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Jiang Mo opened her eyes and found herself sitting in a cafe.
She had suddenly lost all her memories.
A handsome man was sitting across from her, claiming to be her boyfriend.
Her boyfriend looked worried and asked what was wrong, whether she felt unwell, and if she wanted to go to the hospital.
Just then, a text message arrived on her phone: "Rule No. 1: Hospitals are dangerous places. Do not go there!"
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Jiang Mo didn't know whether to trust her boyfriend or the rules in the text message.
But when she saw her boyfriend in the restroom, obsessively sniffing the skirt she'd worn, she thought: Thank goodness I didn't go to the hospital.
A deformed, perverted love story. The male lead is extremely perverted and forces his love on her. Don't read if that's not your thing.
Mild horror.
---Coming Soon: What Should I Do About the Snake That Suddenly Appeared in My House?---
After work, Su Jiayue came home and opened the door to find a pale blue snake lying on her floor.
It was barely alive, as if it were about to die.
The snake was so beautiful that Su Jiayue couldn't bring herself to throw it out, so she took it to a pet hospital.
Then strange things began to happen.
She was running late and rushed out, only to catch green lights all the way.
She bought a cup of milk tea on a whim and won a seven-day trip to Hainan.
She bought a scratch-off lottery ticket and won the top prize on her first try.
Her home was too far from work, so her landlord called to say the place she rented had a safety hazard. As compensation, he offered her a spacious apartment inside the Third Ring Road at no extra rent...
And it all started when that snake came into her home.
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A month later, the snake had recovered and left Su Jiayue.
But it left behind a snake scale, and her good luck continued.
Some time later, Su Jiayue's family pressured her into going on a blind date.
She had no choice but to go meet her match.
He was a fat, big-eared man who was rude and utterly disgusting.
Just as Su Jiayue was getting impatient and wanted to leave, a tall, strikingly handsome man appeared.
He merely stood in front of her blind date, and the pig-faced man started slapping himself like a madman. He knocked out his own teeth and still didn't stop, as if possessed.
Su Jiayue stared in bewilderment.
Then the man turned to her and smiled warmly. "Hello, my name is Lan Qi."
"We meet again."
Overworked office drone x snake demon
Theme: Loyalty
I don't give a negative score to support the author who writes suspense, but to be honest, 1. The decryption is too blunt, reasonable and unreasonable. The plot is theoretically possible but in fact there is no consideration of the emotional development of the characters. 2. The background setting is too large and empty and the characters' goals are too narrow, which creates an extremely serious sense of fragmentation. 3. The later part of the decryption part, the less the story description and the more plot outlines, it is like reading an outline. This is why the later plot looks very jumpy and looks like "unfinished". Summary: The above three points together make this article fascinating in the early stage and disappointing in the later stage. They are also the reasons that make me feel that "the answer to the mystery I want to read is not this one." When a suspense story does not give people the feeling of "So this is how it develops!", Then the suspense story is meaningless and a failure. I don't hate the author, I just hate the person who tweeted me. The end
After reading it, I feel a bit frustrated. The creation is too streamlined. I feel that the characters have empty shells. The growth of the heroine is too general. There are too few descriptions and the character is too weak. She looks like a guy who is full and scolds his wife. Good guy, the nobles are also a group of guys who have no focus on description. It is like a soulless background. In the end, they directly betrayed all the nobles and blew them up. The author can only write about people in the nobles who share the same ideals, or let them experience the oppression they have suffered and carry out ideological transformation. Female The master can awaken from the nobles. I don't believe that the other children in the nobles can't save them and just blow them up. And it's not good at all to die without even repenting. Didn't it be said a long time ago that immortal cultivators don't care about mortals? I'm so speechless. Isn't this the same thing as when gods fight and mortals suffer? The male protagonist just kills people casually and is an outlaw maniac. If the author had more descriptions, it wouldn't be so abrupt. According to the heroine's character, how could she be with such a person? Doesn't the heroine believe that everyone is equal? The male protagonist has killed so many people, and the female protagonist has no psychological burden. The summary is that all the characters are very thin, and she feels aggrieved after reading it. The length is too short, and this is a bad ending. It is better to let the female protagonist stop reincarnation in the virtual world and become a sweet wife with empty ideals. At least it is better than a bad ending.
So pretty! Come on, madam! The women in Madam's writings are all so attractive!!!
It's really beautiful!!! It's really contradictory and exciting. There is a man who seems to love the heroine wholeheartedly, but the heroine can be very sober!
The previous setting is very interesting and attractive, and the author's writing style is also very good, making people look forward to it. In the second half, the setting is not well supported. Structurally speaking, the decryption part is too straightforward, jumping directly from the previous suspense story to the background narrative. In terms of content, perhaps the topics such as the rules of the world and social development and change are too grand. Perhaps the author has his own understanding and cognition, and the overall writing is not well-founded, like a child playing house. For example: Since it is a world with a score of 1-9, and many people at the bottom have no jobs, how do they make a living, and how can they reproduce to make up 90% of the population? Has anyone resisted before, and what was the outcome? What is the key point for upper-class people to control the lifeblood of lower-class people? ... For a complete world structure, these questions may not all need to be written in the article, but at least there should be clear answers in the author's mind. The background story of the heroine is too thin, focusing on the theme of "everyone is drunk and I am alone", and the growth experience, family relationships, and social relationships are very simple, that is, everyone is against the heroine. Saviors of the country and people who come from the upper class tend to favor changes from the top down, but the heroine chooses to support the revolution from the bottom up. The basis of such resistance is entirely "sympathy", which sounds a bit too dreamy. I would rather see the heroine's understanding of the inevitable laws of social development and her sharp predictions about the future, which triggers a desire for change, rather than simply feeling that all this is wrong. The setting of the male protagonist seems not perfect enough. Since he is genetically modified, are his biological functions any different from those of humans? How were you educated and cultivated since childhood? How were his character and emotions developed? In the end, as if to force he, the male protagonist was given an unlimited resurrection setting and it ended, which was a bit anticlimactic. Overall, it's a passable work, and the author has his own ideas, which is worth encouraging! The setting and writing style are also commendable. Maybe I can try writing some "smaller" works next time. I'm really looking forward to your follow-up works!
At first I thought the male protagonist was a bad guy, but I ended up wrongly accusing him [cheek] The identity of the mysterious man was easy to guess, so the reveal was a bit expected, but the last part felt a bit weird (?) Maybe it's because there were no clues in the previous chapters, so the final reveal of the setting was a bit abrupt, right? As a result, the plot connection is a bit unnatural. I thought the president of the drama club was an important character because his name appeared twice in a row, but I guessed it wrong [Joker]. However, the author wrote the plot very well. The male protagonist has a slight sense of yandere, and the female protagonist is also very witty, but the female protagonist recovers her memory a bit hastily.
The front part is very exciting and attractive, but the back part is a bit boring. Overall, it's good. I look forward to more works [Cat Head]
Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good at writing
Oh oh oh, the heroine's thoughts