[Prince of Tennis] He and She

Xiao Xi, why does it take so much trouble to support you? The writing is pretty good. Next time, please write more about the writing department. I love reading it, haha

Xiao Xiwen is pretty good, come and take a look.

Well, I finally finished watching it. The ending is really surprising. But luckily there is a second part O(∩_∩)O~

I'm just waiting for my thick lines in the new article ww

Well, first of all, I have to apologize to Xiao Xi. I agreed on Wednesday night that I would give a long review on Thursday night, but because I had to give a speech this morning, I was busy with the manuscript yesterday and didn't have time to write it. I'm sorry. I wrote it as soon as I got back today. Come on, Xiao Xi, give me a hug. In fact, we are quite nervous to write this long review. JJ always discriminates against us, swallowing one by one and swallowing one by one. If this long review is also swallowed, I will really be pissed to death. It's so disgusting that I can't complain =_= As I write this, it suddenly occurred to me that the first Wangwang fanfic I read was also written by Fujiwen, Xiao Chenxi. After that, I couldn't stop reading Wangwang fanfics. I have read long-form, short-form, novice, Qingshui, and no-CP stories, and I have read any of the prince's novels… Because we are actually omnivores and read all kinds of articles, so at first we were squatting here and there in Jinjiang, and then we moved to Paipai. After Paipai was stopped on Baidu, we went to Tieba. Since Internet King fandom is still my preferred genre, after lurking in the Internet King fandom bar for a short time, I happened to be in Paipai. Pai Ba met Xiao Xi, and then he came to Jinjiang again, specifically to squat in Xiao Xi's trap. At that time, Hou seemed to have updated to Chapter 14, and then started to let go. I will read it when I am fatter. Now it is finally finished. In order to commemorate it, and to cheer Xiao Xi up, and prepare for the second part, we still take the risk and write a review. Okay, I admit that there is a lot of nonsense, okay, let's get back to the topic: Well, I also want to say that although Xiao Xi had already expected that you would identify Fuji as Genichi's Mr. Right, when I saw the end, I was still a little entangled for Atobe-sama, and the final ending was actually two letters, and it was so simple, like \"Mo Ran Qian Cheng\" said\"Although I knew there would be another one, it really broke my heart. However, watching the drama between two men and one woman is actually quite enjoyable\" Xiao Xi's writing style, the conception of the article, the composition of words and sentences, etc. Can be seen to be improving a little bit. There are many scenes and many dialogues, which can be seen after repeated thinking and revision. I like the titles of each of Xiao Xi's chapters. They are not childish or obscure. They fit the plot of each chapter very well. I like Xiao Xi's description of each scene... ... Xiao Xi, I have to say that you really put your heart into writing this article and put a lot of thought into nurturing this story. But Xiao Xi, are you focusing on the story and neglecting the coherence of the entire story? Some places are like foreshadowing, but they have never been explained clearly. Some places are not related to the plot or have been missed. In fact, I think the most important thing in a novel is to establish the image of the protagonist, including his personality, psychology, way of doing things, outlook on life, etc. As long as the image of the protagonist is highlighted, the whole story will be vivid, you said? Also, sometimes I feel that this is really just a novel, especially when Genichi's behavior is not consistent with reality. For example, in the last letter she wrote to Fuji, the person in her heart was Little Bear, right? Then when her life experience became clear and she had no choice but to leave her grandfather, she wrote to herself like this Why is most of the farewell letter from the person she cares about talking about her friendship with Qingxue and everyone, with only a few sentences showing her feelings for him? Even though she is a child who is not very brave and not strong, after going through so much, what else should be left in the letter to the person she cares about most? Just like a fish knowing whether it is warm or cold when drinking water, just like the source is one to the source, the source is one to the other, and Moutani is tolerant... Just like Zhang Ailing said: Some people will always be engraved in the memory. Even if you forget his voice, his smile, and his face, the feeling you have every time you think of him will never change. There are a thousand Hamlets in the hearts of a thousand readers. The above is just my personal opinion. Having said so much, my biggest wish is just that Xiaoxi will work hard in the future. Finally, I apologize again for not keeping my promise. Good night, dear.

