
Broken Wings (Ultimate Edition)
折翼(终极版)
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 225k Words
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 16y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
75Chapters
148Favorites
10.0Score
2kClicks per chapter
691Comments
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Where can I read the chapters about locks? 😭
From the first year of junior high school to the third year of college, madam, will you come back?
I have wanted to write a long review about "Broken Wings" for a long time, but every time I pick up the pen, I don't know where to start. I read it again today and felt that I would be sorry if I didn't say anything more, so I wrote it quickly. Please don't blame me for any inappropriate things. "Broken Wings" is the only non-fiction novel that I read in Jinjiang and couldn't put it down, so I decided to write a long review. At first I really thought the author was a student majoring in literature and history, because the beginning of the chapter is something that no one who is not familiar with literature and history could do. Most of the historical novels on the Internet are written as if they were copied from textbooks. Reading them makes you sleepy. It is no different from reading textbooks. It is really depressing. In addition, there are plots that are completely inconsistent with the historical background, which is even more ridiculous. Therefore, I usually only read fictional novels and rarely historical novels. "Broken Wings" made me change this view. The opening chapter starts from the aspects of food, drink and entertainment, and uses a few strokes of writing to deal with the life of a wealthy young man in the heyday of the economy in the Northern Song Dynasty despite the unrest on the border. As we all know, although the Northern Song Dynasty was poor and weak, its economic development, especially the prosperity of the urban economy, was even worse than that of the Tang Dynasty. Both the brocade industry and the cultural and entertainment industry are very particular, and the adults used it so skillfully here that I couldn't help but applaud from the beginning. Okay, let's talk about the plot. I personally like this kind of plot with twists and turns. The writing seems to be boring, but the lukewarm writing is really boring. In the text, the adults go deeper and deeper, a bit like a detective novel, and gradually touch the real key point. Although Jiang Shaocen's words to Pei Xuanpeng and the painting when he visited the doctor had already felt a little strange, but when he saw that Jiang Shaocen was the mastermind behind the scenes, he was still a little stimulated. What he did to Pei Xuanpeng later was really outrageous. How could he torture the person he loved so much? Seeing that, I thought that Pei Xuanpeng would never forgive Jiang again in his life. I thought it was a BE, but the appearance of Fang Shisan was a bigger surprise (I really didn't expect that it was Fang La. Didn't Fang La have a hard time as a child?). Any character, no matter how powerful his personality, must be placed in the context of history. It was an out-and-out troubled time, with restless frontiers, powerless court, and rampant bandits. I am very happy that not only are they shown in the article, but the most valuable thing is that they are shown appropriately! The Song Dynasty was probably the most different dynasty from all previous dynasties. There was the prosperity of the city as shown in the Qingming River Scene, the awakening of consciousness of the scholar-bureaucrat class, the unprecedented prosperity of the city, and the rise of Neo-Confucianism. But at the same time, it was accompanied by the division of the country, the incompetence of the royal family, and the blood and tears of the common people. I really have to thank you for seeing a good article in Jinjiang that reflects this unprecedented contradiction. Okay, let's talk about the pairing of Pei Jiang and Pei Jiang that I want to talk about the most. As I said before, when I watched it, I felt that it was difficult for Pei to forgive Jiang Shaocen. Jiang actually loved too much, so he turned his love into injury, deception, and imprisonment. This is the biggest insult to the high-spirited Pei. At the beginning of the chapter, I didn't like the character Pei Xuanpeng very much. He was the most standard-dandy boy in Jiande. He relied on his family's local reputation to make fun of life. It was also at the most high-spirited time in his life that he put forward his own set of "broken wings" theory to Jiang Shaocen. At that time, I felt that this child was unworthy of abuse. He was too ignorant of the sufferings of the world and had a bit of a frog-in-the-well mentality. It was just that he was lucky enough to be sitting in the Eight Treasure Glazed Well. But he never expected that this theory of broken wings would eventually land on him! When I saw Jiang Shaocen's true face finally exposed, I felt shocked. I was intellectually unwilling to accept such a plot, but when I thought about it carefully, it made perfect sense. Living next to Pei Xuanhe since childhood, Jiang Shaocen must have been depressed and embarrassed, right? His accumulation of emotions for Pei eventually exploded into pathological violence. The more he hoped that his lover could be equal to him and that he wanted to keep his lover firmly by his side, the more he lost his mind. Maybe at this time, Pei Xuanhe can truly understand the difference between eagles and humans. What a mistake he made when he said that he was an