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1 [ [Resident Evil] the Male Protagonist Is Leon The Beginning of the SkyRomance269k WordsCompleted 7.1kFavorites6.9kClicks/ch28.2kNutrition

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④ What I want to see: The heroine avoids some of the tragedies of the original work and develops a friendship with Leon from comradeship to love, but the main plot is still fighting zombies Written by the author: The heroine narrowly escaped death and was saved by Claire. She saw Leon again at the Umbrella Company. She ran over excitedly and was about to tell him that she was still alive. But she saw LA kissing, so she turned around and ran away feeling sour, sad and depressed. Aren't we on the American Hollywood zombie studio? Why are we so sour and East Asian? Everyone was feeling sore the next day as they didn't know whether they were dead or alive! ! The writing is very camera-like, which is a bonus. But when the story of the heroine's death begins in Life 4, it's too similar to "When You Are Literature" Later on, it felt like I accidentally entered the manager's big bed room [Eh~] It's so subtle.

2 c Cos Bai Chao I Also Want to Have a Gray Bat [Comprehensive British and American] Bamboo WeepingNo CP538k WordsCompleted 26.5kFavorites58.5kClicks/ch73.6kNutrition

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① It's edible, but not delicious. There are only a few times when I am not in OOC (not referring to the emotional line) Like a female fan who enjoys herself and doesn't care about anyone else's life or death Oh, this is as big as the universe Cleverly, in some places, the psychological activities of the protagonist are not directly written, thus avoiding the risk of self-pity, because all the supporting characters (characters in the original work) are Hai Lan. 80% Of the plots are about the protagonist standing on the moral high ground and shooting the arrow first and then drawing the target. He implicitly accused the original superheroes of "shouldn't have treated him like this" When I was rating before, I had not seen the plot of the late MCU world. The main world Zhenglian thought that the male protagonist had invaded the MCU and started fighting without saying a word, so I gave it 3 points. I couldn't bear it anymore, so I came back and changed it to 1 star. Even if it is explained as acting, this plot is extremely failed in terms of rhythm and arrangement, because the reader's anger is superimposed by the previous [misunderstandings] that have accumulated continuously. ↓ A common problem in the UK and the US is to ask the author OC to do something → the original character does not agree → the original character is "unlovable" due to the author's writing skills/design problems → the original character is scolded The question is: Is this really who this character is? Would you really say such things and do such things? Are the authors really happy looking at the comments section blaming the original Superman/Green Lantern for their comments? If [the spin-off] isn't out of love for the original character, then I don't understand what is.

3 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How Lucky E Became a Passerby in Gotham Taro DumplingsRomance632k WordsCompleted 12.8kFavorites17.3kClicks/ch5.9kNutrition

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③ The author is right to change the second person to the second person. The Titi brother in "The Complete Collection" is very suave and charming, but the writing here is too wordy and I can't stand it. My problem

5 哥 Gotham Worker Simulator AutumnNo CP325k WordsCompleted 17.4kFavorites30kClicks/ch6.3kNutrition

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③ Around chapter 26, I started to feel uninterested. I put it aside for more than half a year and found that I didn't want to continue reading anyway, so I gave up. I like Tantra and the early part very much... I don't know what's missing, maybe a little less passionate (. It's just too flat, resulting in a very boring feeling.

7 [ [Comprehensive British and American | Anke] How to Survive in Gotham with Intelligence 1 Electric BirdNo CP326k WordsCompleted 4.7kFavorites6.6kClicks/ch2.3kNutrition

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③ Obviously I'm not the audience for certain words

8 当 When the Bat Family Comes to Miwa Town Tang BuheNo CP512k WordsCompleted 11.9kFavorites18.7kClicks/ch11.5kNutrition

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③ I don't think bat readers will believe in the system so easily (even though it's essentially dumpling vinegar), but the reading experience is very uncomfortable.

