The Young Husband's Mountain Life

This is the first time I have written a review in so many years since I came to Jinjiang. When I first read the article, I just thought it was a farming article that was bland, heartwarming and healing. As I read it, I felt more and more that Shi Le is really a lively character. She likes to cook delicious food and grow flowers. She is quick at work and can speak well in business. She can climb trees and embroider. She has a cheerful personality and always accepts Lange's love with a smile. She also generously cares and cares for Lange and his relatives and friends. The article is very full about their lives. When I read it, I felt that it was really hard, but Shi Le still lived happily and actively, which fully reflected the charm of farming articles. I also want to say that I can feel that the author loves the characters he writes very much. Shile was born with all his heart and soul, and the author is also very good! I hope that Shi Lechaolang can be carefree and happy in that world, and I also hope that the author will go well and be happy every day!

It's really amazing that my wife's first article is so well written! ! However, I have a little suggestion (not a writing guide! Not a writing guide!). I personally feel that the relationship between the two protagonists has not changed significantly. It seems that they have been an old married couple since they got married, and there is no change in their relationship. Another thing is that the plot description is not particularly reasonable. Some places feel that it could be more detailed, and some places feel that it could be more sketchy. The above are all personal opinions, just a few suggestions. Anyway! My wife wrote very, very well! I wish my wife better and better as she writes! !

I am a diligent person. It is my first time to write an article. Many authors have a lot of typos in the article. There are no more than three typos in this article. This is my memory. When readers spend money to read books, no matter how much or how little they spend, they all hope that they will feel comfortable, big, and great! Come on!

After reading it, I like this kind of ordinary life very much, but it feels a little bit mundane. I hope that there will be a little more new literary and emotional lines and career lines in the future.

I finished reading it in one sitting. It's a short story and it's good to read.

What a plain and happy life. . .

It's really beautiful, the water flows smoothly

I finished reading a big article again, keeping up with the progress. I am just waiting for the next article to be finished [Sahua] It's hard to imagine that this is the author's first article. The writing is smooth, the story is warm, and it's very healing~

Zaizi has written too little, please write more, such a cute Zaizi

Looks good! I like it so much! Read it in one sitting!