The Phoenix Soars Ten Thousand Miles

This is a brand-new Qingguo story under the skin of the Twelve Kingdoms. The characters are all different. The author's writing style is very good. Thank you for bringing me a yy fairy tale for adults, because after reading the original work, I also felt that the people do not need a king, and the people can be the masters of their own country. I also read your article accidentally, and it just realized this dream, and brought the Qingguo a country that has achieved national rejuvenation and prosperity, although it still retains the emperor, just like countries with emperors such as Britain and Japan. As for the heroine's relationship issues, she feels too Qiong Yao-esque, so I thought she was Mary Sue for a while, but I take back the preface that she was Mary Sue, because the heroine is still very rational in the face of big things. After knowing the truth, she will not blindly like Jing Qi in red. Say goodbye to him. The two Jing Qi now watch It's quite interesting. The setting has changed from a mythical beast to an ordinary man. One of the former emperor's Jingqi can exist for the purpose of killing the king and can break away from the rules of heaven. It seems that heaven is still very kind. One is the gentle and cowardly Jingqi of the current heroine. The two Jingqi have their own growth after meeting the heroine. , It feels like chasing your wife in the crematorium, making these men not cherish it and now chasing them. The process of abuse is very sad, but the ending is not bad. They all become the heroine's harem, the queen's harem. This is a different country, one king and two unicorns, and then modernization It is a socialist country with an emperor, but the heroine is still a bit weak, because she feels that she has no strength, and she relies on men to feel when she encounters difficulties. She does not solve and kill familiars like Nakajima Yoko, which is a bad review. It feels that the heroine relies on her words to persuade everyone to help her.

Finished reading When laying out the details earlier, the reason why the main character has such an awkward personality was not fully explained. The personal emotional monologue in the middle doesn't sound like what ordinary people would say. I originally wanted to be more tactful, but I really can't stand the tone. The feelings come out of nowhere and the dialogue is pretentious and disgusting. But the setting of the way of heaven and the political thinking are still quite thought-provoking. The political leanings of the heroine, from the initial ignorance to the later understanding and determination to fight against the odds, are explained smoothly and naturally. Jing Gong's struggle against the sky is not that clear. Apart from the beginning saying that he actually took advantage of Skynet's loopholes, the middle plot is purely a villain. In the end, I so agreed with the heroine's concept. The transition was too stiff. In short, the parts about political thinking and fighting against God are well written. It's not that there can't be emotional dramas, but if they're well-written, they're the icing on the cake; if they're ugly, they're like rat shit on the porridge.

№7 Netizen: Crossing Mary Sue Culling Committee Comments: "Feng Xiang Ten Thousand Miles" Rating: -2 Publication time: 2009-06-22 21:18:54 Chapters reviewed: 1 Please spare the little wild master and go ahead... You are a very strange person. You say you hate Mary Sues, but you only made such comments after reading the first chapter. How are you so self-righteous and different from those Mary Sues? The heroine in the article is very strong and wise, and the characters of the others are also described very profoundly, and their emotions are touching. For those who have not read this article carefully, what right do they have to give negative marks to the author's hard work?

Very nice~I want the physical book. . .

I really like this article~~I read it in one night at school, and I read it at 2 o'clock in the middle of the night~~~~My classmates also thought it was great

I don't understand it, it seems to be mixed up with the original work, I don't understand it!!

Baozoukankan

I love this novel so much that I want a physical copy. Why doesn't Yi Da start custom printing?

This sentence is so cool: "This is not a sequel to "Twelve Kingdoms"."

It's better than Twelve Kingdoms. You can make a cartoon about this, hahahaha