is not as good-looking as the main text. When I read the main text, I really wanted to see the if line if Richard had not died. However, after the if line was actually written, I felt that it was not as good-looking. Maybe it was different from what I expected. I feel like there's nothing good to say about this article, and the protagonist doesn't have much growth. It's a sweet article, with a happy ending (although the protagonist's earth is gone), and some funny plots, but overall it's just average.
I feel like this article is anticlimactic. The first half of the story about Lord Chao's teachings and the Super-Bat confrontation was very exciting. I thought it was a serious drama, but I didn't expect that the second half took a turn for the worse. After being enlightened by the words of Chao from the main world, Superman thought about it, and then suddenly became very frank and sudden. I fell in love with Bat, and I felt that Chao's teachings were all fed to dogs (it's not that Chao can't like Bat, but that there was a lack of a process between them from being wary of each other to slowly letting go of vigilance and gradually trusting each other. Although there was also an incident where Bat's lone army went deep into the Star of Heaven to rescue Chao, but I feel that the exaggeration is not enough. In the article, the description is more about how Super blew up the base alone after receiving the signal from Bat, but there is no description of Batman's actions and psychology, and it took a long time for Chao to realize that Bat came to save him. It changed directly from a more serious drama to a family-friendly and brainless sweet story, what a sudden change in style. After reading this, I always feel like I am reading another new article.
This world of cultivation is full of dirt. Because of his lack of talent, the protagonist wants to find a way to quickly reach the realm of ascension. Then he gets a pair of eyes that can see the "gray line". As the protagonist further explores, he discovers the reality of the world - this world is false. In the end, he ascends - he is released after serving his sentence in reality. The twist at the end shocked me. The author's plot setting is very interesting, and you can see what the author wants to express. I feel that the protagonist's character is a bit bland, a bit crazy, very determined and perseverant, but he doesn't care much about the life and death of other people, and has a weak sense of morality. I wonder if this is implying something? What I regret most is the death of the eldest disciple. Her portrayal of a female character was brilliant and unique. It touched me. I felt that her death was too simple and too easy. At first, I still doubted whether she was really dead. I don't have much opinion about the other disciples. I feel that they are all each other's tools and have their own ambitions. I feel that the author left a lot of blank space very well, leaving a lot of room for readers to understand and imagine.
Nice! CP Constantine, the sex plot is really delicious. It's a pity that after Evie became a succubus, she felt as if she had lost her own personality and had no vitality.
So-so, quite boring. I don't know if the protagonists who write hegemony plots in martial arts fan fiction have this type of personality. They are quite hypocritical, very profit-oriented, and a little bit unable to see any true feelings. I feel that the protagonist in this article is a bit similar to the protagonist in "The Legend of Two Dragons of the Tang Dynasty". The difference is that the latter is the main story, and the emotional line dilutes this hypocritical feeling of only pursuing interests. I feel that I can see the true feelings of the protagonist besides pursuing interests, but the former cannot. Even he has no love for his parents. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist in this article has never had a true heart-to-heart relationship with anyone from beginning to end. Every contact he has with everyone is like an exchange of interests. It is difficult to see the spiritual core of martial arts novels in him. The historical background of this novel is quite strange. I feel that the world that Lu Xiaofeng and Chu Liuxiang are in is not suitable for this kind of war-torn background. They should be in the heyday of the dynasty.
[Five Stars] Good-looking, very good-looking! In the more than ten years that I have been reading novels, this one can be said to be the only one that is truly about love, killing and emotional pull. It can be said that they are domesticating each other, but what suits me very much is that he can always control Fu, and Fu is like an unruly wolf dog that has been domesticated into a domestic dog, although to outsiders it is still the same wolf dog. I really like Gong's character. He is white but black, all-round and exquisite. He seems gentle and gentle, but in fact he is ruthless.
Another thing I like most about this article is the sex plot, which is really about seducing each other [dog head]
It's very bland. It's in the same world as "Upgraded Game", but it's much inferior in comparison. When I read the copy, I thought they would have some particularly big emotional pull and how they would forcefully attack them, but I found that there was none at all. The whole text is really about being manipulated and applauded. There may be feelings, but how should I put it, they are very bland, like chewing wax. I feel that the most explosive point in theory should be the point in the author's title "the emotions of being attacked by the person next to you after taking over the power and the communication between them", but what the author wrote made me feel very funny, and I felt like a clown. He had worked diligently as a manager for Gong for so long, working overtime every day, and finally managed to control the company in his own hands. As a result, an external company wanted to suppress them with a hostile takeover, resulting in a bleak business for the company. In the end, Gong had to rely on his own identity to create a "Tianliang King Po" to solve the crisis.
This is very well written! The strange thing is that it is obviously a very funny article, but it is also written with a cologne flavor. I feel that Ximen Chuixue will become even stronger after this battle. It's a bit regretful that Jade Rakshasa didn't appear, and Ye Gucheng can only stay in that Su Wen world for the rest of his life.
