Paranormal Investigations Bureau

First of all, I sincerely feel sorry for Mao Da. In fact, I am not a BW lover, but I am a mobile phone user and have a non-intelligent handwriting machine to write a review. It is really not easy for me to write a review. So, forgive me until now. I'm done rambling, in order to make up for my inner guilt, I decided to leave a review! ! The above BY——Xiao Yang Text: In fact, I first discovered the existence of the second part, and then started to find this article. To be honest, I have always felt that writing supernatural novels is not a pleasant thing. Moreover, if you don't write well, it can easily lead to bad writing. As far as a certain Yang himself is concerned, his love for supernatural literature comes from a family that has appeared in this article - the Abe family. I like Dream Pillow Tapir, "Onmyoji" and "Kukai Kukai", which is why I am pursuing this article. It took me a week (forgive me for taking so long, because I couldn't read it at work, and I didn't have time to read it after I got home, so I could only watch it while standing on the light rail on my way to and from get off work. It was pretty good to finish it in one week) to finish reading the first part. Only then did I realize that Mao Da's novel was unexpectedly attractive to me. First of all, people who write rigorously are attractive. Among the 330,000 words in the full text, except for typos in a few chapters, almost every word is accurate. Although this is a matter of course, it is easier said than done. What is really done is not that simple. Just by repeating proofreading, it is not possible to achieve such an effect just once, at least not by a certain Yang. So just the attitude of writing the article has already made Mouyang give this article sixty points. Secondly, the author is sincere and touching. After the case in the article, most of them elaborate on the reasons and background of their writing one by one. The origin of the real events allows people to have a deeper understanding of the author's intention and the story behind it during the process of reading the article. Such behavior can make people see the author's sincerity and intention in writing, so I added five points on the basis of sixty; Smart authors will learn from each other's strong points and make up for their shortcomings, making people convinced. There are many ghosts, demons and monsters in the story. Of course, there are also many Taoist legends about exorcism and evil-fighting techniques. In fact, such information is not easy to collect. The process of fighting monsters, described in words, is indeed a disadvantage from a certain perspective. However, when the data was actually incomplete, Maoda used another description method to fill in it and complete the process that was originally a little thin. This is a very smart and effective method. Such flexibility is very admirable, and a certain Yang added five points in his heart. Then, in Yang's opinion, the fullness of the characters is the most eye-catching aspect of the entire article! The first male protagonist, Ouyang Che, appears to be cold and heartless, but is fiery on the inside. He is one of the most outstanding characters in this article (Qinghun: His eyes are shining, Xiao Che is one of the most outstanding characters, so good! Yang: Well... Well, there is no one, no one. =.=|||) Greedy for money, good at eating, lazy, and bad-mouthed, this kid seems to be a combination of all kinds of bad things, but he has the softest and kindest heart that outsiders can't see. There are three realms of human beings: one is to see through oneself, the other is to see through the world, and the third is to see through all living beings. And Xiao Che made me feel that he was only in the second stage at the beginning, but as he slowly experienced it, (well, Qinghun was staring at me!!=.=|||) Well, there was also the influence of Qinghun, and he gradually began to grow towards the third stage. This kind of growth is natural and unobtrusive. Mao Da has grasped this rhythm very well. Neither increasing nor decreasing, this is the rare thing. I believe there is no rotten girl who doesn't love a powerful, sinister, super-loved and loyal dog like Qinghun. In fact, Qinghun and Che have personalities that complement and tolerate each other. The seemingly gentle Qinghun is actually the opposite of the seemingly ruthless Che. Qinghun, who looks gentle on the outside, is actually one of the coldest people in this article (Qinghun glares!! Let's keep writing @.@). All his gentleness and tolerance are reserved only for Xiao Che. Even the kindness towards Xiao Anzi almost comes from Aiwujiwu. In his world, except for Xiao Che, everything else is just floating clouds. All the three views of human beings, etc., Are just what he wants to learn about the human world and the environment in which Xiao Che lives. Although you know it, you don't necessarily understand it. Although you obey it, you don't necessarily accept it. There is only one Ouyang Che in everything, do what Xiao Che likes and don't do what Xiao Che hates. (Qinghun smiled and said: This is natural. Mouyang wiped the cold sweat on his head and sighed: Finally passed the test. Then is your blind date something Xiao Che likes? Qinghun went crazy and directly PIA flew to Mouyang. Mouyang was speechless and slapped himself as he walked away: "You are so mean") The contrasting personalities of the two male protagonists add to the excitement of this article. So, for two people, I added ten points each. (Xiao Anzi Lasagna: I forgot about the even bird!!) As for Xiao Anzi, there was a bit of soy sauce before (Xiao An cried: This is not Su Ou's mistake!) Of course, it was because Xiao An didn't even see through his basic self at that time. What I want, what I want to do, and what kind of state I want to