9 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Dark and Diverse, but Vest Shirakawa Under the MoonNo CP842k WordsCompleted 27kFavorites35.1kClicks/ch94.3kNutrition

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③ After trying it, I found that I couldn't accept the form of talking to myself like writing small notes in class...

11 为 In Order to Sign In, I Became a Legendary Psychopath Wake UpDanmei (BL)474k WordsCompleted 60.7kFavorites107kClicks/ch51.8kNutrition

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③ It was time to say goodbye when I realized that I had stopped reading for half a year and still couldn't finish it.

12 重 The Reborn Imperial Concubine Comes from Songyang County [Zhen Huan Biography Fan] Noise Reduction Ball HeadRomance396k WordsCompleted 9.1kFavorites31.6kClicks/ch2.5kNutrition

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③ It's a mediocre Yuanmeng fanfic, but it felt a little different from the author's understanding of Huanbi's character and I couldn't stand it, so I gave it up.

14 在 Be a Teacher in a Dog-Blood Novel [Quickly Wear] Iwaki Is Too ThinDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 126kFavorites245.5kClicks/ch159.2kNutrition

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③ I can understand some of the exaggeration in the plot, but the main character is written a bit too much like the childish side that suffers from milk burps. It's too exaggerated. I can't do it. My problem is

15 [ [British and American] Kamen Rider, but Bat Cub Plague Youth GermDanmei (BL)748k WordsCompleted 7.7kFavorites9.8kClicks/ch9.8kNutrition

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④ I was looking forward to this book but... Well... The writing is very cumbersome and wordy, and the pace feels uncomfortable. My problem

16 东 Tokyo Girl's Thoughts MichaelRomance788k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites22.6kClicks/ch55.4kNutrition

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① Generally, I don't criticize the author's zzlc private products unless it obviously affects the reading experience. Compared with the author scolding the readers, the author's little thoughts are obviously more disgusting... It's normal for other characters to be biased against China, but when the heroine was Chinese in her previous life and has no sense of identity as a Japanese, it's shocking that she doesn't refute a word. And then you want to sell the persona of the Japanese Communist Party in this situation? If you insist on writing [Don't drink Chinese water], I would like to ask if boiling and boiling will result in nothing? Weren't the bacteria in Chinese water poisoned by the Japanese? Why are you pretending to be a foreign guest? I don't want to be called a traitor, and I also want the identity of Yamaguchi Momoe's younger sister [you don't have to deal with it this way], but the author has to deal with it this way out of his own little thoughts.

18 小 Xiaoyu's World Adventure Lou SimiaoNo CP2.2M WordsCompleted 86.2kFavorites156.1kClicks/ch349.7kNutrition

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③ Invincible and good-looking in the early stage, weak in the mid-term, and boring at first Boredom is the original sin. Wen Ye's plot is so boring. I really liked the original feeling in the early stage. I even had pictures in my mind during the dialogue. I watched two episodes of the original and came back to watch it again. Wenye is really boring

19 生 Tower of Life (Infinite) JingfeiDanmei (BL)1.4M WordsCompleted 31.2kFavorites27.5kClicks/ch29.3kNutrition

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① Boredom is the original sin Using Chinese folk customs to trick people in, they end up with women, children, and fish Shou Tinggong said that he was about to assimilate. "Suddenly he laughed, so hard that he held his stomach and even bent over." He didn't feel like he was criticizing a beauty, but he just felt a little bit sick←

20 [ [HP] Harry and Artemia ChisutenderRomance1.2M WordsOngoing 35.4kFavorites19.3kClicks/ch134.3kNutrition

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② Instead of writing any new stories, I intentionally or unintentionally stole the spotlight from Harry... Hmm...

21 [ [Comprehensive British and American] the World Is in Chaos, but the Sunflowers Are Sprouting Like TomorrowNo CP579k WordsCompleted 4.3kFavorites7.4kClicks/ch4kNutrition

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③ Every character looks like he's reading his lines, and the dialogue feels unnatural. It's really healing, but it's also very uncanny valley.

