City of Desire

I was a little sad to see it. The ex-boyfriend character represented by Guan Yijia is my biggest hatred. It is like the lyrics of the divine song Love Business. At first, if you wanted to break up, break up, but now you want to use true love to coax me back~~_(:з∠)_A character like Guan Yijia, no matter how sad the reason he uses to explain why he left in the first place, I don't like him, damn it. About the topic Well, this article Maomao is probably talking about "desire" in the context of "this is a materialistic society". At the beginning, Zi Qiu was a typical character with no joy and no sadness. He showed no mercy to the criminals who were crazy about desire. He turned around and fed his head to the dog (huh?). He advocated that "desire is wrong." But at the end, the god of death resolutely abandoned his godhead in order to stay with his gay friend. At this time, the theme of "a human being can only have seven emotions and six desires" is coming out. Well, at the beginning, I wanted to leave a message. Xiaoqiu's view of desire is too childish, but after seeing it, I realized that, sure enough, I said that Maomao is not so naive╰(￣▽￣)╮ Like one. About the plot In addition, what I like the most, what Maomao is best at, and what the articles have always been the best about, is the process of two people getting to know each other and falling in love. Nowadays, many novels make me very distressed. Damn it, Gongshou and Gongshou get together inexplicably. Who are you trying to coax about falling in love at first sight? I have always believed that everything has a reason, including love. Zi Qiu looks at Da Mi in a different light because of his pure nature (...) And feels good about his care, while Da Mi develops a desire to protect Zi Qiu because of his purity. It all starts here. Play tricks on each other, take photos of each other, and go to the amusement park. The world between the two of them lived happily. For a person like me, I almost don't know how to fall in love. Looking at these two people, I suddenly felt a warm feeling. I read a novel last night, and for no apparent reason, they got together and had sex for the rest of their lives. Damn it, they were all in bad shape. Including movies, most of them like to tell the story of two people overcoming various difficulties after falling in love. I felt so depressed when I watched them. Could it be that I've been having bad luck lately? I remember that the author of the articles I had read in the past wrote very smoothly about the process of falling in love... I just want to shake the shoulders of these inexplicable authors and roar: Why are they all rolled up together? Have you eaten up your logic? So I finished reading this novel today, and it couldn't be more wonderful to watch the emotions gradually heat up. In addition, the plot development of Maomao is very reasonable, and the introduction of characters is not very abrupt. The shortcoming is that, well, it feels like it pays too much attention to the plot, and the villains are a bit, well, the same. About writing style To be honest, "City of Desire" is better written than "The Little Taoist Practitioner". It has a feeling of coming slowly, with a good rhythm, slow and fast. Maybe heavy stuff is easier to write? But "City of Desire" reads very naturally (although in the later period I only focused on the attack and the attack and skipped a lot of cannon fodder...) Also, after reading the whole article, I still don't know what Lawyer Mi looks like... How can I put it, Maomao tells the story very well (much better than me at this point), but it seems to be somewhat lacking in characterization. For example, Lawyer Mi, he is a smart man, values ​​friendship, and is good at cooking (marry me). Then what? I won't create it... The characters are not three-dimensional enough. In this way, it will appear to be the same and drowned in the vast sea of people... Moreover, the large number of secondary characters are so scene-stealing! Pain... It's probably Maomao's habit to use the fate of these characters to tell stories to everyone. I won't say that I almost wrote a story like this... In fact, I wanted to write a supernatural article a while ago, but it took me a long time to conceive of it but the idea was stillborn. It's really hard to write supernatural stories… Especially this kind of story with a different story, the secondary character Tai Niima steals the scene, and the protagonist is squeezed into a corner and can be repaired. This violates the meaning of "protagonist". Damn it. Classics like "The Book of the Dead" still have this problem. Duan Lin is okay, Mu Zi is just a soy sauce, damn... It's too far off topic, but anyway, it's just a suggestion. In fact, this is a contradictory issue. The author wants to tell the truth through these stories, but the readers want to see the love through the stories. The goals of both parties are deviated... Alas. The description of details is somewhat lacking. Kindness. But fortunately, the story looks interesting and the pacing is also very good. It's just that I was stunned for a long time at the end, it felt so rushed... There was no explanation of what happened to Mr. Guan, Muyu, and Erpu... That's roughly it. Although I can only praise your strengths without talking about your shortcomings, there will be no progress... Of course I hope that the cat will get better and better~~give me a kiss~~ When I become a great god in the future, I can come to your cat's nest and play tricks. Hahaha, I want all readers to know that Cat Cat is under my contract! I want to pounce on you with the envy and hatred in others' eyes, hahaha! ! ! Bang bang bang! ! !

I really hate people like Zhu Ping who think they are interfering in other people's lives.

Ah, a little BUG The three-headed dog of hell is from Western mythology. Cat, you have traveled through time. There are probably mythical beasts in the underworld to listen to_(:з∠)_

Damn it, it just speaks my mind! ! ! !

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! ! So sweet to me! ! ! ! ! So loving and helpful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The clerk's inner OS laughs and CRYs hahahaha Like it very much! ! !

Wow, our dear family has finished writing it, but looking at the ending, I feel like there is still more to follow!

Wow, our dear one has been very diligent recently, not bad! ! !

Um, why is my message missing? What is the situation?

Hey, he is also a tragic character. People only see clearly what they really want when they are about to lose it!

I'm here to check in. Can our dear ones see me? ! !