It does not contain any original characters related to the love relationship of the original characters. Due to taste reasons, it contains explosive group cp>cb, police academy group, and zero scene. Welcome to discuss + Amway
No CP Hagi original perspective, the author's plot design and logic are good, even after reading so many questions, it can be ranked at the forefront. After reading it in one breath, I feel that there is nothing I can't fix. The way of interpreting some settings from another angle (I will blurry to avoid spoilers) is eye-catching.
I really like how the character's personality is well defined. It doesn't make me feel stereotyped, but it doesn't step out of the frame at all. It's worthy of praise!
It's a pity that the whole article is a little "bland", not in terms of plot, but in the climax part where the writing is a little weak. If you calculate the score carefully, it will be 4-4.5, But I like the plot and imaginative design very much, so I give it five stars. I hope to meet you again at the next intersection with your story
There is no difference in the explosive group, the writing is good, the storyline is smooth and you can read it in one go, and you can also randomly pull out a node to read. Although I have read Bleach (I have not read it personally), I have not read the manga and it does not affect my reading. There are a lot of silly scripts, and the characters will dig into the ground for their toes, but as a reader, most of the time I laughed happily. Persecuted characters include but are not limited to Hagi, Matsu, Zero, Morofu Brothers, Gin, Aki
It is also a book that I will read over and over again.
There is nothing wrong with the writing style or the plot, and the rhythm of the plot development even feels quite online. As an author who is writing a medium-length novel for the first time (author's original words), this is a very impressive first attempt.
The plot mainly revolves around the relationship between Hagimatsu and Zero King, as well as the development of the police academy's full relief. If you want to see the organizational line, you can think about it before buying ww
What's surprising is that the monitor has always been a difficult character to portray, but it was highlighted in the article (I like it very much!) And it's not just a stereotype of dating, okay
Reading does not require high-intensity brain thinking about how to put together the plot (the explanation is quite clear, and it is not a very complicated design). It is suitable for passing time/reading in one go in your spare time.
I did read the article very early, but at that time I still had the habit of grading and categorizing, so I put it off until now.
There are no CP-oriented articles in Matsuda Center. A mature author has come to us with her skillful and delicate writing style. When Matsuda was the protagonist and there were only a few articles that were not about dream women, it was a happy home that I read over and over again (ok, I admit that I will go back to read it now). I personally feel that there is nothing OOC about the author's character creation. I am very satisfied watching the police academy team laughing and having fun along the way. The story starts and turns very smoothly. You can read this book in one sitting every time you read it.
There are no flaws in the writing of the explosive group, and the overall impression is flawless. Hagiwara's secret love really lasted for a long time (sentiment). The interesting point is that the values are all truly rolled out, but it may also be because the randomness is too strong, causing unexpected points to appear and disrupt the outline. In the later stage, there is a sense of rush that I want to work hard to finish the story.
The love line is somewhat vague (?), And its existence is very stable, but maybe because it developed too slowly in the early stage, it feels a little rushed in the later stage. But there are some parts that I like very much: although the process of secret love is long, both parties will have some heartbeat descriptions, just like the stars seen in the night sky. When you find one, you will see more. They are always there and just need to be observed.
Unexpectedly, the plot in the middle and later stages is actually more interesting to me, and the author's handling of some settings also made me very happy, so my personal viewing experience is still good.
Ps: I took a look at the date of the article. Is it possible that the officer Matsuda I used when running the group belongs to the author?
In a sense, Hagi really has some ghost flavor, but on this basis, the still stable writing and character creation will not make ghost OOC (personal taste issues cannot accept some overly ghost Hagi), because Hagi's background is sunny and tough no matter what, and his keen empathy will make him think too much but still grow upward, and someone will take action to hold him ww.
It's a very different style of writing from Matsuda's and it's more about daily life. I really like this kind of different series. I'm very surprised.
Looking forward to other texts in the same series, thank the author for the warm stories
The author's writing style is not great, and you may feel that the details are not laid out when reading, but the plot settings and transitions are very interesting. Some of the revelations feel a bit like setting up the story all at once, but because the pace is very tight, this problem can be offset, at least for me.
I'm still a little bit stuck on the reincarnation cycle of the big world, but that's probably because I read it relatively quickly + I only read it once when I wrote this, so it shouldn't be a problem if I watch it again
In fact, the original outline of the Zero + Matsuda chapter was more interesting, but since it ran away on its own, it means that the characters have their own ideas. It's a pity that I didn't see anything about Hagi's second chapter, but the blank space also gives readers more space to imagine.
I'm looking forward to the author's next work. The ideas in each book are very interesting and eye-catching. Come on!
Original · "Matsuda's Winery Second Week": I really like the author's transitions. I can really say that I enjoy the silky smoothness.