eagle! Eagles are unruly, and they can be driven by humans after surviving their energy and arrogance. But humans have reason, emotions, and arrogance that surpasses all animals, not to mention the once proud and proud young master of Jiande. Pei Xuanhe suddenly realized his naivety back then, and Jiang Shaocen also realized his mistakes in the emotional entanglements with Pei, and understood that he should cherish his lover more. However, they are people living in society and in history. The Fangla Uprising and the Jingkang Disaster pulled them, like everyone else, into the background of history. Perhaps they have to thank this big change, wandering in a foreign land and traveling around mountains and rivers, so that they can get out of the original shackles, look at the world and realize their insignificance, and look at history to realize that this life is short. Perhaps at this time, Pei Xuanhe and Jiang Shaocen can truly put aside their past grudges and join hands for this life. In addition, let me talk about what the adults mentioned repeatedly in the article: "Mo Chun, the spring clothes are ready, five or six crowns, six or seven boys, bathing in Yi, dancing in the wind, chanting and returning." When Pei Xuanhe read this sentence in the Analects of Confucius when he was a child, he could yearn for it, and his heart should be like jade. But at that time, because he had not experienced any storms, maybe this dream was ignorant and vague to him. And then he was teased by Jiang Shaocen in the restaurant. When he was asked to write this sentence, his heart must have bled. His dream was laughed at by everyone here, so he tore up the paper. When he saw it, his heart ached, not only because his pure dream could not be realized, but also because the lover who should understand him the most used these words to torture him. Okay, let's end it here. I hesitated to write a long review until now because "Broken Wings" is too flawless and I was worried that I wouldn't be able to comment on it. But I have to write down my inner thoughts anyway, so that I can live up to such a good article. If you comment on something inappropriate, please don't laugh and bow.
I found this article when I was sorting out "Feitian" yesterday. Well, I admit that I fell in love with it the first time I read it, so I diligently searched for the original article. I used to always dive when reading articles. After reading Broken Wings, I especially want to say something. Thank you to the author for bringing us such a beautiful article. O(∩_∩)O. I remember writing that Xiao Pei once told Xiao Shen how to make an eagle stay by his side. The best way is to clip its wings. At this time, Xiao Shen really put all the jokes on Xiao Pei. It is said that it is called boiling the eagle. He could obviously guess that Xiao Shen would torture Xiao Pei, but his heart still hurt because it was cruel, hurting himself in the same way that he had hurt others. Sometimes I don't understand that the two of them have gone back and forth, and they have obviously never forgotten those times when they slept together and were warm to each other, but they can't trust each other and then hurt each other. This kind of scar is the deepest. I think even if they are still together in the end, they will never forget the pain of being hurt in their hearts, because their personalities are like this. They can die for each other, but they never dare to give their whole hearts to each other.
I didn't like this article when it was serialized in "Flying Sky" at first. I said that the revenge story "Kong Zun" was enough, and this one was completely inferior. It wasn't until later, when Pei Xuanpeng was freed from confinement, that he liked it. The articles are always filled with a touch of sadness and vague ambiguity. It's really attractive. The most impressive scene is the moment when Xiao Cen pushes Xiao Pei away among the red fallen leaves, and Xiao Pei's confession. The adult's writing is so beautiful that it's as if the scene is right in front of you. (I cried for a long time when I first watched it) But fortunately, the adult is not a stepmother, and the two of them are still together after going through countless ups and downs. Well, when that painting was discovered, it was really exciting, and of course H was exciting too. (This is the first time I see an adult write so much = =) The biggest regret is Xiao Shen. Sure enough, he likes Xiao Pei. Whether it was that kiss or that wry smile: "Sure enough, you are still together." The adult's writing is really good, with a good plot and just the right amount of abuse~~ Please continue to work hard to complete the new work~~
Well, it was really good. I clicked on it by accident, so I kept reading. The beginning may be a bit ordinary, but the closer to the end, the more exciting it becomes. I felt that the author's skill in describing emotional scenes was good and gripping. We fell into the atmosphere created by the author smoothly. Spread some flowers~~·
I have created a bar for Qingda University on Baidu. I hope that everyone who supports Qingdao University will support it and support it...
Is this the end? I feel like I still have a lot to learn...
The first time I read this article, I felt so sad when I saw the ending. Although it is HE, the feeling of desolation that the country has been destroyed and the mountains and rivers are still lingering. I thought the extra ending would be a little happier, but I was tortured again for no reason. . . These two people always give me a sense of wandering sadness~~
Nice article, give me some support!