Guys, Stop Falling for Each Other. You’re Scaring Me

Hello everyone, I am preparing to rewrite this book in the past few days, and the development of the story will not change. [Red heart] The first 100,000 words of this book, including the outline, were all written by me in 2017. Everyone said that the writing was written by a novice, like a junior high school student, and it was ancient. This is correct because it was really written by me in junior high school (). I wrote it along at first because I wanted to not leave any regrets for junior high school, but I didn't expect that so many people would read it. In addition, I had a car accident and injured my hand in the later period, so the whole book was completely free of myself. There are many flaws. In fact, I personally feel that the writing is quite satisfactory, but after all, I still have to be responsible for the readers. I hope everyone's reading experience will be better, so I decided to rewrite it (mainly the first half). I will also correct some bugs and shortcomings that everyone has raised w There is also a detailed answer about the previous Shou Jie. Because I published this in a hurry at the time, I myself said that it was a lot of confusion. This is more accurate: First of all, I liked a girl before the Shou Chuan book, but it stopped at the stage of secret love. After the Shou Chuan book, I only liked Guogong. Physically, Gong's first kiss was with Gong, but there was a scene where Gong was forcibly kissed by two other cannon fodders. Apart from Gong, he never got to home base with anyone else. In the end, the body will restore the data before wearing the book. There is no intention of forcing me to be cleansed, nor am I trying to sidestep the tauren and simply adapt to the development of the plot. Everyone can decide whether they can accept it or not, and just define whether they are cleansed or not. I wish everyone a happy reading and happy every day. [Rose]

"The soul that loves you will never die, and the story of loving you will never end." "If you had seen him, you would fall in love with him without hesitation." At first, I thought it was just a simple redemption novel. What kept me going was that I was curious about the six years of memory he had lost. I have read many novels, but my favorite is the ending you wrote. It ends abruptly, has a long charm, and echoes the beginning and end! ! (I like the echoing endings the most, because there is a sense of fate in writing like this) Xixi saved Acheng and Acheng, and also saved Qiao Zhancheng, one as his playmate, one as the illegitimate son of the Qiao family, and the other as an adult. No matter what the status was, Xixi had no hesitation in getting rid of his vagina and his soul. Shi Tiesheng once wrote "Love is the incompleteness of the soul." Qiao Zhancheng was a gloomy person with extremely low self-esteem due to his life experience, while Ji Muchi was the complete opposite of him. He was a person full of justice and extremely sunny, who happened to be the other half of Qiao Zhancheng's incomplete soul. When I was watching "We Meet on a Rainy Day", I almost cried. The teacher's statement that the first person can increase resonance with readers is indeed correct. When I was writing this part, I could feel a clear sense of sadness and depression, but it was a little different when I was writing about Ji Muxi. "The boy in the ID photo is smiling very happily, a smile that makes you laugh even if you don't look at it." "His name is pronounced with a smiling mouth shape"... (Oh my god, I really peed my eyes while writing this paragraph). I feel that Ji Muxi is not only a salvation or a light for Qiao Zhancheng, but also a kind of faith to live. I just want to say something, can you please stop writing the protagonist's college entrance examination score so high? Do you know how big a blow it would be to a person who failed the college entrance examination English test? ! This book is really good. I really like the first-person part. It made my heart feel sour. For us ordinary people, the meaning of life is for ourselves, but for people in darkness, the meaning of life may be a person, a word, a promise. For people with a sense of justice, the meaning of life is to tear open the fog and let more people live for themselves.

