
[Naruto] Night Fog
[火影]夜雾
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Naruto Fanfiction: Original Female Leads / Female Readers
My tastes are all over the place, and I've got an iron stomach (). Read it if you like it, skip it if you don't, but don't report it and get it taken down.
Fanfiction Mary Sue Story Archive
I don't care about trigger warnings. I just want something readable! Keep the dull, clumsy, and rambling writing away! Long live Mary Sues! Mostly fanfiction.
Naruto Stories for My Own Use
Thanks to the chefs! A personal reading log. Jinjiang doesn't let me give everything five stars, so four stars means five.
Naruto Romance
Saving the Naruto fics I've read. Five stars means I really loved it.
Great Naruto Fanfiction, Any Pairing, Updated Irregularly
May include Tobirama/Izuna and Hashirama/Madara. Original male and female leads, plus pairings like Tobirama/Hashirama, Madara/Izuna, Shisui/Kakashi, and gen stories.
Free Naruto Otome Stories with a Female Protagonist and All Love Interests
[Naruto corner] Female leads only, no pairing, all pairings, love triangles, one-sided crushes, or unclear pairings
Great Fanfiction Loved by College Women
Now that I've read more, I really can't get through stories with immature writing. There's Jujutsu Kaisen, Naruto, Gintama, JoJo, Hunter x Hunter, Sherlock, Harry Potter, Marvel, DC, and all kinds of obscure fandoms.
Romance!
Mostly focused on the romance. Great chemistry.
Naruto BG (Not a Fan of Too Many Crossover Fandoms)
For my own use. It's all personal taste: I'll add whatever I'm into. Spoiler-filled descriptions and reviews. Why can't this list be all five-star books? Recommending books is subjective.
Naruto
Mostly BG
For My Goldfish Brain, Record No. 1
Hardcore BG, all kinds of niche picks
Free Naruto Female-Reader Fanfiction
Short Naruto BG stories, including lots of abandoned fics. I just love reading about Mary Sue heroines. If you’re interested, check out the author’s profile and feast away.
Naruto Founding Era
Warring States-era infrastructure projects, or stories with original CP/CB pairings: Hashirama, Madara, Tobirama, Izuna
Naruto Reading List #1
A collection of my favorite Naruto BG romances.
Naruto Otome
Otome anime and games
Naruto: No Pairings or BG
[Completed] [Updates whenever the mood strikes] [Abandoned] [No CP] [BG]
Completed
It's rare for a story to keep me reading to the end, or make me want to
Naruto Series
The Naruto series
Naruto
Naruto crossover
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How should I put it? Not only did I not feel the heroine's work, but I also felt that the heroine was very pitiful. It is not difficult to see from the previous article that the heroine likes Asura, largely because she often comes into contact with her two brothers, and because of Indra's cold face, she prefers Asura who treats her well. Is this love? I don't know, but I definitely like it. I don't think it's the heroine's fault to make herself sick because she wants to be with Asura. On the contrary, the heroine is very pitiful. She can't get what she wants. The pain started on the first day of her secret love. This cannot be seen in the light, but the heroine They have never hurt anyone. They forced the heroine to accept it because of their own selfishness and the reason of "for your own good". Asura knew that his sister wanted to be with him, but he sent the heroine there. This was not for her own good, because didn't anything happen to the heroine before she went to the mountains? Isn't he afraid that the heroine will be stimulated and hurt himself again? Of course, it may be because the heroine has never been willful, she is always obedient, even if she resists, she will hurt herself, so no one cares about what she wants. She clearly wants to be with Asura so much that she wants to hurt herself, how kind! He didn't cry or make a fuss, he accepted it silently, and his only resistance was so weak and weak, but how many people cared? This reminds me of being abandoned by my parents when I was a child. I was five or six years old, and my parents were working the night shift. Because I always slept next to them, I would wake up not long after they got up. When I woke up, I would find myself lying on an empty bed, with no one in the house. I was very scared, hiding under the quilt alone, spending night after night. I woke up early that day, and my parents were just about to go out. I shouted in fear: "Dad - Mom -" But they Hearing my cry, the door opened faster. I didn't even wear any clothes and ran over barefoot, but they had already closed the door. I cried so hard that my nose ran down to my chin. I kept calling them, and there was an echo. But I just I could hear the sound of the electric car going further and further away, and gradually there was no movement. I cried for a long time, knowing that no one would hold me back, so I silently climbed into bed alone. That day, I was not afraid of invisible monsters, I was just thinking, why can't they take me with them? I would be very obedient, lie alone in the tricycle, not moving and making no sound, so I waited until dawn again. Ye Wu's father didn't want to listen to her thoughts. Ye Wu had already expected that her terrible brother still frightened her and there was no room for turning around. Only Asura, her loving brother and sweetheart, did something unforgivable. At that moment, Asura didn't choose Ye Wu. Maybe Asura never made a choice. Ye Wu, because doting on Ye Wu is recognized by everyone, that is, it is considered right. However, if no one helps Ye Wu, everyone including Indra and his father also think that Ye Wu should not be helped. That is wrong. It is as shameful as having sex with his