[Everyone's Favorite] The Sword Sect's Only Junior Sister

Compared with the book itself, the author has more fun breaking the defense on Weibo 😂

The plot of this book is generally okay, and the twist at the end is also surprising. But it does have many shortcomings. First of all, it is really like reading the outline. The senior brother and the three senior brothers should be relatively important characters, but they seem to be light and airy. I feel that there can be more descriptions in this aspect. Secondly, did the author forget about the fifth senior brother? I really like the earrings that the fifth senior brother gave Suisui. Can the author add some plot points about the fifth senior brother? In the end, the author was really in a hurry to finish the book. There were a lot of typos and sentences. I don't even know whether the fifth senior brother's name is Song Yaosheng or not. This book was written carefully, just like the previous ones. I think it can have at least more than a hundred chapters. The author's writing style should be okay and it can be sustained, but he is not too anxious to finish it. Zheng Chongli is also very fascinated by his feelings for the heroine. To be honest, Zheng Chongli became obsessed with the heroine, what happened after he was expelled from the master, and how he finally developed inner demons, including his feelings in the inner demons. I could write two or three chapters on these. It's too perfunctory to explain all this in more than two thousand words. I really think the plot is good. If the author writes it well, the twist at the end will be amazing. Many people are following this book. I have been waiting for the completion for a long time. I hope the author can read it and find time to revise it. The heroine is very good. Please add more plots and descriptions. I hope to see that the author has revised the article next time. I really like this book. Can the author take it seriously?

Why is it that the heroine is the perpetrator again for no apparent reason? [Laughter and cry][laughter and cry][laughter and cry]. Did Zheng Zheng say he was innocent? The dead man is so disgusting 🤷 🤷 🤷 🤷 🤷 Do you hate the heroine so much when you kick him out? The heroine was so powerful in the early stage, but she was inexplicably tricked by this man [transformed]. If the heroine hurts you, just bear with me [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry] [cover your face and laugh and cry]

While saying that she thought the book was not finished, she uninstalled Weibo for fear of being scolded. She laughed to death. Didn't she run away knowing that she would definitely be scolded?

I can't say that the writing is bad even though I'm driving high and low [covering my face, laughing and crying]. The author is obviously talented. The feeling of confrontation is always well written. The characters are very exciting and you can establish a character in a few words. However, the shortcomings are also obvious. The story is always incomplete and feels like it's a waste of time. This article is even more obvious. Some characters have not been developed at all and they are gone.

You can check out the author wb. He has a lot of outrageous comments.

Therefore, when writing a novel, you need to finish it in one go. If a half-finished article like this is not written for too long, the novel will lose its original aura, and the upper and lower parts will appear very separated. Even if there is an outline, the overall style will go astray.

It feels like it is unfinished 💔. The original plot line should be very long, but now I am rushing to finish it. The plot direction is very strange, and many things have been cut off and not started. It is like reading a synopsis of the story. Xu Chi's emotions and behavior are so inexplicable, like a tool man who suddenly appeared to follow the plot. And isn't the heroine and Zhao Yu married? Don't they live and die together? The marriage contract has not been broken yet. If he dies, won't the heroine die as well? The ending is so poorly written that it ends just for the sake of completion. Zheng Chongli's part also feels disconnected. There is no foreshadowing or hinting in the previous text. There are very few scenes between this character and the heroine, but the ending comes suddenly like this. It feels like I dreamed of writing which sentence. If he has feelings for the heroine, why did he help Zhao Yu QJ the heroine's marriage contract in the previous article? I heard his voice from the heroine before, and he has no feelings for the heroine. He is worried that the heroine is a disaster and misses her. [Loading] I really don't understand [vomiting blood]

Not charging is the last conscience of the author.

Damn it, what an ending, I laughed