I Personally Raised My Master’s Mad Obsession

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The confrontation between drunkenly breaking into the pavilion was full of tension, and the collision of excitement and coldness brought to life Ana Shen's wariness and Su Yihuan's naivety. Ana Shen tried repeatedly, but her drunken state disrupted her rhythm. There was unconscious connivance hidden in her dislike. Lin Wan's famous scene of breaking through an ambiguous scene fully exposed Ana Shen's subconscious guarding against him, and his wavering was revealed without any lines. Later, it was discovered that An Shenxiang had been swapped, and the hidden line was instantly spread, and the reversal was neat. Su Yihuan's dazed look was completely in line with her usual noisy temperament. It looked funny and real. There are a lot of foreshadowings hidden in the whole chapter, and the relationship between the two people also quietly progresses. The more you read, the more fascinating it becomes. 💪

The library section starts off very well. Su Yihuan had a restless temper. She had doubts in her heart, so she looked through books to check. I casually flipped through an old and unpopular book, and who knew it was the forbidden classic "Young Maid's Blood Sacrifice". It was covered with blood-colored curse marks on the spot, and disappeared out of thin air in the blink of an eye. The whole process is written according to her own feelings. Panic, confusion, and inner murmuring are all the most real and natural reactions. Not long after I encountered something strange, I was attracted by various secrets in the unofficial history. I complained when I needed to complain, and I was casual when I needed to be casual. Such a lively and out-of-the-box appearance immediately attracted people's attention. ៷>ᴗᰔ

When I finished reading this chapter, all I could think of was Su Yihuan lying on the pile of books, her eyes shining brightly at Ana Shen, and I couldn't even suppress the smile on my lips. It is obviously a clichéd "first encounter in the library" scene, but it is written vividly and poignantly, and even the air is filled with a cowardly and flirtatious pulling feeling. The more you read, the more you get. 😆 Su Yihuan's vividness is the most gripping part of this chapter. She was either the perfect image with a "heroine halo", or she was a very unlucky little disciple - she had just been punished to sweep the floor, and was buried in a fallen book after being lazy to take a nap. She was stuck between "The Secret of Dual Cultivation" and "A Guide to Preventing Fraud in the Immortal World" and could not move. She also complained that the library was a "scumbag project." One second she was sighing in the pile of books, envious of fellow practitioners with spiritual roots, and all she could think about was "if only I had spiritual roots, I would wander around the world doing chivalry and doing justice." She looked like a pitiful little girl who had been tempered by tutoring; but the next second she heard the footsteps, she switched to pretending dead mode and looked up to see who was coming. Her frustration immediately disappeared. When she was spitting the rainbow fart at Ana Shen, her palms were already sweating. She shouted "Senior Brother Beauty", and she was so panicked that even her words were confused. One moment she said that she was "fair-skinned, beautiful and long-legged, 18 years old and hardworking and virtuous". The next moment she regarded Ana Shen as the male favorite of Immortal Fang Fei. After saying this, she was so shocked that she asked, "Can I still withdraw?" This contrast between talking nonsense and panicking in the heart is not artificial at all, she just looks like an ordinary little girl who is capable of nymphomaniacs and clever tricks. Even her unofficial roguery is full of real cuteness. 😆 The contrast between Ana Shen's heart is the real tension in this chapter. The author writes about his coldness, never relying on hard lines, it is all hidden in the details: when he appeared, he pressed "The Heart of Ruthlessness" against Su Yihuan's throat, his voice was as cold as ice, the setting sun stretched his shadow very long, and even the snow-colored hairband hanging from his sleeves swept across his neck There was a numbing pressure on his neck. Faced with Su Yihuan's rogue behavior, he didn't even bother to stretch out his hands at first. He looked at her as if she were looking at something insignificant, his eyes were calm, and he even said with a sarcastic smile, "Confidence is a good thing." But such an iceberg that has lasted ten thousand years has quietly cracked amidst Su Yihuan's commotion: Hearing Su Yihuan