achieve are all ignorant and confused. His progress is obvious to all. He was originally an ordinary student who was greedy for life and afraid of death, wanted to achieve great things, but had no ability (Xiao Anzi cried: Master, a certain Yang is humiliating me. Xiao Che whipped: How humiliating, this is a fact. Xiao Anzi:...). As this article progresses, progress is slowly made and breakthroughs are made, from the beginning when he struggled alone for the little cannon fodder Miss Ding, to later using his firm will to withstand a whole-body transformation similar to marrow cleansing, and then to never leaving his master and Qinghun at the critical moment, until finally Xiao Lingzi's soul flew away, which allowed him to grow and break through quickly, from being ignorant of everything to directly understanding the way of heaven and humanity. This is a rare growth, but it is also a natural growth. After all, to achieve this, not only everything about Xiao Lingzi was sacrificed, but also Xiao Anzi's own ignorant feelings! ! Regarding Xiao Anzi's fondness for playing with treasures and his sigh of growth, Mouyang gave it another five points! (Xiao Anzi's face is full of confidence: He is a divine horse, he is a divine horse, he is a divine horse, only five points... In his eyes from afar...) To sum up, the basic score of this article is based on 100%, and Yang has given a high score of 95 points. However, Mao Da, the following content is just a little bit of nitpicking made by a certain Yang when reading the article, a little bit of finding bones in the egg, a little bit of making trouble. Please let Mao Da laugh it off and take it seriously. The pace of the story is very fast. If we use the standards of idol dramas, it is like a sun drama. Although there is something wrong between Sun Country and □□ now, this does not prevent Mouyang from admiring many excellent sun dramas in the past. Moreover, in order to create a certain atmosphere and amaze people, Maoda often changes scenes at critical moments, or uses side descriptions to control or slow down the process at critical moments, such as the weather or the surrounding environment. If this action is used properly, it will naturally be like a beautiful oil painting, mounted in a beautiful frame, with the effect of reflecting and contrasting each other. However, if it is used too frequently, or if it is not controlled well, it will lead to us watching a TV program on a certain fruit channel, and when we see the highlights, an advertisement will suddenly appear. Anyway, the effect will be reduced and the enthusiasm will be reduced. Maoda may wish to give some appropriate consideration to this point in future articles. Second, some of the threads in the article are too shallow. The breadth of the plot is sufficient, but the depth is lacking. I think this may be the result of Mao Da not thinking enough about the plot when writing the article, or due to insufficient information. After all, in addition to being a supernatural article, this article also has the tone of a criminal investigation article. The case does not have enough depth and may become a fatal flaw in the development of the plot. In summary, Yang could not bear to deduct ten points in his heart. Adding and subtracting like this, Wen Yang gave a score of eighty-five. But this is just a little feeling that Yang has when he sees the end of the first part. If it is a football match, it is just a score in the first half. As for what was said in the review, if there is anything wrong or unreasonable, please forgive me. Then, a certain Yang will continue to watch the second part. Now, Mao Da's second part is finished, and it's too late to ask for anything. (Yang twists the handkerchief: Xiao Anzi, can Le Ling come out in the second part? I want to see him. Xiao Anzi rolls his eyes: I won't tell you, I won't tell you anything. You are a bad girl, huh!!) So if Mao Da finds the above suggestions useful, you may wish to use them as a reference when writing articles in the future. If you feel that a certain Yang didn't hit the point, please just laugh it off and show that you don't mind. After all, Yang had been shameless for so long, so what could he ask for? Well, when watching the second part, Yang tried his best not to be BW. Uh... Then I'll work hard and try to write another long review to appease Mao for his hard work in updating the article! Haha, I had no idea what I was talking about at the end of writing. I just bowed and ended! (^P^) ----------The above BY, a certain Yang.

I have a weak question, will there be a story about Xiao Xuzi and Le Ling?

I think the author should give Xiao Xuzi a small attacker. I really want to see it.

Great article! Looking forward to the second part!

I'm really looking forward to the second part. I'll have to let you know when the pit will be opened.

I really thought Chu Han actually had something to play for...

Woo woo woo... Miss me so much... I really want to read new articles Waiting for me to die...

I watched it in one go and left a scratch... Looking for new tricks... The first part only solved the relationship problems between these two people. Didn't they tell about their life and identity... By the way, if Qing Qing and Qing Che will be together forever, will Murong Che's children's shoes be "not human" in the future? ? ?

I finished reading it in one go. Maomao writes well. I look forward to the new articles!

Little Lingzi is so pitiful... I like what he said very much! Why does Mao have to be like this! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tears What should I do, little Anzi? ! ! ! ! An Ling, this CP, I am very rare to say! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The crack in the wall requires Xiao Lingzi to be reincarnated! Ration Xiao Anzi! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !