I Became a God by Writing in Yokohama

I read it in one go, my God, this direction is really... I didn't think about it at all, and I didn't feel aggrieved. It's really rare. There are too many protagonists who are obviously powerful but are plotted by the leader of the forest, Dazai, and so on. I feel angry. . . . . My wife is a breath of fresh air

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I like it so much! ! ! ! ! The writing is superb. I will always surrender to your psychological description. It is like cutting open the flesh and blood to analyze. It is amazing... It really makes me feel the complexity of the little characters. Whether it is the mother or Kurangou, the good and bad sides are all portrayed very confidently, even giving me a Dickensian feeling... I like Chinese-Chinese themes very much, and I have read a lot of them. This one uses a very novel way of drawing out emotions, allowing me (the reader) to follow Shenmu and empathize with him from his sensitivity to his current pursuit of evil. It is really eye-catching. In fact, when I first saw some of his analysis of his mother, I felt very disgusted, and everyone would feel this way, so I think this is also a point worthy of consideration: we outside the article and the readers inside the article simultaneously understood Shenmu's feelings of sadness, resentment, nostalgia, and sorrow for his mother, making Shenmu's [empathy] become very real and terrifying... And the use of mother in the first article is really awesome! ! At first, her mother had a car accident, which seemed to cut her out of life, but she is still affected by her mother (even dragging her tightly...) Because she wants to resurrect her. Even now, Shenmu is still affected by [empathy] and has become the happy person she is today. I think your writing is so cool, teacher. . This is my first time to write such a long review, so it may be a bit messy, but I really want to share my feelings with you. It's so well written! ! It is completely in line with my aesthetics. I will never write an article like this again. I will always follow you, Kamisama

After reading it, I felt a sense of loss. It was the first time I saw such a well-written article in Jinjiang. It was not written just to drop the book bag, but the article was perfectly integrated into the structure of the whole novel. The tailoring of the article also fits well. The article "Virtue" is really eye-catching. The grasp of emotional changes is also very clever, and it completely reflects the completion of the first four novels. Shenmu finally becomes a god and Shenmu initially wants to die because of debt and betrayal. The malice towards himself is also very well portrayed.

It really brings ordinary human beings to the forefront in advance. There is a kind of crazy that is reversed to the extreme, which is interesting, but it also has a feeling of death in lips and teeth, which is very crazy. But when I reach that point, I'm not sure whether it will become like this. Shenmu has no desire mentally, everything is just for pleasure, just like Aha in Genshin Impact.

Ahhhhh, I really like this story. Although I am still a little sorry for the ending where Shenmu becomes a "god" at the cost of emotion, the plot of this book is also unique in JJ. The writing style is calm and natural, and the characters portrayed are relatively full. Although I still want to read another one with more than 100,000 words (teacher, when you started the article, didn't you say it was expected to be 300,000 words!), But this is a complete story. I look forward to seeing you in the next book!

God... I feel so sad when I see it. Shenmu and his mother have always loved each other, but they have also hurt each other. They miss each other, but they can never see each other again.

Oh my god... Every word you write, teacher, jumps across my xp repeatedly! ! ! It's super good-looking, and the characterization of Shenmu is amazing. .

You won't have to restart and delete the memory later, right? It's hard to imagine that the person who did all this actually wanted to use it as material? Treat the whole world as a material library or something (qidhiganjuehenyouyisi)

It's such a rare type to really succeed in destroying the world.

Oh my gosh, this is a development I never thought of, but it should be the best way. It's better than two people torturing each other.