say, "You will be responsible for me if you touch my hand," he felt speechless in his heart, but he did not directly throw her away; he had already turned around to leave, but heard her shout, "It's about the underworld." , But he hesitated and turned back; when Su Yihuan said to his ear, "You smell so good," he would freeze, and the spiritual energy around him would shake the pages of the book due to the excitement in his mind; in the end, he nailed her to a beam with sword energy, which could shut her up forever, but still gave her a chance to speak. He said, "It's better to pretend not to know her next time we meet," but the murderous intent flashing through his eyes was never truly ruthless. Even he himself didn't realize that he was already different from others when it came to this ignorant little girl. 💪 The feeling of pull between the two people is written in a natural way, without any artificial saccharine. Su Yihuan's teasing was never a well-designed routine, it was all instinctive straight-shooting and cheating: she grabbed Ana Shen's hand and said, "If you don't take responsibility, you won't let go." She was either playing hard to get or simply afraid that this beautiful senior brother would run away; she leaned into his ear While whispering, she was either teasing for the sake of teasing, or trying to be clever when he wasn't paying attention; she even shouted, "I'll be here waiting for you at this time tomorrow", turned around and ran away for her life, and even she was afraid that "the flash in his eyes was clearly murderous intent." And Ana Shen's reaction was never the cliché "talking about one's integrity". His looseness was revealed bit by bit: from ignoring him at the beginning, to being disturbed by her words, to being frozen by her little actions, and finally even looking back at her. He is obviously a cold master who practices the ruthless way, but he wastes his time on this smooth-tongued little girl. Even he himself doesn't know why he breaks his principles again and again in response to her nonsense. The little Easter eggs hidden in the details in the book make people laugh out loud: Su Yihuan is stuck between "The Secret of Dual Cultivation" and "The Guide to Preventing Fraud in the Immortal Realm", which is a true portrayal of her in this chapter - while frantically outputting "unofficial" flirtations to the beautiful senior brother, she is also afraid of being punished by him, frantically looking for a way out; Shen Yanxin is teased by her The spiritual power was shaken off the pages of the book, and even the pages were trying to break his defense; Su Yihuan also imagined that Shen Yanxin was the male favorite of Immortal Fangfei, and complained, "Does Immortal Fangfei have many male favorites? When you serve her, do you do it one by one or together?" Shen Yanxin was so angry that she told her to shut up. This conversation vividly portrayed Su Yihuan's lack of formality and Shen Yanxin's helplessness. The most rare thing about this chapter is that it does not try to force wisdom to spread sugar, nor does it make the character look like a piece of wood in order to portray Master Qing Leng. Su Yihuan's rogue behavior was not brainless, it was the step she found for herself in a desperate situation, and it was also her instinctive self-protection; Shen Yan's cold heart was not indifference, it was his habit of being in a high position and practicing ruthless ways all year round. Su Yihuan's appearance was like a light that suddenly shined into his frozen world, a little naughty and reckless, but it forced a crack in his defense. After reading this chapter, I have begun to look forward to the following plot. I want to see how this heartless little apprentice can lure her crazy master out of the iceberg of thousands of years. I want to see when Ana Shen will realize that she has always treated this slippery little girl differently. 😏[Let me be healthy]😆 By the way: Happy Labor Day!!! 💪

After reading the second chapter, I just feel that the author's writing is so poignant - it is obviously a high-octane school farce, but the vividness of the characters, the clever foreshadowing, and the undercurrent hidden under the excitement are made loose and neat. I laughed while reading, and I was tickled by the details when I turned around. It has so much stamina. Let's talk about Su Yihuan first, this character really becomes more and more interesting as you get better at it. She is not at all the heroine in traditional immortality novels who either swallows her anger or makes a fuss. She has a little bit of cleverness gained in the market, but also hides the softness of a young person who refuses to admit defeat. Being scolded by her master Song Wei, she made jokes with a playful smile, and laughed at herself with the "Best Green Leaf Award from Mingyue Academy of the Year". She seemed to be lying flat, but everyone could see that this was a shell for her to hide her inferiority complex. When I saw her smiling playfully at her husband to please him, rubbing his shoulders and saying soft words, I immediately felt a sore throat. Did she secretly shed tears late one night because she had "no spiritual roots" and could not practice? Could it be that when you were a child, you watched your classmates go to practice in groups, but you couldn't fit in, and you could only hide in the corner and quietly envy them? She also tried to get along, right? But time and time again, I discovered that I was different from others, so I gradually learned to pretend that it didn't matter, and went to a deserted place to look at the scenery. Even the wind smelled a little aggrieved. Over time, this disguise has become what others call her "uneducated and unskilled", but no one knows that behind her playful smile, there are many wounds stabbed by prejudice. She was sweet and obedient to her husband, but she dared to fight back against the bully. This contrast was not at all uneducated, but a survival method she had practiced in this environment that was full of prejudice against her - using jokes to eliminate contempt, and using thorns to protect herself, both soft and hard, which made her appear so real, making people feel sad and like her. Looking at Song Wei and Su Ce, these two supporting roles are really crucial, and they immediately raise the level of the story. Master Song Wei was really angry and hurt. He hated Su Yihuan for being ignorant and idle. But when he was extremely angry, he only patted her on the shoulder. She was so angry that she coughed up blood, but he never really punished her severely. He scolded her every day Such as Su Ce, but it was his soft-heartedness that brought the brother and sister back to the academy when they were half-frozen to death. This preference hidden under the harshness made this character come alive at once. He was not a strict teacher with a facial expression, but an elder with flesh and blood. And Su Ce's appearance is really tempting. He looked at his gentle guardian sister, pulled her to block Yu Zhou's provocation, and then sent her to the East Pavilion to clean up, seemingly to calm the storm. However, his actions of quietly exploring Su Yihuan's meridians, and the jade pendant that Su Yihuan had thrown away countless times but that he had kept for her, all hid unexplainable thoughts - was he sincerely protecting his sister, or did he have other plans? This hazy tension really gets better and better with each taste. The most amazing thing about this chapter is the feeling of "laughing and being poked, all the foreshadowings popping up while making a fuss". On the surface, it looked like Su Yihuan was scolded for getting into trouble, had a fight with Yu Zhou, and was punished by her brother to clean up. It was a lively school farce, but when you think about it carefully, it is all a hook that cannot be hidden. When she was patted on the shoulder by her master, the blue curse pattern she unconsciously drew on the stone wall had already proved that she was not a "waste without spiritual roots" at all; the Immortal Fang Fei she longed for happened to be in the East Pavilion Library where she was going. The mentioned "Chronicles of the Spirit World" are all vaguely linked to her life experience; even her shortened red dress was said to be "indecent", which quietly broke through the rigid and hypocritical skin of Mingyue Academy, making her lively rebellion particularly dazzling. These details are not idle writing at all, they are all pitfalls for the subsequent story. The more I read, the more I feel that the author's thoughts are terrifyingly detailed. The rhythm is so comfortable. The scenes between her and the master in the first half are so funny and lively that people can't help laughing. The scene in the middle when she is publicly humiliated by Yu Zhou makes her heart-wrenching and angry with her. In the second half, Su Ce's appearance and the appearance of the Immortal Lord instantly fill the room with suspense. Especially at the end, she happily planned to hide in the library to sleep, but she didn't know that the person she wanted to see was there. This sense of fate that "I ran towards you, but I didn't know that you were waiting for me" made her unable to help rubbing her hands just thinking about it, and she couldn't wait to read the next chapter. The author's writing style is also very down-to-earth. There are no