The Wealthy Young Master Is Forced Into a Contract Relationship

Hey hey here I come! After collecting it yesterday, I have time to read the article slowly today. Now that I have read Chapter 5, I have found some highlights and small suggestions. However, because I am not very good at this type of subject matter, if there is any misunderstanding of the plot, please ignore it and accept my praise! [Highlights of the plot] (1) I think the writing style is very smooth and has a strong sense of atmosphere, especially the indifferent and condescending attitude of the Su family towards the protagonist. I quickly introduced it. The dialogues are also very natural. The tone and personality of the characters are clearly separated. You can directly tell through the dialogue who is rich and who is stupid hahaha. The current pace of the plot is very fast, and the identity of the protagonist, family relationships and core conflicts are quickly explained within five chapters. (2) The humorous writing method is very interesting. The protagonist's self-deprecation or joking attitude toward certain situations prevents the plot from seeming too heavy and makes it very enjoyable to read. (3) Su Anlan was originally a programmer, but later became an illegitimate child of a wealthy family through books, but his character mechanism is very good at disguise. His attributes of "life comes first" + "smart personality" + "not actively fighting for family property" are great. Fu Jinnian has a high IQ + strength + a sense of danger, a typical "deep city + ruthless but partial to the protagonist" setting. Although he is the heir to a wealthy family, he is also a pawn in the family marriage. The sparks between the two protagonists are great. Fu Jinnian gradually showed interest in Su Anlan from the initial observation, and even felt a bit "teasing". (4) Other supporting characters are also very distinctive. For example, Su Ancheng looks a bit like a smiling tiger. He should be a very troublesome opponent in the future. There are also bad family elders who should be a stumbling block to the main plot in the later stage. By the way, regarding the role of father, although he has not yet appeared, judging from the description, he should be a typical "hypocrite + extremely controlling family head" type? [Suggestions that can be fine-tuned] The following personal opinions are only for the first five chapters. The author can consider it carefully. (1) I feel that there is a slight contradiction between Su Anlan's low-key and actual behavior, because he set the goal of "survival" + "suffering", but his reaction at the banquet and his response to the Su family have shown a certain degree of high emotional intelligence and integrity. This would make me say that I don't want to fight for the family property, but at the same time I'm teasing the villain and playing with the situation, which would be a bit inconsistent. Perhaps he can be more restrained and tend to "go with the flow" rather than actively engage in scheming. For example, when he notices that Su Ancheng is trying to suppress him, he does not necessarily have to respond directly with words. He can avoid it in a more subtle way to show his caution. (2) Fu Jinnian's sudden gift of money was a bit abrupt, haha. Before they had established an emotional foundation, Fu Jinnian directly transferred 100 Wan, it's a bit of a sudden intellectual reduction, but I understand that this may be a humorous technique, but I think it can give Fu Jinnian some emotional foreshadowing, such as "Give you some start-up capital to prevent you from being bullied too badly by the Su family." Or "You don't want to fight for the family property? OK, then I will give you another way out." Such excuses can make the character's behavior more consistent with his setting logic. (3) Maybe Su Anlan can add a little more confusion to ordinary people, because he seemed to adapt to the world immediately after entering the book. He was originally just a programmer, and suddenly entered the disputes of the wealthy family. He should be a little overwhelmed. For example, he has an inner monologue: "Can I really deal with this group of people? If I mess up, will I be killed directly?" This can make his character growth curve more natural. (4) Fu Jinnian is a strong character, but he became interested in Su Anlan a little too quickly. I think he should be very cautious and calculating but still graceful, so maybe he can increase the process of testing Su Anlan, and then change his attitude towards Su Anlan (because he is surprised by Su Anlan's intelligence, instead of acquiescing that Su Anlan is a special being from the beginning), which will give a slightly more layered feeling. [Final chat] This article is very relaxing and enjoyable to read, and the overall pace is fast and the characters are tense. The characters are clearly created and will be very attractive. If there are more psychological activities of the main characters, it will be more delicate. But because I have only read Chapter 5 so far, if the subsequent plot has been supplemented, then don't worry about it, haha, please continue to create happily! I wish you happiness every day and may your thoughts flow freely!

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