First of all, Xiaoxi, I really want to grab you by the collar and yell, "Where is the queen we agreed on?" My gorgeous queen has lost her beauty and harmony like this...?! No CP, sister's balls hurt = = By the way, during this period, I really had no love for Wang Wang, especially for romance. But I still finished reading Xiaoxi's article. Watching Prince of Tennis was in elementary school. Now that all these years have passed, why do I feel like time has passed and my youth is no longer there? Phew~ He always saved his breakfast money and pocket money to go to the Internet cafe to surf the Internet. He accidentally fell in love with the Prince of Tennis and the spirit of the princes working hard for their dreams. He was shocked that Tezuka sacrificed his arm for the sake of responsibility. (In a low voice, of course the character's beauty is also a reason, hehe~) Xiaoxi's article gave me a different feeling, fresh and simple campus life, and the background of this article has passed the time of the original work, and has little to do with the original work. The heroine is not as self-important as in previous novels, thinking that everyone must revolve around her. Bah, I hate such a protagonist the most. Fortunately, Xiaoxi is not there. I am happy, touch it~ Also, Xiao Xi's beginning is well written, showing the girl's complex emotions, and the background scenery is well described to heighten the atmosphere. The second chapter describes the first meeting between Ah Yi (aunt?!) And the Queen, paving the way for the following and also foreshadowing the relationship between Ah Yi and the Queen. Also, I originally had a lot to say, but I got stuck for some reason. This is my first time writing such a long comment. (Applause.) [Since you can't walk by in a low-key manner, then just hold your head high and overlook everyone. . [It turns out that it is not just the satisfaction of the sense of smell, but the complete intoxication of the five senses. That is the greatest happiness. [Some disappeared pasts are not very important or even unimportant, and will eventually be forgotten. But now, the people and things around us at this moment are the most precious and rare. . [Some embarrassing and unspeakable behaviors, even if they are not close people, do not want to be known, and even become someone else's dessert. [If those who stay out of the incident are still dragged into the center of the whirlpool. So who would sympathize with someone who has no desire to step into their field? It seems that it is nothing more than seeking blessings for oneself, or else making one respect him. . Let us understand that Aihara Kazuya is an ordinary girl who can cry, laugh, be sad, and be happy, even if she is the girl Keigo Atobe likes. At the same time, she is also strong, unyielding even if she gets hurt... [No one can escape easily, it belongs to the fishing net swung down by Atobe Keigo himself. And Atobe Keigo, the Ice Emperor, deserves to be the KING. He is arrogant but not reckless, domineering but yet gentle. This is the kind of person that makes countless people admire him, because he is worthy, because he is KING, he is Atobe Keigo... "Aihara Ichi, do you think you can leave just because you left a letter?" "Aihara Ichi, do you think you can escape!" The queen was indignant, and so was I. My gorgeous queen was let go like this... Don't touch us or you'll get burned The flame of ice, cold and hot Don't come near us or you'll suffocate The sharp blade of ice will give you a powerful blow Kneel down Worship it Flattery The strong can dominate the weak don't resist Kneel down and worship Be afraid The winner can do whatever he wants with the loser Yes, we dominate the stadium Ice Emperor, Ice Emperor, Ice Emperor Whenever you fall forward, the fragrance of danger Hot burning, cold and penetrating life We will never burn out, just like the sun Fighting spirit is unstable, illusory and confused Kneel down Worship it Flattery The strong can dominate the weak don't resist Kneel down and worship Be afraid The winner can do whatever he wants with the loser Yes, we dominate the stadium Ice Emperor, Ice Emperor, Ice Emperor King's Landing Ice Emperor, Ice Emperor By now, the ending is no longer important. I hope Xiaoxi can write more touching and good articles. And there are so many scenes of the queen in the second part =. =Plop~~!!!