Finished spreading flowers! [Spread flowers][sprinkle flowers][sprinkle flowers] It's a really good book. The writing style is relatively relaxed and sandy, and it looks very comfortable. Does Baby Xixi deserve the best? Chi Zechuan's comment is really spot-on, "Ji Muxi shouldn't be bothered by trivial matters in the world. He can be dazzling as long as he moves forward with all his heart. His future is smooth sailing." Xixi is upright and kind-hearted. All the beautiful qualities in the world cannot be overstated to describe him. He is like a seedling that grows in the wind and rain but grows into a towering tree. He is as optimistic as the little sun. He should live in freedom without any restraint. He is the first in his grade. The top scorer in the college entrance examination, a student at the China Public Security University, and the captain of the criminal police team. He is also the unique Ji Muxi, who is like a spring breeze in the bustling city. Speaking of a few attacks, the main attack on Qiao Zhancheng still has the bonus of the previous life. Well, when I read the previous chapter, I thought it was just a simple redemption and love, but I didn't expect that you would love so deeply in both lives... Inferiority is the best dowry for an attack [Glasses] Well, the Cockroach Shape is well-deserved, and the chapters in captivity really made me panic inside, but it doesn't matter! I was relieved at the end! Your love is really great. Falling in love is always the biggest growing pain for a gay man. You and Xixi must be a good [crying] couple and stay happy forever. Well, then Chi Zechuan, who makes me most upset [crying] My bamboo horse brother wwww has been with me for two lives but I can't express my love. He has been with you for decades in the name of a friend. The step I can't take can only trap myself in love. The male protagonist of sour literature is simply you TT There is also Gu Su, the extremely possessive Chao Xiong who takes on most of the laughs in the entire text, and Bai Suyuan, who is gentle but extremely capable of fighting and is always by Xi Xi's side. Qiao Er, who has always doted on our Xixi, and Qiao Siyu, who is dark and perverted and wants to force love (o^^o). I really enjoyed watching the Xiong Jing in the early stage. They quarreled and wanted to stab each other to death when they disagreed. In the later stage, the story mainly revolved around the past life and brought most of my tears. The tvt felt that the ending was unexpected. I also want to see more of Acheng Xixi's love life, hoping to live a happy life in their world?

Rousseau said: "Love is free, and any compulsion will make it lose its luster." Lovers should be cautious, which was the first lesson Ji Muxi taught Qiao Zhancheng. Qiao Zhancheng spent more than ten years thinking about his feelings for Ji Muxi. I really like this one. Ji Muchi's personality charm is too powerful. Duan commented that Xixi in the early stage was the bright moon that illuminated everyone. In fact, Ji Muchi is as bright and shining as the sun. He doesn't care what he has to give, he helps a lot of people, great Captain Ji. Everyone fell in love with him, not just a short "heartthrob" character, it really made me realize that Ji Muchi is a very good person. The author's portrayal of Xixi is so good. He loves and hates clearly, he understands what should be hated and what should be loved. He knows that Qiao Zhancheng has deprived him of his freedom, and he also knows Qiao Zhancheng's passionate love. This book is a sour growing pain from Qiao Zhancheng's perspective. From Ji Muchi's perspective, it is another fairy tale full of love. The author also wrote that not all stories are Grimm's fairy tales. The love that was forced on Ji Muxi was like shackles. He was like a cat in a cat cafe. Everyone who passed by loved his beauty and could touch him, but no one cared whether he would get stressed. When we were in the dark room, what Ji Muxi vented really shocked me. Really, being forced to let others risk your life for your own obsession is no different from committing a crime. The author's ideas are also very good. "The Little Prince" is actually very common. When I thought it was another story about a prince and a rose who couldn't fall in love, I asked whether I was just a fox that was tamed and left behind. Ji Muxi is not a rose. He is not willing to be imprisoned in a glass dome, nor is he willing to be restrained by the powerful "little prince" Qiao Zhancheng. Only Ji Muxi is willing, and he is willing. Only he can tame others, and no one can force Ji Muxi. When watching the self-prologue, the sour feeling is really obvious. It is a person as dazzling as the sun who broke into his humid rainy day. It's so sour. Inferiority is the best dowry. . . Other Gong's emotional lines are very good. I like Bai Er the most and it's hard to let go. In fact, it's normal for Brother Zhuma not to feel superior. He doesn't dare because there are too many restrictions. It's really hard to let go. It's really Qiao Sanchaoyong, right? It's super good-looking. I'm really looking forward to it. Is the extra episode really gone?

Poor Brother Chi, I have been keeping my wife for two lifetimes, but I don't feel like confessing to her. This secret love is too sour. I sincerely cried for Brother Chi's secret love. 55

Wuwuwuwuwu, goddess, Xixi, I have only kissed you a few times. I want to see love [crying] [crying]

I bought it on the spur of the moment, I really like the preface at the end [red heart]

Brother Cockroach is finally happy... Madam, how are you doing?????????? My tears are not worth anything

No one can help but love Ji Muchi Finished with flowers [love eyes][love eyes][love eyes]

A particularly well-written article [Crying] I Love You Season 2, the first half of which made me very happy to watch it, and the second half shaped the protagonist's personality so well that I cried and laughed at the same time. I will never forget this piece of Season 4 I Will Always Love You [Crying] [Crying]