Serialization in progress. The author has a history of interruptions.
This article often uses the word Zaizai, and will involve the national football team.
The text is very good, but there is an urge to separate the emotional line from the career line. Although the emotions are written very realistically, the emotional scenes involving a bunch of people pulling back and forth are really very small talk...
Because the rating is a bit low, I wanted to take a look at the comment section. I was shocked when I saw the topic building. Some people watched the real-time broadcast of the World Cup and built many topic buildings. One thing to say, it affects the experience of reading the article, because I originally wanted to take a look at the evaluation of the plot of this article, but ended up being blocked by those topics and couldn't see anything.
Still updating. The writing style is warm and touching. The protagonist is a sunny and good boy.
The author posted daily updates but did not write a request for leave. Let's wait for it to be completed.
Male protagonist-no cp-Noah-British-Manchester United-Ferguson's son
Right back, former captain of the national team
After retiring, the career line of the Manchester United coaching staff - the British national team was too confusing. I thought it would be the national team as the center. However, most of the articles were about serving as an assistant coach while Ferguson was still there, but he had a lot of power, which was very awkward.
The subject matter is originally very novel, and it can be very brilliant if written well. As a result, the heroine's body was filled with messy things one after another, her emotional line was pulled hard, and her career line was boring.
Male protagonist-Danmei (cpc Luo)-British-Chairman's son (noble) heartthrob family
The protagonist is an autistic genius and reborn. In the early stage of the relationship, it was always emphasized that both people wanted a child (presumably they would be surrogate mothers or let their sister give birth). In addition, there is a childhood sweetheart who has a crush on him. The emotional line is really not good, just pure CB.
Male protagonist-no cp-German and Italian mixed race-front door-travel (parallel world
It's a bit unexpected for the male protagonist to travel back in time and immediately switch from a dancer to a football player. In his previous life, he was not a goalkeeper but a forward. Suddenly he wants to be a goalkeeper.
The author once stopped updating without a request for leave.
Male protagonist-Danmei (cpc Luo)-English-German mixed-race-coach-rebirth
It's well written, and the protagonist is very charming. Overall, it doesn't hide its flaws.
Here are some things I don't like, some habits of ancient writing. For example, potential misogyny (drawing women out to enhance the charm of the protagonist, making the players' wives watch the World Cup because they are afraid of the protagonist being gay; ostracizing Ronaldo's girlfriend at the time; the female character is either a brainless fan or a profit-driven villain) and some positional issues. It is understandable that I don't like South Korea, but "South Korea's arrogant declaration of the World Cup caused Europeans to have a bad attitude towards other Asians."
Male protagonist-Italy-no cp
Rather than writing about football mixed with raising cubs, it's more like raising cubs mixed with football. The relationship between the team and the team in the first twenty chapters feels a little intellectual. There is very little about getting along with peers. Most of them are about getting along with adult players. They are all about being cared for and pampered. It is different from what I think about the growth path of a young football writer. And the setting of the sister's rebirth seems useless in the first twenty chapters. It seems to be very powerful but actually does nothing. The move is due to the care of teammates whom the male protagonist knows.
I feel that the proportion is not very good. During the training of the youth group, I did not write about the tacit understanding with my teammates, I did not write about the progress of training, and I did not write about the detailed description of the game. It is really tasteless.
Male protagonist-no cp-Chinese nationality-Manchester United-Chairman-wishing system (give money)-interrupted updates
The dream-realization moment in the first half is very warm and beautiful, but the protagonist in the second half is not good when he is a player. It's really a bit of a double-take here, using supernatural powers to gain football abilities through unfair means and get on the field. After coming off the court, I regret it, and I need to be comforted by someone who really made it to the court through talent and hard work, and will probably go to the court again... I am also speechless.
Male protagonist-Danmei cpc Luo Wugongshou-Leeds United-coach and chairman (player retired)-Germany-money ability
Possible red flag: surrogacy (comments
The family had money to win the club for him. After retiring, he got a coaching certificate and his brother was the boss.
Female protagonist-no cp-Chinese nationality-Premier League Meteor-bound game system-coach
Very interesting to write
But it's suitable to be mindless, because the team members will support the heroine regardless of their personality and background. Also, it's a bit boring to have something to do with old people and middle-aged people.
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