Don't Give In to Sadness
Look Straight Toward Tomorrow
No One Is Alone, No Matter Who They Are
Everyone Has a Wish They Can Make Come True
(-- Mikuni Shimokawa, "Don't Give In to Sadness")
Forever means eternity.
Taking your hand once more, we'll be happy together, forever.
What I want most now is to grow old with you, slowly, slowly.
(Thanks to Jinguliang for designing the cover 030~)
[Full Spoiler Warning]
① This story is primarily about The Prince of Tennis. It does not follow the original work, and stands on its own.
② A warm, slow-burn story, 1v1, with a happy ending. Come join us~-3-~
[Announcement: Extra chapters will be updated irregularly. 2013/2/9]
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Ha ha ha ha!! Please follow up o>_
I think your article could be more concise. Moreover, if the characters in the novel use too many words such as "ah ah ah, ah ah ah ah", it will be easier to distance themselves from readers. Because in reality people rarely talk like this. Moreover, some things that have appeared in the narration do not need to be repeated in the dialogue, and there is no need to describe unimportant details, as long as everyone understands them. I like Gu Man's and Gu Man's articles, and I'm also learning to write articles. I found that their detailed descriptions were basically foreshadowing or characterizing, without any unnecessary burdens. And your storyline is pretty good. I think it would be better to focus on the description and characterization of the characters. Here are some changes I made to your extra story. What do you think? The winter morning is very cold, but the bed is very warm. After graduating from college, Tezuka went to the junior high school of Youth Academy as a tennis coach, while Yunyao kept changing jobs and was extremely distressed that he could not find a fixed job. On this day, Yunyao got up early and didn't make breakfast. Tezuka Kunimitsu had to make enough food and clothing by himself, and put the food for two people on the table. When he went to ask Yunyao to come over to eat, he found that she was completely absent-minded. Tezuka sipped the milk, the temperature was just right, and said: "Let's have breakfast, the work is not urgent." "How can you not be in a hurry! You would definitely be troubled..." Yun Yao angrily sat down at the dining table, bit into a piece of toast to vent his anger, took the milk from Guoguang, and had an idea flash in his mind. "How about I go to Qingxue and be the manager of the tennis department?" Yun Yao thought for a while, then lay weakly on the table and sighed: "It doesn't seem to work. There is no manager in the junior high school department... Ever since you took over as the coach of the tennis department, no one has dared to do it, so you just followed the trend and abolished this position." Tezuka cut the eggs evenly, moved them in front of Yunyao, watched her eat them in a daze, and said calmly: "Tennis club coach's wife." ------ A family story.
Spreading flowers ends hehehe~o(≧v≦)o~~ May you have good luck in the Year of the Snake~ Good luck~
Yoxi=-=~Spread flowers! Looking forward to new pits~ Even if school is about to start, I will come to remind you! ~
Suddenly I discovered that Xiao Xixi is a diligent guy = = It has only been so long and there are already 100,000 words. . . . . !!!!!!
Ah, the two of them have sex. . .