22 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How the Son of a Mockingbird Flew Back to Gotham Don't Dream of Panax NotoginsengNo CP494k WordsCompleted 21.5kFavorites33.3kClicks/ch39.1kNutrition

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① Again, you can really feel the author's love for the characters. Let 17-year-old minors go. Don't think about it. It's a bit disgusting to think about it.

23 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Mr. Wayne's Daily Life as a Social Animal Acai BerryDanmei (BL)483k WordsCompleted 14.7kFavorites31kClicks/ch9.9kNutrition

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② Stephanie and Tim were pregnant before they got together. Such an unimportant and controversial plot in the original novel could have been omitted. Such an obvious way of writing in a male channel (it's rare to see such descriptions repeatedly emphasizing the plump breasts of female characters in female channels) Tim never told Stephanie who he was, and then he kissed Cassandra, and Stephanie ran away again. Tim asked Connor to fly him over to chase Stephanie, so Cassandra was left behind again. If someone else had written this, I would have called the male protagonist sick. The advantages tie together all of Tim's major events. I really want to ask who is recommending it. Fortunately, it is the previous book of "Huang Mao". The author has made obvious progress in "Huang Mao"

24 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Isn't It Easy to Play Your Own Characters? Li YimengNo CP500k WordsCompleted 20kFavorites39.3kClicks/ch11.7kNutrition

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③ I feel like this is the author's perfect work... The quality of the writing has dropped by more than one notch to prevent me from forgetting why I didn't finish it and put it in.

25 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Robin Simulator Lying High in the East MountainDanmei (BL)625k WordsCompleted 19.4kFavorites33.4kClicks/ch55.8kNutrition

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③ The beginning is very weird, Tim and Jason don't know each other... Well... Very weird! ! ! They all rushed into the base and beat people half to death. How could they not recognize them? !

27 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Magical Girl in Gotham Tea StickRomance226k WordsCompleted 14.9kFavorites34.2kClicks/ch7kNutrition

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③ When there are no big problems, [boring] and [running account] are the biggest problems btw, Dick is a star after all. Others shouldn't be too surprised by his gymnastics talent.

28 [ [Comprehensive British and American] I Cosplayed Qiao Family Courtyard in Front of Chaoying Yan XunDanmei (BL)466k WordsCompleted 26.2kFavorites50.1kClicks/ch22.3kNutrition

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② The protagonist keeps giving speeches under the national flag

29 米 Giyuu from Miwa Town Is Also Confused Today Return to the WestNo CP636k WordsCompleted 61.2kFavorites88.1kClicks/ch142.7kNutrition

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② The logic of the plot doesn't convince me, it makes me sad to watch.

30 [ [Comprehensive British and American] How to Become a Savior Want to Eat Fried Chicken and Drink CokeNo CP518k WordsCompleted 23.5kFavorites18.8kClicks/ch25.3kNutrition

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② It's a pity to throw away tasteless food I can understand what the author wants to write about the character, but it's too slow for me. The protagonist becomes a god in the first world. His ability is so invincible that it makes him very boring.

31 [ [Comprehensive British and American] the Daily Life of an Atypical Bat Cub in Gotham Happy CabbageNo CP499k WordsCompleted 42.5kFavorites103.8kClicks/ch65.6kNutrition

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③ The same goes for "Gotham Summer Vacation". The writing and characters are similar, but it's a bit more boring than that one. Boredom is the original sin

32 狂 Berserker Growth Manual Homeless PortRomance219k WordsCompleted 7.8kFavorites17kClicks/ch7.5kNutrition

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② You can accept Shark Clown, but you can't accept Shark with no foreshadowing. In the first chapter, the clown turned his back to the heroine and took the handle and killed Mikura. I know everyone misses Shark Clown, but this will make other people look stupid.