empty rhetoric, and the dialogues are all alive - Su Yihuan's rogue behavior, Song Fuzi's hatred of iron cannot be made into steel, and Yu Zhou's vitriol, all stand out in just a few sentences. Even Liu Qing's muttered words are full of sincerity and righteousness. There is no delay at all, and it reads very smoothly. Overall, the second chapter is more gripping than the first chapter, the characters are more three-dimensional, the conflicts are more poignant, and the foreshadowing is more cleverly laid out. This seemingly absurd farce actually revealed Su Yihuan's situation, the undercurrent of the academy, and everyone's thoughts, especially the foreshadowing of the upcoming encounter between her and Xianjun, which is really exciting. The author knows how to manipulate the readers' emotions very well, making it both satisfying and tearful, and full of suspense, making it impossible to stop reading! 💪[cover your face and peek] Baby Su Yihuan❤ is really one: Fresh and lively, soft and cunning, prickly on the outside but soft on the inside, hard-mouthed and soft-hearted, quirky, naughty, heartless, transparent and sober, sensitive and delicate, aggrieved, poor-tongued and cute, optimistic and self-healing, unruly Tame, rebellious and public, adaptable to the situation, soft-spoken and hard-working, sweet-tempered, adaptable, flexible, soft, hard-boiled, little sun, little hedgehog, possessed by the drama spirit, lie flat, rebellious, do anything if you don't obey, Tender and sympathetic, loyal and protective, soft and fragile, tenacious and tenacious, secretly shed tears, laugh at prejudice, pretend to be crazy and act foolish, wise and foolish, playful and smart, bright and lively, rebellious, full of energy, soft and soft Nuojiji, thorny rose, fragile glass, sober in the world, self-entertainment, optimistic and cheerful, self-deprecating, open-minded and transparent, clear about love and hate, dare to love and hate, frank and straightforward, hit the ball straight, cute and funny. , Clever and cunning, soft and innocent, aggrieved and pitiful, lovable and cherished, lively and hot, enthusiastic and flamboyant, gentle and kind, cold on the outside and hot on the outside, hot on the outside and soft on the inside, hard-mouthed and soft-hearted, full of cute contrasts, soft-hearted and protective, super self-healing, optimist ceiling, little genius at showing off, little survival expert, little master at pretending, good at drama, overwhelming sense of contrast, bright and not sad, warm and not overt, soft and cute. The sun, the thorny little rose, the fragile little glass, the lively little fireworks, the hot little soul, the stubborn little weed, the smart little fox, the cunning little kitten, the soft and cute little rabbit, the fried little one A hedgehog, a transparent little adult, an aggrieved little crybaby, an optimistic little fool, a righteous little heroine, a lively little baby, a girl who makes people cry and laugh, feel distressed and like, and the more she tastes, the more she likes her! 💪💪[Let me be healthy]😆[Hahahahahahaha]

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Help, help, help!! I read this first chapter over and over three times, and my lips never dropped!! Who knows?! At the beginning, the heroine performed an annual drama for me, "I was caught chewing a small yellow book of the Xianjun fan in the Confucius class because of the conspicuousness of Mingyue Academy." I laughed so hard that my neighbor knocked on the door and asked me if I was crazy!! Before I clicked on it, I thought it was some kind of sadomasochistic fairy tale novel about "Master's mad batches are fed by my own hands". My mind was full of the bloody drama about "the heroine loves but cannot turn to evil for revenge", but the first chapter completely confused me - someone else traveled through time and space to cultivate immortality, and died in it. The heroine Su Yihuan just lay down and died while others were secretly practicing their swordsmanship in class. She secretly chewed the illustrated copy of "Spring Grudge" under the nose of her husband during class, and even looked at the fragrant illustrations of Immortal Yongluan and Immortal Fangfei and exclaimed solemnly, "The waist strength of those who cultivate immortals is really amazing!" !! Su Yihuan!! Wake up!! You are here to cultivate immortality!! You're not here to learn weird postures!! And her psychological activities are so real!! Afraid of being discovered by the Master, she occupied a "selected seat" in advance, but in the end she was called upon by the Master; Liu Qing was as anxious as an ant on a hot pot, frantically hinting that Fang Fei Immortal Lord was coming