I Revived the Strongest Sentinel

I skipped through it and finished reading it. The plot was interesting, but the plot was a bit off-kilter. The male and female protagonists' personalities changed too quickly, and there was no arc. Golden Finger is also a bit too wide open, a bit like an ancient Internet novel, and some of the plots are a bit embarrassing. It's a pity to throw away tasteless food

It's quite attractive. I think this story should be expanded to about 200,000 words, because I think the plot develops too fast and the world view is very grand. 70 Chapters are not enough to show the story. For example, the descriptions of the male and female protagonists in the copy are more facial-shape, and other people's names are used throughout the whole process, which makes me feel a little less involved. The style of the middle and later stages of the article is also different from the early stage. If it can be written in the same style as the previous stage, I think the story will be more attractive. Of course, I am still very grateful to the author for creating such a gentle male protagonist, a savior and boundless love. It is really great! In the early stage, the heroine is brave and resourceful, low-key but not afraid of trouble. However, in the later stage, the pace is too fast, and the time for the heroine's growth is infinitely compressed. So I still feel a bit pity.

Baby, first of all, I don't mean to criticize. I just feel that this article does still have some imperfections. When I read the copy in advance, it really struck me. I have always felt that your imagination is super interesting. The previous part of this article really felt like a steady and steady narrative. The character creation is also very good, especially the male protagonist. Many places are particularly well written. It seems three-dimensional and vivid, not flat and single. Some interactions did not go according to my subconscious prediction, which gave me a quite unexpected feeling. So it's not a very cliche type of gentle character design. Then I feel that some elements are completely useless, like the God-given objects. The key player is the reincarnation ball. I haven't mentioned the other ones. After all, I thought at first that there would be a series of frictions around collecting the God-given objects. Of course, the development in the text did surprise me again. Thinking about it this way, it seems to be the opposite of the routine. There is also the description of various areas in the world of the text. It feels like it has no real sense and is a bit like a pure background board. Of course, maybe my preconceptions were too ambitious, and then the later part felt that the plot was a bit too hasty. The plot was over at once, and the big turning point where the memory was restored was a bit abrupt. I don't know how to put it, it was too turning, like a big transformation into a living person (I'm sorry for describing it at this level. Anyway, I feel that there are many places where more content can be extended, so I feel that the later plot is a bit thin, like a tree that only stretches out its trunk and lacks further branches and leaves). That's probably the feeling. Of course, I'm just a pure reader and don't have much writing experience. I can't stand and talk without back pain 🐶. I also want to add that maybe it's because the time between reading the last part of the article is a bit long. I don't know if it also has an impact on my overall perception. Finally, it's the belated conclusion of the main text. I'm also looking forward to Bao Baobao's next works.

My Bai Yueguang was pampered like a baby 😏 My idols were resurrected to save the world 😳 and the heroine's little follower came to have a historical commander to take good care of him 🧋

I really want to cry after spending money to watch a bad ending. Can't I write it well?

It feels like there's a lot left unsaid and it's over

Isn't this really bad?

Teacher Kuo Kuo, please click on the extra to prove that it's not bad.

I want to see the troubled times end after resurrecting many big bosses 🥺🥺🥺

Good jokes were written in a hurry, ugh