This article is very interesting. It is the first time I have seen a fanfic with Lu Xiaojia as the protagonist. It's just a pity that it's a bit too short. It would be nice if it could be worn in more martial arts worlds. Another shortcoming is that the description of Lu Xiaojia's martial arts progress is a bit too brief or childish.
I have read 80% of the book and I don't plan to read it anymore. I regret spending more than ten dollars on this book.
This super turned out to be a pure human from the high-latitude world, but he acted like a high-functioning sociopath and could not experience any normal human emotions. After living for more than twenty years, he traveled into a DC game and ravaged the plot. After that, the world went back, ravaging the emotional entanglements of the Bat, traveling through various parallel worlds, trying to return to the original world, and then Bruce lost his memory again, and it became a confrontation with the Laughing Bat. Then they joined the Laughing Bat's world-saving plan to help other bats save the world.
Logically speaking, their relationship is indeed very twisted and weird, and it should be very sweet, but the strange thing is that I don't feel it is sweet at all. Whether it's Bruce's forced surrender before he lost his memory, or Chao's mentality from the fourth natural disaster to a dog after losing his memory, I don't think this kind of love is good at all. But the plot of the game at the beginning is quite good.
Although Super has committed heinous crimes, the world has indeed gone back. From the beginning to the end, it can be said that he has only caused harm to Batman, both for this world and for the people who ravage the world (excluding those in other worlds).
The main reason is that the Ravager hates Clark's cold and ruthless side, and at the same time, Clark begs the Ravager to love him, or to believe that there is love between them, which makes me very unhappy. Although he is cold and ruthless, he is born like this. Then he pretended to be lively and cheerful for his parents. He was semi-forced to pretend for more than 20 years in the real world, and then entered the game world and pretended again. Everyone likes the lively and cheerful image he pretends to be. No one likes the real him, not even Bruce behind him. Although Bruce admitted his love, I still didn't see him being able to accept Clark's coldness and ruthlessness. So I feel that their love is really not good...
And since the story after the Destroyer lost his memory, I feel like chewing wax. Especially the plot of The Laughing Bat was really frustrating, uncomfortable, and irritating. When I saw Clark being stabbed and they being deceived by the Laughing Bat, I felt that even though it was very brutal, I had no emotions in my heart and even wanted to laugh a little bit.
All in all it doesn't look good.
Laughing Super x Laughing Bat. The plot is a little crazy but very funny. It involves other universes, but everyone ends up being he. The only drawback is that the characterization is not that detailed and the plot is a bit confusing.
This article should be considered Black Naruto, the first time I see this type of Naruto, but this kind of character development is also understandable. Naruto has a strong sense of masculinity, and he and Sasuke are super clingy. Sasuke is simply completely controlled by Naruto.
Almost finished reading. Sure enough, it is still "If life is only like the first time we meet", I think the first unit of this article is the best, followed by the second unit. From the third unit of transvestism, it becomes a little weird. I feel that the author likes to add some bloody elements to the plot, such as misunderstandings, amnesia, three men fighting for one woman... And also likes to describe some terrible supporting characters, such as Ji Tang.
I like the first and second worlds, mainly because the relationship between them, although it may not be healthy, has a very refreshing feeling. Like is like, love is love, and perversion is perversion. Starting from the third world, the relationship between the male and female protagonists has become very complicated. There are many emotional entanglements and some issues that are difficult to argue about right and wrong. Perverts no longer feel perverted. Especially the last unit is said to be gender cognitive disorder, but in fact, in the ABO world, there is not much difference (or maybe the author cannot write it).
And does it have to be pornographic if it is a GB novel? I think it is normal to have some related hints, but I think this article goes a bit too far. I think some of the touching behaviors of the female protagonist towards the male protagonist are so frequent that they can directly constitute sexual harassment (it seems that the female protagonist is very obsessed with sperm, especially the part about nourishing the stomach), and the conversations between them are often mixed with some sexual hints (such as For example, the words "I already want to kill you on the bed" appeared more than once), this is more like being friends than a twisted love, and until the end of a unit, it is not clear how much they love each other, or it can be said that the heroine's feelings for the hero have not diluted the previous sexual component/complemented the sexual component.
Also, I really don't understand why the section on Yangwei sets up the heroine's job as an internet porn star (at least in my opinion), and also chooses to go to the hero's villa for one day to do it... This is really insulting (whether it's a man to a woman or a woman to a man).
The protagonist is a Damian clone who was adopted by Deathstroke after escaping from the League of Assassins. Ever since the protagonist knew that Deathstroke just wanted to train a Robin (Dick to be precise) as an assistant, the daddy issue began to lead to no return. The author's writing style is quite good, mainly the plot of daddy issue, which gave me a bit of a stomachache, so I didn't finish reading it to protect my stomach. There are two daddies, besides Deathstroke, and Batman.
It was well written. Tom was quite cool in front of everyone except Moriarty. Personally, I felt that the part in prison was very well written, but the part after Moriarty came into contact with the magical world was not so good. And the most shocking thing for me is, is this really about attacking each other instead of being the main recipient? In the whole article, I only saw Tom being fucked, except for O'Reilly and Moriarty. This perspective issue really disgusts me. It would be okay if there is no specific description. The key is that there are quite a lot of specific descriptions... And Tom is completely played by Moriarty. It would be okay if there were back and forth, but it was completely eaten to death. I felt so frustrated watching it.
