It's hard to say, it was okay in the past, but now that I've returned to Real Madrid, my writing has gotten worse and worse, and the word count for words that are both popular and professional is extremely low….
It's better than I expected. There are cheats but it's not a direct cheating type. Although the protagonist is really lucky. Although the love line has no cp but has a single arrow but no further development. It looks a bit bald and a woman wearing a man is a little weird, but luckily I don't mention it all the time.
It's not that good, there's no arrests in the opening scene, the attack doesn't look like Love at First Sight like XSR, and the misunderstanding scene is written in a mess
The main character is a bit mentally retarded... And the heartthrob main character is not very attractive... You can read it without thinking, the writing is pretty fluent, right?
Goldfinger is ridiculously big, and the characters before and after are so disconnected. I have been using a very subjective psychological description to express the character creation of the protagonist, but it gives the impression that I only know how to talk, but in the next chapter, I want to be cheerful and become a sand sculpture...
The golden finger is too much. I have never played football before and sealed Real Madrid's zero as soon as I crossed over. I would have vomited blood if I wasn't Meilinger. Moreover, the inexplicable cultivation settings are simply a hodgepodge.
The main character is the birth of the mascot consciousness (?) I didn't understand the writing, it's a bit messy and clumsy, I can see the author i Manchester United
It's quite cool, and this no-CP is quite pure. It doesn't mix with the national team or the national glory. It makes people feel comfortable. (One point will be deducted for the extra chapter, and I found that the author originally wanted to write about the national football team and then persuaded him to stop. Fortunately, luckily
It's hard to say, it's so depressing that I can't stand it. Nina's writing is still very good, but it's too immersive. I want to die while watching Xiaoka.
I don't like the character of the main character, the super hero who has no beginning or end. I skipped through the emotional line. I love watching big important but it doesn't feel right. The original character Mad Dog is so inexplicable that I was confused.
In fact, it's not bad, but it seems like a trap... The advantage is that it doesn't mention the national team and there is a golden finger, but it's not an exaggeration. The protagonist's loan journey is still within the scope of normal people. Although I think the transfer fee is too high for a goalkeeper and unreasonable, but overall it's okay. At least it's not the rise of the national football team.
Love will only flow to those who are not lacking in love, and this article perfectly reflects it. Milanga's innocent and cruel character is so charming... Male Mommy is the best. I feel like Paul will be the one who stays with him for a long time in the end.
Yes, I like it overall, but I feel that the handling of the emotional line in the end is a bit unfinished. Although it is an open ending, Red Army Jia is a bit too evasive and conflicts with other characters, but this is Nina's first Jia Jia and it is normal!
Yes, the update is stable. The main character is a group favorite, but the writing is not mentally retarded. He is a cute Portuguese prince. It is quite comfortable to watch without CP.
Why is this story about super power soccer given three stars? Because it's ridiculously funny, the emotional line is not easy to drink, and it's very oily——
Qiqi is so cute, but the writing is very ambiguous and the main character can't get love at all. It's a bit satisfying but not satisfying enough. Even if I turn on the indirect, it seems like it's not turned on.
Hmm... It's actually pretty good, but this idea of instruding the Chinese team makes me feel so weird, so weird, and it feels very smooth to always call the protagonist Yan'er brother, and it becomes even more smooth after the mutual attacks.
Not bad, the update is stable and the writing style is OK. I didn't write about the national football team. The golden finger is not too much. It's good.
I like it very much. Normally I only like to read sweet articles because life is often too painful and I can no longer read painful things, but this one is written by nina
It makes me particularly empathetic. My family also believes in Christianity. I often feel the pain of nothingness, but suicide makes me feel that it can only exist in my countless fantasies. And I don't think Jiajia doesn't understand love in the end, because many times love, family and friendship do not need to be divided. Whatever you get, it's enough for others to give you. When I watched the first half, I felt that everyone was very tired. It is difficult to get a lot of things from one person. In the end, I was very happy that everyone could coexist relatively peacefully and get what they wanted.
This is my first time watching this kind of black mud type. The chaotic relationships I watched before would only make me think that this is a group of lunatics with no sense of morals. But this one is the dark side of normal people, and I can understand the entanglement and pain.
I feel that Nina put a lot of effort into writing this article. Readers can tell whether a person writes an article with heart or emotion. Thank you Nina for writing such an article. I will read Milanga in the next article. I feel that Degas writes better than Red Army Plus. Red Army Plus is a state of escaping and ignoring feelings. Perfect Forward is more inclined to cool articles. I like this article more because it is very tangled and awkward. It also gave me some comfort when I was studying in Eastern Europe and felt very cold and painful.
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