A Courtyard in Full Bloom

To be honest, my patience has really been exhausted by now What happened back then was nothing special. To be honest, the love letters sent by Lin Run and Han Si were even more extreme than this. But so far, it can be said that Lin Yao has caused Lin Run life to be worse than death, but in the end, he can still save his life. The heroine is still here to sympathize with this and empathize with that. It's really funny to me. You really have to write your own heroine like this. It's so overflowing with compassion. The Virgin Mary. You asked for leave every day and I never said a word to you.

It's actually three hundred chapters long [Lie down] The progress of the male and female protagonists is really disappointing. People are furious after seeing what happened to the Lin family. They can no longer feel any sympathy for the Lin family. They also have no understanding of the passage at the end of the chapter. It's great to disappear. Let's end it quickly! Yes, that's right, I'm vicious [Rainbow Fart] Next, it won't be another uncle crying for his daughter. Qian will give birth to a child and his sister will go to her husband's house to intersperse a few scenes with male and female protagonists [Lie down] sad

You can't have both, or you can just act like a big heroine. On the one hand, you feel that the male protagonist is not good enough, but on the other hand, you want to marry yourself off casually... On the one hand, you have high standards and strict requirements for the male protagonist, and on the other hand, you have no bottom line in tolerating such a bunch of rotten people in your own family.

I actually laughed. . . I didn't want to scold the heroine on the female channel, but this one is so pretentious that I am amazed. What did the hero do to you to make you hate her so much? ? Didn't you remember all the things I helped you with? I admire you if you don't want the male lead and directly say that you want to comb yourself. But while you feel sorry for the male lead and don't dare to trust him, you ask your father to find you a new husband. What's wrong with you? Wouldn't it be nice for you to marry another feudal old man who doesn't know your roots? The entire Lin family hates you so much even though they treat you like a clown. Why are you so angry with the male protagonist? The whole character of the heroine is just about fighting each other. She can't stand up and let go of her personality charm. She can't compare to Shen Lan. I insist on chasing her until now. I just want to see how hypocritical the heroine can be.

The author is still confused and can't find Bei when he wrote it. This letter to the heroine's stepmother's family really doesn't require so much ink, so a simple explanation will be enough. Also, why are the heroine's stepmother and the heroine so hostile and antagonistic? What exactly are you laying the foundation for? It feels like the author wants to write everything in detail now, but instead the heroine becomes the camera and a cutscene. It's been more than three hundred chapters, and my mind is still made up, and the man is still waiting. If you ask me, these two are a grudge couple! Don't force the match, it will make people angry. The push-pull and stickiness of the ambiguous period should make people laugh secretly while holding the book. This makes people sick. You'd better revise and rewrite the last 20 chapters. Lin 🏠 I can't stand it anymore, stop writing, what the hell, the old and the young are holding back their big moves

There's nothing to feel emotional about, and if you want to feel emotional, you shouldn't do it to such a person. This is a selfish person who drags his family into the quagmire when his life is bad. He feels that his family will always support him, so he never reflects on himself or thinks he is wrong. He has no shining points. Don't tell me that she was lame at such a young age. There are too many unfortunate people, and she will never live well in any era.

The heroine is quite tolerant of others, but is really strict about the rules.

I don't want to discuss any plot today. I want to talk about what problems have arisen in this article so far. The first point is introduced at the beginning that the heroine wants to do business and be financially independent. OK goes on to start from selling salted duck eggs to having a shop, and then to giving the shop to the maid. There is a problem with this line, because as you write, you forget what happened after you opened the store. If the business is good, then expand, and if the business is not good, then improve. But if you didn't write it, it turned into a slogan of economic independence. The business line is completely cut off. Next door, Shen Lan would also describe discussing matters with colleagues, but that was completely absent here. So aside from the business line, are there any other growth events that can be portrayed for the heroine? Yes, there are mainly three large dungeons so far, Xunzhou defends the city, the prince rebels, and Sanniang's miscarriage is reasonable. I think the best written copy is the first copy. It can be completely seen that the heroine is a very strong, resourceful and resilient person, and these very good qualities are written out; in the second copy, it can be seen that the heroine actually has her own very keen political sense for the court. The only weakness is that she cannot do it openly and can only integrate it based on the clues given by the male protagonist. If the male and female protagonists were political rivals, they might be able to fight each other; the third dungeon is the dungeon that everyone is most dissatisfied with so far. What everyone is dissatisfied with here is that the real culprit who actually committed the injury did not receive punishment. She was put in the nunnery to watch. Both readers and people who are sober in this bureau will feel that the Lin family let go too lightly. Why is it that you, Si Niang, have to step on the whole family to have your own glory and wealth? When the matter was exposed, they didn't reflect on the disaster it would bring to the family, and they didn't provide any guidance. At that time, it was the best solution for the uncle and the others to leave the capital. Why did the heroine lose her mind on this matter? I don't think it's possible for a person with such a keen sense of politics to miss this point. The following incidents can be completely avoided.

Can you finish it quickly and cut off the next one? This one is completely broken. The pain you wrote is so painful for everyone to follow. When will you be able to write a book about a woman dressing up as a man? It will definitely be better than the current half-baked rice.

I'm curious. Did the heroine live a good life in the Lin family? Is there anyone who is sincere to her? Blame her for anything that happens, and step on everyone, but she wants to worry about this and feel bad for others. The heroine is in such a depressed mood, can she really feel better?