… Sad. . . . Hajime left Little Bear. . . Stinky Xiaoxi

I have been obsessed with HP fandom recently, and I have given up on Net King for a long time. Since it is exam week, I don't have much time to read novels. This article by Xiao Xi is the only Net King article I have read recently. Speaking of Net King fanfics, I used to like them very much and read many kinds. There are those that focus on the plot, some that skip the plot, and some that change the plot. I like each type of literature, but the most inclined one, I think, is probably the one that skips the plot. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that I am a fan of supporting characters and I hate omnipotent heroines and hate all the characters in the drama being blackened. This article by Xiao Xi is a fresh one, and the campus brings us a different world in Net King. At the beginning of the review, I want to make a complaint first. It's so abominable to have no CP! = =! And the ending of Your Uncle was so simple for me - even though I knew there would be another one, it really broke my heart. However, watching the drama of two men and one woman is actually quite enjoyable (covers chin and laughs evilly), so Mr. King shouldn't carelessly follow One's footsteps. At the beginning of the article, Xiao Xi points out the traces and details so that readers can understand the candidates of Nanzhu. However, I would like to point out that in the first half of the scene with the Ice Emperor and everyone, there are indeed some things that make me dissatisfied. The first is the foreshadowing of the old acquaintance with Atobe. Xiao Xi had a little bit of baggage at the beginning, but it didn't make it clear to me. When I first read it, it felt like it was pulled out just to make the two of them meet and get to know each other. Regarding "One", Ninzuya said, Atobe said it, and even Igarashi said that at the beginning, everyone felt that this One was an amazing and powerful person, but later on, we only knew that she was abducted Hajime and was rescued by Atobe, and there was nothing else. It was really confusing and unacceptable. Next is the heroine Aihara Kazu. When she first appeared in the movie, with the exaggeration of Yu Xiaoxi's environment, dialogue and writing style, I still liked such a girl very much. But as the life of Hyotei Academy unfolded, and as she interacted with everyone in Hyotei, I lost feeling for this heroine, and even gritted my teeth a little. What is the relationship between Wataya and Ninzu? - -? A misunderstanding between her and Ha Yi? Was it solved inexplicably like this? What mentality does Ha Yi have regarding volleyball? When she was ostracized by everyone in the volleyball club, she was treated coldly? Just disappointed? Then she was inexplicably allowed to join the volleyball team without any explanation in the following chapters, and she was favored and treated differently by the minister. Obviously in the previous chapters, the minister was still conniving and watching with cold eyes. All of this makes me feel that there are many things in Xiao Xi's article that are not explained clearly enough, making it a bit difficult to read. It seems that I can imagine a lot of things, but I can't prove them. There is a feeling of being unclear. Of course, in addition to these, Xiaoxi's writing style, description of character emotions, and some technical things are already excellent. I hope more efforts will be made in the plot and the image of the heroine will be well shaped. After all, a heroine that makes readers like it can be considered a success, right? Going back further, I found that I had a much better impression of Qing Xue in Xiao Xi's works than the others in Ice Emperor. I really liked their fights and interactions around them. Because I read it on my mobile phone and read it in two parts. Generally speaking, the first 50% didn't feel as good to me as the last 50%. After thinking about it over and over, maybe it's because the plot is deeper and the reader's sense of involvement is higher. Hajime is actually not a strong child. Although she performed very well in some aspects, at the end because her life experience became clear, she gave up so many friends, especially the phone call to Miyatani. But Xiaoxi did not point it out in detail in the article. Regarding Atobu and Fuji, Xiao Xi actually gave Atobu a lot more scenes than Fuji. I guess the Nanzhu in the next movie should be Atobu, right? (There will be prizes for correct guesses and no penalties for wrong guesses) This ends my comment. I hope it is helpful to you~ Keep up the good work~ Sorry for my late review. Mo Ran Qian Chen Comment Team A big cat.

Soul light = =+ Isn't it Atobe? Won't I tell you that I prefer Atobe = =

Ah, three years...! It's been so long, I must have graduated from high school. . .