[Naruto] Takoyaki

I really can't help it. Although the background of the ninja world is indeed gray, the writing is too dark. All the characters have no humanity at all. They are all selfish. The heroine and the characters related to her are just as if they have lowered their heads. However, despite this, the author has written the plot reasonably and smoothly, which is also very good.

Because it can only be seen when I write it at the end, I jumped to this chapter to leave a message, please let Shikamaru go. Not to mention that the author is a Itachi dream girl, and you insist on writing the heroine as a patient with Stockholm Syndrome (the heroine died several times because of Itachi and I can continue to post it), but why do you have to let Shikamaru take over? When you are with Shikamaru in the be line, you have to have Itachi's child, and when you are with Shikamaru in the he line, you also have Itachi's child, and the heroine has to hold on to a piece of meat in her belly. The same is true in Jiraiya's be line. It feels like the heroine is like a tool in skin, and her child is also like a tool. Moreover, Jiraiya is written as a scumbag who eats from the bowl and looks at the pot, and Shikamaru is also written as a scumbag who abuses women... It's really difficult to comment [Cracked]

Can't the four of them live together? And call Brother Kazi too

I'm sorry, madam, for your hard work, you have written the full text of 350,000 words for free for love. It is really great. It took me two days to read it in one go, and I dreamed about several people in the middle. In fact, I personally like my wife's writing style, and I think the story is quite adequate. There is a desire to read it in one breath, lightly. And my wife's personal hand addiction may not be very fond of paragraphs, which makes me hallucinate the Japanese literary works I have read before. Of course, not only the writing style, but the plot is also the same as crazy. In fact, when I just read the first dozen chapters, I quit the book several times to confirm which year it was written. It is so ups and downs, but it is not very old and was written in 24 years. Frankly speaking, during the period of Xiaoqi, I was wondering whether the wife used the heroine as a cover-up, and whether Xiaoqi was the wife's own design. Then Ahba and Xiaojiu appeared one after another, and I knew it was impossible. How could someone arrange such a miserable ending for their own design? How weird is it? Anyway, with the fascinating magic of this book, I read it bit by bit. The first thing that made me scream was the child with Jiraiya. When I typed this line, I was still rolling my eyes uncontrollably. Of course, this embryo was the foreshadowing later and I didn't know it was important until I read it. I can only say that the foreshadowing was buried early but it was very bad. Then there is the matter of dealing between three men. Well, if you add in the extras and f-lines, there will obviously be more than three. Of course, of course, I actually love eating all otomes. The more lovers I have, the more impressive I am. Who cares about 1V1 after reading otome novels? But I think maybe your writing skills are not enough, madam, or... The characters in the original work are not well grasped. In short, the three main characters all appear to be OOC to varying degrees. Among them, I personally feel that Shikamaru, the biggest male protagonist in the book, is the worst. The character with the highest IQ has a violent tendency in the if line, and the three girls he fell in love with on the way from childhood to adulthood. They are both the same soul, and even though they knew that they had a child with Jiraiya, they were still mentally obsessive, and they cared about the past between the heroine and Itachi. Well, although the wife still reconciled in the end, judging from Itachi's extra story, the heroine and Shikamaru would not be happy forever in the end... But then again, the three of them The male protagonist's love story is inexplicably rushed. Even Shikamaru, who first fell in love with the heroine and soul mate, is obviously tired of this marriage in the side story. In the two side stories, the male protagonist used unfair means to get the heroine's sex first. So is such a he really a he? How long can it last without getting tired? Well. In short, I still say that, the heroine's misery should not be self-inflicted... Well, all in all, if you can really understand a person's soul through words, I want to say, madam, promise me not to be too pessimistic in your daily life in the future, okay? It doesn't matter if the characters are OOC or the plot is crappy. You can read the original work a few more times and try to get closer to the character of the original work, and then slowly write a little bit more progress. Anyway, it's just for love. Don't blame yourself too much. However, if your wife is not happy, the work you write may be a bit messy... Well, in any case, I wish your wife a happy life! (Also: I think the wife's description of Itachi's dank and heavy-masculine feelings in this article is very good and I really like it! In fact, I didn't have much feelings for Itachi before, but I thought it was very delicious. I even felt it was better than the male protagonist Shikamaru in the main text. This may be the reason why the comment section said that my wife is Itachi's dream girl... But of course being good at it and liking it can be different.)

Shikamaru is good, but I prefer the pretty Uchiha! ! ! !

How disgusting? It feels like the author has great malice towards his characters. Whether it is being forced or hurt, I can understand that the author wants to write a more realistic world of Naruto, but what I can feel is that the author has a lot of malice towards everyone. In the end, readers who love Naruto are disgusted by watching it, which is a psychological trauma that needs to be healed for a lifetime. After reading it again, I still don't understand why everyone in the comment area keeps praising this is a good work. Is it because the writing is good? At least I can't understand it. The heroine has never been able to find true happiness from the beginning. Whether it is Kakashi, Itachi, Shikamaru or Jiraiya who has entered the emotional line inexplicably, they are all people who have deeply hurt her. Is it Stockholm? At the same time, as a reader who loves Naruto, I still cannot accept that everyone has been deliberately smeared.

It's so interesting. Although the characters are a bit ooc, I finished reading it in one go. Hahahahahaha. Thank you to my wife for her hard work. It's rare to find a wife who is willing to give everyone a home. I'm lucky to have this kind of food.

It feels a bit like white moonlight and cinnabar mole. No matter who you are with, the trivial matters of daily necessities and salt will smooth out the previous love.

Thinking of the neighbor next door, he is really evil. What kind of ungrateful partner is Itachi? (Pointing at

"Everyone I love is dead"