Beast Taming Begins with Crafting Spirit Beasts by Hand

This book is the same as the previous full-time spirit master. I feel that the plot is a bit fast. Why are you in such a hurry? The plot time is too tight. The inspiration and consequences of making the weapon spirits are not clear. The cultivation is also briefly mentioned. The images of several weapon spirits are relatively dull, which makes it difficult for people to feel the charm of the beast-controlling novel. But several of the designed weapon spirits have their own creativity, which is quite interesting. And I still want to say that Jinjiang can be written without CP. If the emotional line is not included, we can not add it. It is also okay to only write the career line of the female protagonist. The existence of the male protagonist in the Book of Spiritual Master feels a bit useless. Yu Zhaolin vaguely gave me the same feeling. I just put forward some of my own opinions, without any malice or any intention of asking Da Da to change the article. I hope Da Da can write better and better and produce more food.

Lights, fans, ovens, washing machines... What are the skills! Flash, squall, burn, swirl?

I felt that the events I wrote were rushed, many of them had no beginning and no end, and I skipped too many things in my sketches. There are few connecting points between various events, and the events are dense. I originally thought I could write 100+w words. There is also little excitement in the beast-controlling novels. There is no emotional bond between humans and animals, and there is no inspiration and connection between the beasts. I don't have an outline visually, I just write whatever comes to mind.

The washing machine warehouse rushed out, intending to stuff the enemy into the drum?

The writing is still very nice, at least I feel like I can keep reading. In the past, when I read novels, I would just "read a little more and then go to sleep, ah, it's dawn." But now many novels are like "I'm so bored, go to bed, it's not even close to 12 o'clock." This book can be regarded as a standard way to read. As long as there are no inexplicable obstacles that kill the enjoyment, you can read it well.

"Tai" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

"Consideration" is a big bug for the author~

"What shocked him was that he had to "catch a big bug" for the author~

I don't quite understand how to do it

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