to inspect today, and all she could think about was "I don't have the spiritual skills to roll, so I might as well seize the time to study the fanfic"; even how good-looking Liu Qing and her Amway Immortal Immortal were, she directly thought, "It shouldn't be a sin to secretly flirt with the Immortal Immortal, isn't it?" Help!! Your cowardly yet courageous salty fish character really struck a chord with me!! I originally thought she would be the kind of heroine who is forced to grow up, but she has implemented from the beginning that "the ultimate secret is to be bad". I really love this kind of anti-involution heroine!! The most amazing thing is the scene between her and Yu Zhou!! Yu Zhou was originally an aloof student, but he couldn't stand her fishing in class, so he raised his hand to complain. When the teacher called him on her, she not only didn't panic, but also smiled at the teacher and said, "Don't dare." !! I laughed so much that I hit the bed!! Su Yihuan, what a yin and yang little genius you are!! With just a few words, the cool student was so angry that she smashed the table with her palms and shouted, "Get out! Burn this filthy book with me!" She could still hold "Resentment of Spring" with a sad face and play an erhu song to herself in her heart. She even said "Sister, your heartbeat is disturbing me" when passing by Yu Zhou. Help!! You know how to piss people off!! And the part where I was forced to stand still made me laugh so hard!! The Master sent her, Yu Zhou and Liu Qing to the repentance station. Not only did she not panic, but she also comforted Yu Zhou, who was blushing and thick-necked with anger, "You are so angry that the tips of your ears are white. Don't be angry. You will just get used to coming here in the future." Liu Qing couldn't help but burst into laughter. She also stared at Liu Qing faintly, Su Yihuan, you are really a mudslide in the academy!! While others were being forced to stand and reflect, she was still touching the stone wall. As a result, the stone wall directly caused her hands to bleed!! At the end, the jade pendant around the waist of the white-clothed Immortal Lord trembled slightly, and I went crazy on the spot!!! Has Ana Shen already been eyeing this little salted fish who gnaws on her own fanfics in class?!! Everyone else was afraid of him, but she was the only one who studied the postures of his little yellow book illustrations, and even dared to criticize his little apprentice. This time you think you are fishing, but in fact you have been marked by your crazy master!!! 💪 And the details really impressed me!! At the beginning, before she died, she realized that Ana Shen's heart was a knife on her neck, but when she was reborn, she read his fanfics in class. The contrast was overwhelming!! She clearly knew that she was killed by him in her previous life, but when she was reborn, her mind was filled with fanfics of him, and she even wanted to tease the little fairy around him. This kind of "I know you are a knife, but I'll feel good first before talking about it" mentality is really amazing!! And when she was caught, she would rather be punished by the Master than hand over "Resentment of Spring". She held the book with a sad look on her face. I really laughed until I cried. I'm afraid this book is not her lifeblood!! And the character Liu Qing is so cute!! While he was afraid that she would be caught by his wife, he couldn't help but gossip with her about Amway Immortal Lord and Immortal Lord. In the end, he was even implicated by her and forced to stand together. He was simply the heroine's "wronged best friend"!! Yu Zhou also made fun of him. The cool academic tyrant was overthrown by the heroine's fanfic. The tip of his ears turned red and he said "shamelessly", but was killed by the heroine. Who understands this contrast between pure and lustful!! I'm already looking forward to seeing Yu Zhou being led astray by the heroine in the future and reading fanfics together!! Really love the look and feel of this chapter! The whole process is relaxed and funny without any embarrassment, and the character's personality, personality contrast and foreshadowing are all clearly laid out at the beginning! I watched it directly to finish, and I was completely hooked after reading the first chapter! This kind of writing that is funny, has a hidden main plot, and has vivid and lovable characters is really to my liking! Just this famous scene at the beginning is enough to make you want to read the entire book in one go. You can't wait to follow all the plots immersedly, and you are looking forward to all the famous scenes of Master and Xiao Xianyu in the future! 💪😍

Happy Lantern Festival!! 💪