[An extra chapter has been added. Be sure to check it out, cuties!]
[This story is complete! Subscribe to the whole thing for just one yuan. Thank you, angels, for your support!]
Please add my new story to your reading list: "The Messiah's Sigh," a suspenseful detective story. A beautiful blond top x a suited thug bottom. The blurb is below this story's blurb.
Blurb:
A fierce, beautiful God of War on the outside, but a purehearted, sweet, adorable cutie on the inside, top x a smiling tiger, top-tier fighter, free-spirited and doting bottom
Hua Caiyi x Jiang Huan
His home planet was slaughtered, all its supplies looted, and Hua Caiyi was captured by the invaders. Stripped of all dignity, he was left with nothing but endless darkness, day after day.
Just as he could no longer endure it and was about to die with the enemy, a carefree man appeared before him.
"How crude. Bullying a beauty isn't what a gentleman should do." The man grinned, pulled a weapon off his motorcycle, and rescued him.
The scene was etched deeply in Hua Caiyi's mind. He thought, He is my god.
The god himself, however, was troubled. He cornered Hua Caiyi against his motorcycle in the wasteland and said beside his burning-red ears, "I'm no god, and I'm no savior. God loves all people, but I love only you, and I only want to save you."
Amid chaos and darkness, the flames of revenge burn. In those burning flames, love is the greatest mystery.
Bonus scene 1:
When someone else is badly injured, Jiang Huan gives them a once-over, raises an eyebrow, toys with a pocketknife, and says with a careless click of his tongue, "What's the matter? That's all it takes to bring you down?"
When Hua Caiyi gets a cut on his finger, Jiang Huan immediately rushes over and takes his hand to examine it carefully. Frowning, he tends the wound with great care and asks gently, "How could you be so careless? Does it hurt?"
Bonus scene 2:
Jiang Huan's gaze sticks to Hua Caiyi's lips. He tilts his head and leans closer, but stops when he sees Hua Caiyi's eyes tightly shut and his body trembling slightly.
He frowns with some regret, draws back, and turns away, saying with restraint, "I'm sorry. I didn't mean to go against your wishes..."
But Hua Caiyi, who had been confused and flustered just moments ago, suddenly opens his eyes and takes the kiss that had been left unfinished, then speaks with an innocent, bewitching charm:
"Will you blame me for tempting you?"
Bonus scene 3:
Hua Caiyi has always been deeply averse to being touched by others, reacting intensely like a startled bird. Touch his hand and he'll break yours.
But his response to Jiang Huan's touch is a completely different kind of sensitivity. The moment Jiang Huan touches him, his whole body turns red uncontrollably. For a long time, he thought he was sick.
Only later did he realize it was a tremor that came from his heart and soul.
Bonus scene 4:
Much later, Hua Caiyi touches his long hair and looks at Jiang Huan with some concern. "Bro, do you think I should get it cut short? Long hair really does get in the way a bit when fighting."
Images flash through Jiang Huan's mind: amid the fires of war, a fall of silky black hair streams across the desert, brushing against Hua Caiyi's bloodstained cheek, dazzlingly beautiful; on white bedsheets, black hair spills across the fabric, making his snowy skin look even paler and adding a touch of sensuality to his lively eyes.
Jiang Huan immediately shakes his head. "I can tie it up or pin it back before a fight. You absolutely cannot cut it."
Hua Caiyi tilts his head as he watches Jiang Huan's solemn expression and hears the weight in his voice.
Strong leads, devoted to each other
A short piece written for practice, with a loosely constructed world. Don't overthink the details.
My tastes are pretty niche, so there was nothing to read. I had to make my own.
Blurb for the new story, "The Messiah's Sigh":
A gloomy, cold, highly intelligent man on the outside, but a refined, arrogant thrill-seeker on the inside, beautiful blond top x a suited thug, a rogue gentleman bottom
(The top also has a bit of a flirtatious, calculating side around the bottom.)
Xi Erfulin x A Ruibeige
My name is Miller. I'm a lowly intern in the Behavioral Analysis Division of the Criminal Investigation Bureau. My daily work consists of organizing files and reporting to my superiors. It's dull and boring.
One day, a new criminal investigator joined our division. I heard he had several PhDs in different fields and had been specially recruited by senior management. His intelligence aside, he was almost too beautiful: blond hair, blue eyes, and an air of refinement, though his gaze always seemed a little disdainful.