sister. Will Asura still help? He will, and Asura will help Ye Wu, but it will be secretly, secretly helping, but Asura must make a choice, to help or not to help? Without the possibility of secretly helping, his reputation would be as tarnished as being with his sister. What would Asura choose? They will be in a dilemma. Neither Asura nor Indra dared to publish these shameful things. Since they didn't dare to do it, they dared not do it, so they didn't do it from the beginning. But not only did they do it, but they also made Ye Wu pregnant with a child. You may know how dangerous it is to have a child. Not to mention ancient times, even modern times are very dangerous. Didn't Ye Wu die later because of giving birth to a child? Of course, this does not mean that Ye Wu is not wrong. She indeed cannot be with her brother, but her fault is not as good as that of Indra and Asura. Indra's compulsion and Asura's intolerance. If Asura could endure it, would things have turned out like that? The children she desperately gave birth to killed each other, and she died due to childbirth. She also had to endure the forced and unwarranted blame from her brother, the pressure of public opinion, and the condemnation of conscience. No one cares about Ye Wu's inner misery and inability to control himself. He can't be with the one he loves, and is abandoned by the one he loves. This is already the case, and he still has to be forced to be together by his brother. Asura is listening on the side, indifferent, Ye Wu cries sadly, doesn't he love Ye Wu the most? Even if they can't be together because of their reputation, can't Asura save Ye Wu and let her get rid of Indra? But he chose the most hurtful acquiescence and turning a blind eye. The author said that Asura chose responsibility, but I said that Asura chose weakness. Since becoming the heir requires the reputation of the Ninja Sect, why should he compete with Indra? It was said that he was fighting for Ye Wu, but after he won, he chose to give up in the name of responsibility and watched his sister, his beloved woman, cry bitterly. Even if he was not with Ye Wu, he could still help Ye Wu get rid of Indra. Yes, Ye Wu no longer had the face to face everyone, but just let her live with a man who made her suffer? Asura has no masculine responsibility, and I suspect that he never chose the female protagonist from the beginning to the end. He did it secretly, in secret, for fear of being seen. This time, and the last time, among those choices, Asura never chose the heroine, let alone Indra, and Hagoromo never listened to his little daughter's thoughts and took it for granted. Perhaps it was limited by the times, but because of the times, can we be tolerant of these injustices? Is it possible that foot binding will be tolerated because of different times? No! Wrong is wrong and will not disappear just because times change. Moreover, these remarks by the author are very disappointing to me. I have read several of the author's works and like them very much. However, the author said something about green tea whore, which made me feel that the author is a bit misogynistic. When the heroine chose Indra and Asura, I felt uncomfortable. How does the heroine make a choice? Does she choose the father of her child or the one she loves? How to choose? I don't know what the author is doing. How can the heroine get rid of the author's humiliation? Determined not to get involved with them, renounce the relationship, treat Indra and Asura equally, and then when the time comes, marry a decent person, but one you don't know? The reason why people are human is partly because of the strong family love, etc. She will be afraid of alienation because of Asura's indifference because of Asura's closeness to her, and love will sprout because she only spends time with Asura. (If Yewu can be with other people, If he comes into contact with a boy, I'm afraid she may not like Asura.) She will oppose her father's approach because of love, even if it is because of her own will - marrying herself to a man she is unfamiliar with or even doesn't know. I deeply doubt that the author is really the so-called big one? In this novel, I can feel the deep malice towards the heroine. If the author's thoughts about the heroine are consistent with reality, I'm afraid the author is too harsh on girls.
I don't feel like the green tea heroine is a bitch. On the contrary, she felt very pitiful. She had been taught since birth that she had to obey men and could only play around in a small way. The pattern of life can only swing between two men, and his only contribution to the world is giving birth to two children. He has no own interests, no own hobbies, no own life goals and ideals. Just to satisfy the author's prostitution of two men. In the end, she was given the ending that a scumbag deserved. I just feel sad. Beauty is like duckweed, she can't help herself in any way, she just drifts with the tide, pushing the boat along with the current. Maybe the only highlight in this life is playing with the feelings of two men. After reading the whole article, I didn't feel happy, but I was educated. After all, you still have to have strength to get the destiny you want. If only I could punch old Asura, kick Indra, accept as many men as I want, do whatever I want, and still be so scared! This article cannot be said to be Su, I can only say that it is very educational. We should strengthen ourselves!
She couldn't help but be with the brother she didn't like, was raped and mentally abused, and then had her die in childbirth at a young age. In the end, she had to be known as a scumbag. How misogynistic is the author? The heroine is really unlucky for eight lifetimes.