33 [ [Comprehensive] Mutant Tomie Shark RoeRomance446k WordsCompleted 21.3kFavorites103kClicks/ch12.2kNutrition

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② Author: Reduce the sense of country Actuality: It's all about country feel It is filled with a lot of the author's nostalgia and self-pleasure about Liuzi's career.

34 我 I Raised a Real Daughter and a Real Young Master Wheat Field SnowmanRomance756k WordsCompleted 14.9kFavorites32.6kClicks/ch17.2kNutrition

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② It's not that cool writing is not an excuse to write about a villain who has reduced his intelligence.

36 我 I'm Spending the Summer in Gotham A Steamed BunNo CP513k WordsCompleted 59.8kFavorites193.8kClicks/ch52.7kNutrition

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④ I can watch it. Overall it's good, but it's too routine. I still prefer the plot to be more compact.

46 职 Professional Villain [Quick Travel] Freeze SupermanDanmei (BL)1.1M WordsCompleted 210.5kFavorites414.2kClicks/ch284.8kNutrition

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③ Another villain with a past as heavy as a fifty-pound quilt + the original protagonist of a true villain

47 看 Have You Seen My Cat? [Unlimited Streaming] Twenty ChaosDanmei (BL)1.7M WordsCompleted 209.5kFavorites396.4kClicks/ch724.8kNutrition

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④ I forgot the reason, I didn't finish reading it

48 可 Hateful! She Pretended to Be [Infinite] YanfuRomance864k WordsCompleted 208kFavorites268.4kClicks/ch257.2kNutrition

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② The plot that can be seen at a glance, the effect of showing off ≈ Arguing with the security guard at the gate of the community and throwing fifty yuan in the face

51 女 The Supporting Actress' Mother Is Bai Yueguang, a Wealthy Man. Lin MianmianRomance350k WordsCompleted 191.5kFavorites441.1kClicks/ch200kNutrition

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② The male and female protagonists don't look like middle-aged people, they are too awkward

55 磨 Sharpen Your Knife to Chop Vegetables Without Missing a Beat [Esports] Lin FengzaoDanmei (BL)1.2M WordsCompleted 106.8kFavorites149.5kClicks/ch209.3kNutrition

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③ Boredom is the original sin. I keep playing games and games and I don't feel the plot. Go [Eat potato chips elegantly like a nobleman] CP line classic style [Children, don't be afraid of me]

56 真 How Real Wine Became the Light of the Metropolitan Police Meng Mengmeng NankeNo CP797k WordsCompleted 99.9kFavorites191.4kClicks/ch132.6kNutrition

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① The barrage is so mentally retarded that it affects the perception. It's like a primary school student asking and answering questions. I just couldn't bear it and gave up. The barrage in the author's other book about reversing the camp is much more normal.

57 用 Read the Good Neighbors of Baker Street 221B Through Comics BaishatangNo CP2.1M WordsCompleted 97.4kFavorites176.2kClicks/ch648.1kNutrition

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① The writing style is very blunt, like the style of a Sherlock Holmes detective story, worse than an ordinary translation style. In the plot, the protagonist is thinking "We can't let the Holmes brothers see that he knows the plot" while revealing that he knows the plot. After Mycroft pointed out the doubtful point, he pushed the "prophecy" to "I am Chinese and can understand metaphysics" to fool him. I don't know if this aspect will be explained later, but I don't have the patience to read it. The protagonist has an indescribable arrogance

58 十 19Th Century Seamstress Frozen Beijing OrangeRomance477k WordsCompleted 95.5kFavorites132.1kClicks/ch112.3kNutrition

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② Essentially domineering

59 柯 Ke Xue Fine Analysis Manual Zimu TaoMulti-Orientation737k WordsCompleted 89.6kFavorites151.1kClicks/ch312.1kNutrition

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① I couldn't finish the first chapter after three attempts. The interaction between the protagonist and Ogiwara was too awkward. Don't write about the first encounter with the perspective that the characters already know each other.