Genius Hacker Kojinpei ~ This article is theoretically based on Matsuda's live broadcast to save the same period. However, due to Matsuda's character, the sense of purpose of watching the live broadcast is not that strong, and there is no purpose to intimidate Conan because of the audience's preferences. Overall, he is still as straightforward and self-centered as ever. Although I enjoyed watching it, it didn't seem to leave a deep impression.
A viscous male ghost Hagi, he is worthy of being a social terrorist hagi, super charming! Other than that, this article has no CP, which is really great. It's just a little tame dye with cb (laughs)
Reborn x Akutagawa. Reborn became Akutagawa's teacher. Rashomon has the ability to communicate with the world. All in all, this article is suitable for Kazu Chu to read, but it doesn't seem to be very friendly to Jae Chu. I quite like it, the plot is relatively smooth, but the target of Chef Akutagawa has become R, and R really raised Akutagawa very well (it is really different compared to Dazai). But R is still very attentive when teaching his disciples, which is different from when he taught 27.
It is also philosophical and literary. It is a little similar to the following "Akutagawa is also acting today", but it is also different. There is no so-called forced plot or other settings in this article. I don't quite remember what it's about, but it's quite in-depth, the threshold for understanding is a bit high, and the main character is Gogol.
[Five Stars] This article is quite literary, a little depressing, and quite unexpected. This article gradually made me hate Fumino Dazai Osamu (but the author really likes Dazai Osamu, xs), and felt sorry for Akutagawa. My favorite part is that the plot is like silk controlling a doll, and Akutagawa awakens. Although he knows that he cannot resist in the end, he still wants to do something. This may be due to the setting of Akutagawa's awakening. His character is completely opposite to the brainless fanaticism in Fumino's original work. He is relatively rational, but also a little crazy. The content is a bit philosophical and may make you confused, but I think it's okay. The CP is Gogol, which is very suitable and similar to crazy.
The plot is a bit confusing, but everything the author wanted to write was written. Lex fans are not recommended to read this, this article can be said to be a criticism. Although the protagonist's name is Lex, his personality is basically irrelevant. What I admire most about this article is the character of the protagonist, who is in a very good mental state (laughs), followed by his charisma, such as the Superman attraction machine and so on. Personally, I feel that what makes me most uncomfortable with this article is the protagonist's two bad friends in the previous life (the author's OC). It is acceptable to mention things like gods and underworld, but it has become something to patch the plot and turn the tide of the world... Moreover, the laughter and curses between the protagonist and the two bad friends seemed very strange to me, and I was not interested in those two people at all. In short, because this thing is completely inconsistent with the British and American worldview, it looks very strange.
First of all, this article is just a simple cookie, with a little connotation, but not much. Personally, I feel that the best part of this article is the process of the protagonist's mentality change after leaving his family. The uncomfortable part is that their love is a bit too sticky (yes, the most uncomfortable part for me in this sweet love story is the love part). I think it's good that the grinding encourages people born on July 7th. However, I feel that their love is a bit too sticky, so sticky that I feel a little uncomfortable. For example, the scene where the protagonist sheds tears while talking, and the part where the protagonist tells the protagonist what he would do without grinding himself, seems very uncomfortable. I feel that although the protagonist has grown up and seems to be independent, in fact he is not independent yet. I should just thank Mian Mo for being a good person.
Nice! Specifically speaking, several main figures from the scientific world whose organization has been destroyed traveled to the world of Kexue, which led to the collapse of the organization in the world of Kexue and gin's departure from the organization. Both gins are not OOC, they are super handsome, and gin Narcissus is super cool!
The writing is so awesome, and the subtleties of humanity are revealed in every line. Psychologically speaking, the heroine is not a sound person, she is still learning what love is, she is a bit Oedipal, and her living environment from childhood to adulthood is emmmy, so she has the so-called "qualities" that a noble girl should have. In a word, the heroine is like a dodder. It seems that she can only rely on others, but if she lets down her guard, she will be dragged into the abyss. Also, Shir is such a good man.
This article is a mess, but it can be considered a long article. It is well written and the writing style and plot are very good. It is just a pity that the author did not insist on finishing it. The author should be a member of the Chengchuang Party, but I prefer the Chuangzhen Leftist Party.
The plot is relatively compact, there are foreshadowings, the setting is relatively novel, and it has a new explanation of the social structure of male superiority and female inferiority. Moreover, male insects can also attend military schools and go to the battlefield, and their combat effectiveness is not low. They are not flowers in the greenhouse of traditional Zerg literature. The Zerg that appear in the article are basically positive characters. There is no old-fashioned control group or brainless cannon fodder villain male Zerg. There is no Zerg civil war, and later there are wars involving other planets. Overall, this article is quite nice, and the cp, cb, and family lines are all very well written.
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