Overall, this book is good. The issues about AO are also very popular. The plot line is okay, but it is too rough, like writing an outline, lacking descriptive embellishments. It is really just writing a "story", and there are no highlights. If you insist on finding it, changing the glands can be an important point of attraction, but here I just briefly mention it without describing it in detail. One thing I don't quite understand is that the introduction should be very clear about feelings, and there is also a clear description of attack and shou in the protagonist column, but the article mentions shou in only a few lines, which is rather sloppy. If you want to use this introduction, you must at least explain what kind of image shou is. After all, you are the protagonist, and you have to write more or less about attack and shou. Love, how much Gong and Shou are in love, how sad Shou is after Shou's death, you can also write about Gong's previous image, so that there will be a contrast when writing later, and it also echoes the introduction. If you don't want to write about feelings and just write about the plot, this introduction is not appropriate, and there is no need for Shou to take up a role. After all, he has less roles than supporting roles.
Last night I saw a big reply on the network card, but I couldn't click on it for a long time and it was a little late, so I went to bed first. These are just a little one-sided views. I don't know much about reading and I haven't been reading for many years, so I can't give more detailed and comprehensive suggestions. The writing is still very good. Keep up the hard work 😆💪
Who is the attacker? Chapter 4 Hey! 💔
When it comes to □□, I feel like using "sprinkle" is not appropriate. After all, it is a gas and has no substance.
I see on the label it is the main attacker, is Yu Qing the attacker? O attack? Clean or not?
Overall, this book is good. The issues about AO are also very popular. The plot line is okay, but it is too rough, like writing an outline, lacking descriptive embellishments. It is really just writing a "story", and there are no highlights. If you insist on finding it, changing the glands can be an important point of attraction, but here I just briefly mention it without describing it in detail. One thing I don't quite understand is that the introduction should be very clear about feelings, and there is also a clear description of attack and shou in the protagonist column, but the article mentions shou in only a few lines, which is rather sloppy. If you want to use this introduction, you must at least explain what kind of image shou is. After all, you are the protagonist, and you have to write more or less about attack and shou. Love, how much Gong and Shou are in love, how sad Shou is after Shou's death, you can also write about Gong's previous image, so that there will be a contrast when writing later, and it also echoes the introduction. If you don't want to write about feelings and just write about the plot, this introduction is not appropriate, and there is no need for Shou to take up a role. After all, he has less roles than supporting roles. Last night I saw a big reply on the network card, but I couldn't click on it for a long time and it was a little late, so I went to bed first. These are just a little one-sided views. I don't know much about reading and I haven't been reading for many years, so I can't give more detailed and comprehensive suggestions. The writing is still very good. Keep up the hard work 😆💪
Who is the attacker? Chapter 4 Hey! 💔
When it comes to □□, I feel like using "sprinkle" is not appropriate. After all, it is a gas and has no substance.
I see on the label it is the main attacker, is Yu Qing the attacker? O attack? Clean or not?