The Frozen Apocalypse: My Wife Brought Supplies Through the Portal

It feels like the author cut off more than half of the outline and ended it in a hurry, which is a pity.

What's nice is that Youyou has too few highlights. The most beautiful flaw is that there is too little emotion. I want to see Tiantian's daily life.

The copywriting is a standard cool text template, but the subsequent plot direction is increasingly deviating from this label (the evaluation is that the original plot has grown its own flesh and blood), and the character design may not have caught the preferences of many readers (does it feel like it has struck a mine to be precise?). Many factors, including the discontinuation of updates, have led to the failure to cater to the preferences of the target readers attracted by the copywriting label. The decline in data is indeed inevitable. . . But for me, I really love this book. The various female character designs in the group portraits are really difficult to find in Jin Baili. Although the later data of this article is not good, it can be seen that the writing style, logic, plot, character creation, and the depth of the author's thoughts are definitely very good in online articles. These are enough for me to trust the author's level and look forward to the author's next article.

In fact, authors should not worry about whether to write interesting articles or not. First of all, your Lily label and title are enough to prove that the plot of your protagonist is not very successful. The more you write, the more biased it becomes. I feel that the weight of the secondary CP is much higher than the weight of the protagonist CP. Later, the author wanted to change the ratio and gave it to another pair of CPs. Then the protagonist's share was slightly larger, but it was not so easy to save it at the end, so the end of the article was actually quite sloppy. The more I look at the back, I actually find that there are fewer and fewer screen segments. I don't know if there are some factors involved. It is undeniable that the author has a good grasp of the three-dimensional image of each person, but to be honest, the overall plot is not very complete. There are some ideas or foreshadowing and foreshadowing that he wanted to write, but they were not shown later. It feels like I just roughly set a broad framework before writing, and then went off track during the refinement process, and it may be mixed together for various reasons. But the general content and plot can be read if you talk about it in paragraphs. To be honest, when I came in, besides the fact that the title was a doomsday novel that attracted me, I also cared very much about the protagonist's emotional path. But it felt very bland. All I can say is that it was indeed written according to the outline, but there was no further development at all. This is really a pity.

As the protagonist, Shang You has no highlights and few emotional lines. It is very abrupt and has an inexplicable ending. It is a pity.

Shangyou is a succubus

It ended in a hurry, which is a pity. It felt very good. I still want to continue watching the infrastructure.

It ended so suddenly! ? I thought there were many more behind?

It ended a bit hastily, I hope the extra CP can be added to the highlights of the secondary CP and the protagonist

OI like this copy... I want to see more stories about the three people in the last days, so gentle