A Beautiful Uchiha Must Strive to Improve

Yes, it's a very happy ending! Everyone is very happy 😭 I haven't seen enough of the follow-up.

Wow wow wow 🤩 🤩 🤩, looking forward to a bunch of ifs.

Let Uchiha Cangyue be great forever!

All, hahaha, support the baby to have three thousand beautiful men

Okay, can we all?

I have been reading this article for a long time. Although the writing style was a bit awkward at first, overall it is quite eye-catching, so I will give it a long review. Spoiler warning in the front row. It's really enjoyable to read the whole story... Generally speaking, as a long novel, it only describes the three-war period of three to four years, so the content expansion is quite sufficient. The extra content at the end is also quite long, covering everything from the Warring States Period to the Fourth War to the movie theater, showing most of the imaginable perspectives. First of all, I would like to praise the setting of the heroine Cang Yue - a very difficult character to write, and like the moon in the name, it is a very complex polyhedron (the moon sculpture is quite suitable). He looks gentle but is actually quite bottom-lined and decisive in his heart, and although he doesn't look like an Uchiha, he actually hides a deep paranoia... It can be said that he is an absolutely wise man with a strong personality and charm. The logic of her actions is always online, and there is no talk of forcibly subduing her wits in order to create conflicts (the few times she was drunk felt like a small adjustment at best, so although it was a bit weird, it was okay). Although this article is considered a Uchiha-friendly article from the "Uchiha Center", the Uchiha in the article is not actually a completely benign existence. There is a large part of the story in which the heroine is competing with her family. And the image of Haubara in this article is completely hostile, which makes people gnash their teeth and just want to scold this old immortal for being still alive (hey). The combat power system in this article is very interesting. The real plug-in is actually the heroine's own brain and "volume". The upgrade part of the whole article is quite down-to-earth. Even if the upgrade speed is very fast, it does not have that nihilistic golden finger feeling. But the most heartbreaking thing about the whole story is that Cang Yue is too young (or maybe her timeline is too small)... The body has been rapidly switching between the two states of injury and healing. While reading, I always sighed, if only she could be given more time to grow up ( The only pity in the whole article is that I don't see the youth/adult fourth generation that focuses on the heyday), and the section in the middle when the yin chakra is about to overwhelm the yang chakra really makes people feel like walking on a tightrope... Constantly jumping on the killing line. Generally speaking, the proportion of love lines is not very high. Kakashi's stock is a long-term flow, and his sincerity is delivered quite early (it feels like he is quite a royal person, but it is a pity that he has a mission line, and his presence is not high in the middle and late stages, so there is nothing to comment on). Shisui only really gets it in the later stages. The temptation (I personally don't have any bad feelings towards the backstab part, after all, I know it's a conspiracy, and although Shisui showed that he was "heartbeat" before, there was actually a slight estrangement. Uchiha just had to have his heart broken several times and was on the verge of madness to get the taste), and after the temptation, he started to fight and fight. Of the two love lines, one is more about tacit companionship, and the other is more about explosions in the later stages. I am actually okay with both love lines, I just like to watch Shura Field (hehe). There are also some single arrowheads that I personally feel are delicious (Iku Uchiha and the members of the Senju Hinata family). There are also many original plots in the article about other Konoha families, Uchiha Senju Hinata, especially the expansion of the Uchiha clan, which is quite rich, but I think it is quite reasonable... How can a big family with hundreds of people make a name in the ninja world without several strong men who are so famous that their bloodstains are frightening even after being exterminated several years ago... The two original characters, Uchiha Mei and Uchiha Iku, are also very good. They are powerful and capable of taking over, but they cannot steal the protagonist's edge. The several original summoned beasts in the article are also very interesting, but it is a pity that there is no ink. In the early stage, they are mainly used in other battlefields, and in the later stage, they are mostly used for cuteness (the main feeling is that they cannot be integrated into the main line, and there is no need to exist, but it is a pity to give up directly. In fact, their settings are quite interesting in the early stage. It would be more complete if there were one or two exclusive highlight scenes, but unfortunately the plot in the later stage is too tight to join). But the part that touches me the most is actually about Cang Yue's own character and the author's description of other ninjas... Although the purpose at the beginning was just to win over people, but as the story develops, it can be said that Cang Yue is really deliberately thinking about ordinary people who have nothing to do with her... Cang Yue is completely a person who cares for his companions and will not be unduly kind to his opponents (and The reason why she was able to gain the trust of major ninja clans and ordinary ninjas is really not a passing plot. There are quite a lot of words in the plot outlining the dedication and "love" of both parties and the true feedback). It is really novel to bring other ninja friends to travel together in the following episode (because according to my stereotype, traveling through the Warring States Period/Fourth War basically takes CP with them). It is really rare to see a plot like everyone is for me and I am for everyone in fan fiction like Naruto... Cang Yue really takes on the role of Liangzi who has greater ability and greater responsibility. This kind of writing that truly puts the "ideal" into practice is much more moving than simply evading output or cheating to save the scene. However, there are also some shortcomings. After looking at the author's homepage, it seems that he is a new author, so the writing style is a bit immature and has the stereotype of ancient Internet articles. Some imaginative magic modifications and obvious character likes and dislikes (eye movement) are also a bit eye-catching, but these are perfectly normal for fandoms, and it all depends on the fandom. This level of OOC is perfectly normal.

Finished with flowers, super pretty 🤩

The flowers are sprinkled at the end, it's really super nice.

Congratulations on the completion. It feels pretty good. Come on, look forward to the new article!

Damn, I also want to have a spin-off with all members and single arrows 🐶