The squad leader and Natalie have successfully become the main plot, instead of the famous painting "The squad leader is dating", squad leader Ida is also an indispensable member of the police academy team. I like this portrayal, and it shows that the author has enough writing power to create many characters. Hagiwara has highlights but the plot plays a slightly smaller role
As an original character, Norton gives me the feeling that human nature is always the most fragile link in all perfect chains, regardless of positive or negative meaning. The bosses in this book are really oppressive. It is the first boss among Genxiao fanfics to give me such an oppressive feeling so far.
The article requires brains and thinking to read, and the reading is excellent (except when you feel that you are mentally retarded, hahahahaha), but readers who do not want to be spoiled must not read the paragraphs and comments for the first time, as the spoilers are more than 70%...
Where the Dream Begins, I first opened this book because of my friend Amway, who was originally more obsessed with original novels, so I put it off for a long time, until it magically unfolded. I read this book to her (in the physical sense), and then read it quickly that night. From then on, once you enter Jianglai, it is as deep as the sea. The protagonist in the author's works has a shining character, and the original intention that has not changed is probably the true main line (bhshi) that runs through this series. However, at the same time, each character in the original world can also show its own charm. You will not feel like you are being overwhelmed by the hand of God because of the writing problem. The creation of each character is enough to be a drama. Please feel free to read.
The narrative method of plot conception and memory interweaving is actually very eye-catching. This point alone can be rated as 5 points. Unfortunately, some connections and plot processing in the later period are not smooth enough, mainly about the love of young tame dyes. As a cp article, it is still good w
Although it is a short story, the plot that is basically supposed to happen has not been left out. The sequence and transition are compact and there is no lack of basic logic. The plot that will be discussed later adds a finishing touch to the characters. It is suitable to be read in one sitting in your spare time.
Mumuzi's writing is basically stable, and it is also the starting point for me to accept original characters in the fandom world. Who doesn't like a charming protagonist who does not force relationships with the original characters?
I rarely come across open ending articles (this is the only one I have written so far). Personally, I think this article expresses the charm of black pine very smoothly. Matsuda's background color has always been stable and bright. This background color allows him to still grow tenaciously upward in the mud, but the environment is like scissors for repairing branches, which still brings different characteristics to Matsuda, which is very delicious.
The world view setting and character setting are very novel, and the key is that it can be self-explanatory. The completeness of the story is five stars, but it is a pity that the length is short and 4 stars. But I really like some of the character settings of the police academy team in the Black World in this book, so it is about 5 stars.
The cats in the same period are very cute, and the whole story has a relatively relaxed and happy atmosphere. It's great to see everyone playing around again. Let us say: Thank you Cat God————! !
The running group enthusiasts were ecstatic, and some were delighted to see the two bkings overturned. Naiya Ding must have his intentions. Jpg
The character of the protagonist is very three-dimensional. I like to see some sudden big successes and big failures.
It can be regarded as a long CP-oriented enlightenment novel. The text is smooth and delicate, and all the foreshadowings should be recycled. There is no situation where you are wondering whether the author has forgotten the settings halfway through.
The setting is very interesting, and the connection between the chapters and the serial plot are very eye-catching. Although there are two knives in Tangli, it is very enjoyable to read in succession. I look forward to meeting the author's articles again at the next intersection.
The writing is very interesting, and the plot development is also quite interesting, but it is a bit of a high-end and low-end book. Some places would be better if they were described in more detail. The police academy team's daily gags are very high in content, and you can't help but laugh out loud when you watch them. They are so cute!
More than 4 points but less than 5 points. Considering the hard work of the novel, I left it with five stars. I enjoyed watching Moduo Moduo. The presence of the original characters will not be very low, but their more role is to promote the plot and give Hagiwara a reasonable explanation for his survival. Hagimatsu's description of getting along with Hagimatsu is very pleasant, and the emotional progression is quite comfortable to watch. The rare flaws of the million-word writing (referring to the initial hesitation due to the original characters) are not covered up.
Matsuda's sickly (forced) buff exists, and some people may find it unacceptable, because most of it is the script in the minds of people who don't know the truth. As a God's perspective, I can only laugh and laugh.
I have been reading this author for a long time. It seems that players who mainly play in LoF but are not used to reading articles in LoF are very grateful to the author for publishing in JJ. He sticks to his own ideas and comments in a direct manner, which is very Matsuda style (sentiment)
Among the fics I have seen so far, there are only a few authors who are involved in shaping and dismantling it, and the fusion and insertion are very comfortable, and even make your eyes warm, like Oita in Guangdong Province!
I like the author's imagination, it's unexpected but self-explanatory enough, the settings are actually pretty saucy, and it sounds like it would be better if it were a long story.