60 马 Thousand-Layer Routine of Vest Rabbit Store ManagerNo CP1.3M WordsCompleted 89.2kFavorites156.1kClicks/ch225.7kNutrition

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③ The advantage is that the vest does not fall off the horse, but the disadvantage is that the plot is the same as the title of the novel. The sixth member of the police academy team, Bai Yueguang from the winery, is stewed in a mess. Detailed descriptions of several different waistcoats and the protagonist's beauty in the middle

61 为 I Paid Too Much for Comic Highlights Zimu TaoRomance1.1M WordsCompleted 88.4kFavorites184.8kClicks/ch212.1kNutrition

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② The setting is that the heroine and her brother are two vests (the woman disguises herself as a man and has no clones). Only by becoming popular characters can they survive, so the sister and brother are persecuted by the winery, which has never been in the same BE script. The plot of becoming the sixth person in the police academy at the beginning is so classic. The heroine of this book could be the heroine or the hero of that one. There is nothing about getting along with the police academy team that makes the protagonist feel unique. He is completely a mass-produced paper character.

62 如 How to Play a Werewolf by Yourself [British and American] Yan XunNo CP1.4M WordsCompleted 87.5kFavorites174.7kClicks/ch515.1kNutrition

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② If you can't control the multi-perspective narrative, don't write many vests at the same time. This is the first time I've seen this kind of description [the protagonist controls/manipulates xx to do xx] What about playing The Sims?

63 全 After the Full Text Is Finished, I'm Back Day After DayRomance525k WordsCompleted 76kFavorites120.5kClicks/ch35.5kNutrition

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③ I don't have much of an impression, maybe I'm bored.

64 死 The Curse of the Dead Eye Cheng YuanNo CP832k WordsCompleted 74.9kFavorites133.7kClicks/ch217.6kNutrition

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③ It was a bit boring later on

65 英 Heroic Spirit Transformation System 3 Ye XilanNo CP671k WordsCompleted 72kFavorites175.7kClicks/ch513.4kNutrition

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① It's a big deal. You don't have to write if you don't want to. The shipwreck in the sky is written once in heroic spirit 1, secondly in 3, and thirdly in the undercover system. How much do you like this theatrical version?

66 怪 Strange Girlfriend [Unlimited] TagoreRomance990k WordsCompleted 51.4kFavorites87.8kClicks/ch44.6kNutrition

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③ Boring

67 柯 Ke Xue's One Hundred Ways to Save a Winery Jiang ZiyaluoDanmei (BL)444k WordsCompleted 47.1kFavorites96kClicks/ch14.1kNutrition

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① The beginning of the game is very interesting. The protagonist is a pure winery worker. He is timid and afraid, but he is sent to the undercover police station. He wants to go to work every day and work hard. Later, he starts having an affair with Gin and turns into a mentally retarded baby.

68 重 Heavy Purple ShukeRomance448k WordsCompleted 44.8kFavorites158.1kClicks/ch11kNutrition

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① Watched it in high school

69 马 The Vest Blew up Shura Field Zimu TaoNo CP401k WordsCompleted 41.9kFavorites118.7kClicks/ch12.3kNutrition

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③ The protagonist pretends to be cool and changes into a vest, which is not a success but also has no memory points.

70 扮 After Playing a Villain, I Reached the Peak of Popularity in Comics Bai LingziNo CP1.2M WordsCompleted 37.6kFavorites61.3kClicks/ch59.5kNutrition

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② This is a forum that has no information and is filled with babies, husbands and wives. After only 30 chapters of the main story, you can actually read 10 chapters of the forum! Enter the first chapter of v and calculate addition and subtraction within 3 pages. I can't stand the protagonist's jump. Systemic mental retardation affects reading.

71 [ [Comprehensive British and American] Social Terror and the Incompatibility of Alliances PhilosoDanmei (BL)492k WordsCompleted 37kFavorites69.4kClicks/ch83.4kNutrition

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⑤ If you don't like watching CP, it's superhuman.