A retired former female spy gets caught up in one of Merlin's pranks.
What the heck is time travel? And what the heck is this child?
Is she really going to spend the best years of her life running a shop and raising a family?
...Thinking it over, a peaceful life doesn't seem so bad, either.
But the responsibilities of her destined family seem unwilling to let her enjoy such a carefree life. They leap out, unable to bear being forgotten.
If she wants enough power to protect what matters, it seems she'll have to compromise, won't she?
--Synopsis rewritten on September 6, 2016.
I've decided to mark this as complete.
I once said I wanted to write a second part, and I already have a few ideas. But after thinking it over, I realized the current outline has a major logical flaw that I can't get past myself. I've decided that if I can revise the outline until there are no plot holes, I'll write it, but I'll start a new project.
I wrote this in ninth grade. Looking back now, the writing is a little immature, the pacing isn't great, the ideas are too simple and lack much intrigue, the ending might be a bit of a letdown, and I tend to ramble. Still, the story as a whole is worth a read. After all, I put my heart into writing it back then, planted and revealed the foreshadowing properly, and the plot doesn't have many major flaws.
I suppose it doesn't quite count as an embarrassing old work. After all, I once loved Eve.
Theme:
I didn't see anything wrong with the heroine's character. It's not like I haven't read any novels with character flaws. If it's well-written, I'll continue to read it. If it's not well-written, I'll abandon it. What's the psychology behind picking and choosing a character's character? Is it a belief in "character ideals"? You must be perfect, go travel through time and be a savior or something.
My English name is Eve. Lauder wrote to me! No rebuttal accepted!
"It was - and has been - my loyal friend"
Is Tom born again?
GD
Haha... Come on~
So how does that book express the heroine???
He escaped secretly = = You went to talk to someone and said you would take him home...
= =... What kind of good tone do you hope for?
Evelyn was born in 1898, and traveled 14 years from 1918 to 1932. When did she experience the war? Could it be World War I? But Grindelwald didn't start World War I, right? Then why is there a description in the article where she is sad that her boyfriend died in the war and beat Grindelwald? And in the "Prelude to Chapter 17" Evelin said, "I have also experienced two wars." Which two times were they? After reading it, I feel that the timeline should be very simple, but the description seems very confusing. Crazy (@@)~
I read it in one go. It's very interesting. Is this an open ending?
So cute
Bagua's family tree
In the future, will Tom's identity become "someone's husband"?
Interesting
I didn't see anything wrong with the heroine's character. It's not like I haven't read any novels with character flaws. If it's well-written, I'll continue to read it. If it's not well-written, I'll abandon it. What's the psychology behind picking and choosing a character's character? Is it a belief in "character ideals"? You must be perfect, go travel through time and be a savior or something.
My English name is Eve. Lauder wrote to me! No rebuttal accepted!
"It was - and has been - my loyal friend" Is Tom born again?
GD
Haha... Come on~
So how does that book express the heroine???
He escaped secretly = = You went to talk to someone and said you would take him home... = =... What kind of good tone do you hope for?
Evelyn was born in 1898, and traveled 14 years from 1918 to 1932. When did she experience the war? Could it be World War I? But Grindelwald didn't start World War I, right? Then why is there a description in the article where she is sad that her boyfriend died in the war and beat Grindelwald? And in the "Prelude to Chapter 17" Evelin said, "I have also experienced two wars." Which two times were they? After reading it, I feel that the timeline should be very simple, but the description seems very confusing. Crazy (@@)~
I read it in one go. It's very interesting. Is this an open ending?
So cute Bagua's family tree In the future, will Tom's identity become "someone's husband"? Interesting