A Melodramatic Story, but No Romance

A cool article. Fun, too short, a little bit snake-tailed. The author enters into his own bloody story. I've always liked writing reversal of routines from the author's perspective, abusing characters and harming readers. I can sympathize with the author, so it's particularly fun. The pace is pretty good, the character settings are relatively novel, and the relaxed and refreshing atmosphere is very suitable for reading to kill time. However, the problem covered up by the above is that the character setting is not established, there is no complexity, and the character has no growth. What kind of thoughts and changes has the protagonist experienced after this trip? The original heroine's appearance was short. Why did her general mother leave such a child? Even took this fetus to the battlefield? Can the stories about her mother that the heroine heard from kind passers-by really give her such confidence? How did the Demon King become the Demon King? What did he go through on his way to the throne? Where is the Ghost King? In short, there are many topics that can be continued in depth, and if you continue writing, it can also be a relaxing story. When your strength is at its peak, ask questions about your feelings. I'm so curious about how such an interesting setting can lead to a story.

To be honest, the whole article started to get disconnected and went downhill from Ban Xianzhou, but the ideas are quite novel. The author has worked hard.

It's very beautiful, but why is it so short? The pace is a bit rushed. It can't really be the plot dreamed up by the author [laughing and crying]

I feel like the plot goes so fast

Oh my God, two hundred thousand words have been written. It's so cool to watch it all in one go🥰Sister Qu is so handsome when she's playing chess and wielding a sword [Panda Head]

Remember when you said you wanted to write a side story?

Where did the extra chapter go? This ending made me feel a little heartbroken for no reason.

Looks good, but too short [Star Eyes]

[Spread flowers][Spread flowers][Spread flowers] It's a perfect story with a happy ending, but it's too short.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh it's so short, it ends so quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! !