It's worth mentioning that when he first arrived, he seemed to argue with our supervisor every day. Our supervisor is a typical gentleman in a suit. I was lucky enough to see him fight once, and discovered that even his fighting was elegant.
Anyway, the two of them may just have incompatible worldviews. That blond, brilliant beauty is indifferent to everything, except that he snaps at our supervisor every day. A few times, I saw him leave the supervisor's office red in the face and neck. He must have been furious.
Our supervisor is the same. He's usually so polite and gentlemanly, but for some reason he always likes to pick on this new hire.
But I'm just a lowly intern, so all I can do is quietly stand up for the beauty.
But, but, can someone tell me why they suddenly kissed at a crime scene?!
(The blurb above is from a supporting character's perspective. Miller has very little page time in the story.)
Bonus scene 1:
Xi Erfulin pulls A Ruibeige into a small alley in a hurry. He takes off the beret A Ruibeige put on him, lets down his pinned-up hair, then leans against the wall, pulls A Ruibeige over, and tugs off his suit jacket.
A Ruibeige braces his right hand against the wall beside Xi Erfulin's face and leans toward him. He gently smooths the loose hair by his ear and says in a helpless, soft voice, "Aren't we going to run? They're almost here."
Xi Erfulin slides down a little, slips one leg between A Ruibeige's, and brushes the outside of his thigh with the other. At this angle, he's almost a head shorter than A Ruibeige.
He tugs A Ruibeige's tie tight and pulls him close, raising an eyebrow. His warm breath falls across A Ruibeige's face. "Am I not hiding from them right now?"
A Ruibeige watches him with interest and smiles. "This is how you hide?"
"Of course. In a secluded alley late at night, a couple of lovebirds sharing a passionate kiss. That's perfectly normal, right?"
Bonus scene 2:
"At first, my name was Xi Erfu, but that's a woman's name, so I gave myself a different one."
"I think Xi Erfu suits you perfectly: a pure-hearted elf, a little demon who specializes in tempting me."
Strong leads, devoted to each other
A suspenseful detective story set in a fictional world, probably in an era when different ethnic groups live side by side. Most people are of mixed heritage, and people are divided by region rather than country.
Theme: Being reborn from despair.
Very nice!!! A young couple who get along very well ❤️
My mother asked me why I knelt down to look at my phone. I said the rice smelled so good.
💛💛💛 I hope that the author of the next book, Baobao, will study it and write a paragraph of yellow quietly hahahahahaha 💪
🙏 🙏 🙏 Very cute one by one, one by one. My aunts love you 😆
People watching the if line will feel warm and happy, the young couple must be happy!
The ending really feels like "freedom" 🤩🤩🤩
Yiyi: You are my god (serious face jpg.) Brother Jiang: (An arrow pierces the heart jpg.) (Fell to the ground jpg.)
The teacher wrote very well, I like it very much 😚
I can't help it. The sweet couple likes this kind of attacking and receiving characters. The author writes it well. It's a fairy tale.
I've finished it, I've finished it, xql will always be together. I was originally reading the book of my wife's Messiah. After reading a case, I found out that it was still being serialized. I said that I would wait for it to be finished. I said that I would read the finished article of my wife first. Wow, I really found a treasure of the author's treasure!!! Brother Jiang is really praising Yiyi's cuteness all the time. I think of a sentence, when you think a person is cute no matter what, then you are finished. You are obsessed with him (probably this means). Yiyi's life is really too hard. He was rigorously trained as a child. Pengge was massacred when he was a teenager. His family and friends are all gone. He is left alone to be tortured by that skeleton cult. Fortunately, Yiyi has always been tenacious and has been fighting back. If he hadn't met Brother Jiang, I'm afraid he would have died, as mentioned at the beginning. He was waiting for the opportunity to die together with those dead skeletons. Yiyi's life should not have been so tragic. Fortunately, he met Brother Jiang and led him to escape from the Skeleton Gang. Just like when he was a child, he guarded him to complete the trial. Brother Jiang is the god in Yiyi's heart. Yiyi, the little sweetheart and princess in Brother Jiang's heart, is a touch of purity that suddenly appeared after Brother Jiang got used to the selfishness, greed, and violence of the last days. Yiyi is brave, strong, and powerful. She can bear the burden of the little master of Pengge, overcome the torture of the dead skeleton, and lies dormant, waiting for the opportunity to give this group of people a heavy blow. Yiyi and Brother Jiang are really awesome (and his wife is also awesome), they value love, justice, kindness and strength. They are as free as the wind