I don't understand... The heroine I wrote said that death in childbirth is the proper ending, and the heroine is not worthy of him... I really don't understand
This may be the first time I write such a long review, but I still want to say that the author's three views are not the same as the protagonist's three views. First of all, I know that in fan works, such a female protagonist is not a negative image at all, but there are not many in Jinjiang. For example, in Lof, "When you die, they will regret it" and the like are even more excessive. For the sake of the crematorium in the following article, the male protagonist quickly degrades the female protagonist to have everything. Naruto's Ming Ke curse restores HP, which is not a lot at all, okay? Secondly, everyone has their own different tastes. I know there are strong women and the feminist movement, but please please move to fanfics about strong women? As far as fan fiction is concerned, it was originally out of love for the original characters that I came up with this fan fiction. What's more, in the world of Naruto, in the ninja world, force value basically determines everything. Talking about human rights is really too subtle. Does Danzo talk to Uchiha about human rights? Hashirama and Madara's Valley of the End Hashirama's "putting the cart before the horse" Does he care about human rights? The heroine should have the right to choose, but under the control of force and the cultivation of her by the external environment, she has no ability to choose, neither mentally nor with force. If she really chooses one, will the other really let go? I can't see it. I'm going off topic. I don't think threesomes are a problem. The problem is that I see the problem. If a wife doesn't want to see it, she can skip it. It may be offensive: It failed to create the most heroine's love between Indra and Asura. Is it just her skin or her timid character? If it's the former, they don't care at all whether the heroine loves them or not. If it's the latter, they won't dislike the heroine's vacillation. I feel that the author has not clearly portrayed this point. If they only love appearance, after forcing the heroine to fall in love with them, but hope that the heroine will fall in love with them and firmly choose them, they will change from a paper person to a real ugly man... What's more, Indra and Asura are proud. I really can't imagine that they would use the method of "killing her" to make the heroine fall in love with him. It's a bit despicable. Well, I think physical desire and psychological desire for control can be separated... Well, other people said that the author didn't love the heroine enough. I think it's normal. I think I've said it once before. I wrote this article just because I love the hero. . It's normal to love the male protagonist more than the female protagonist. It's just a matter of buying a meal for the brothers. Don't just leave it here because it's a free article... I feel a little uncomfortable reading it. I don't know what the author thinks, but I just think that every wife who works for love should be treated well and cherished. Let me give you an example. Let's not talk about the confusing productivity of Naruto's worldview. As far as the system is concerned, there are noble names. In feudal society, the heroine has a seemingly high status, but has no rights, just like the princess who wants to be married off by the emperor. Among so many emperors, which emperor has ever loved a daughter? Which emperor truly loved a woman? Why don't you go complain to the emperor and criticize a fan author? Without criticizing, in reality, those who really do things come to pick on the author of an online article. It's a double standard. Is it the emperor who doesn't dare to praise those men, or does he want to pick on an author who is easy to control? At this point, I don't seem to know what I'm going to say, so let's stop here. Come on, madam [comparison]
It's really well written, and the last paragraph feels a bit sad. As a weak woman in the high-risk world of Naruto who is beautiful but powerless, the heroine may be lucky to die young. The Female Twins is very touching, and the writing is nothing to say. It's just that it's too depressing from the heroine's point of view. She's just drifting along in troubled times. It's still very touching to read without thinking.
The heroine is like a bird trapped in a cage
How should I put it? Not only did I not feel the heroine's work, but I also felt that the heroine was very pitiful. It is not difficult to see from the previous article that the heroine likes Asura, largely because she often comes into contact with her two brothers, and because of Indra's cold face, she prefers Asura who treats her well. Is this love? I don't know, but I definitely like it. I don't think it's the heroine's fault to make herself sick because she wants to be with Asura. On the contrary, the heroine is very pitiful. She can't get what she wants. The pain started on the first day of her secret love. This cannot be seen in the light, but the heroine They have never hurt anyone. They forced the heroine to accept it because of their own selfishness and the reason of "for your own good". Asura knew that his sister wanted to be with him, but he sent the heroine there. This was not for her own good, because didn't anything happen to the heroine before she went to the mountains? Isn't he afraid that the heroine will be stimulated and hurt himself again? Of course, it may be because the heroine has never been willful, she is always obedient, even if she resists, she will hurt herself, so no one cares about what she wants. She clearly wants to be with Asura so much that she wants to hurt herself, how kind! He didn't cry or make a fuss, he accepted it silently, and his only resistance was so weak and weak, but how many people cared? This reminds me of being abandoned by my parents when I was a child. I was five or six years old, and my parents were working the night shift. Because I always slept next to them, I would wake up not long after they got up. When I woke up, I would find myself lying on an empty bed, with no one in the house. I was very scared, hiding under the quilt alone, spending night after night. I woke up early that day, and my parents were just about to go out. I shouted in fear: "Dad - Mom -" But they Hearing my cry, the door opened faster. I didn't even wear any clothes and ran over barefoot, but they had already closed the door. I cried so hard that my nose ran down to my chin. I kept calling them, and there was an echo. But I just I could hear the sound of the electric car going further and further away, and gradually there was no movement. I cried for a long time, knowing that no one would hold me back, so I silently climbed into bed alone. That day, I was not afraid of invisible monsters, I was just thinking, why can't they take me with them? I would be very obedient, lie alone in the tricycle, not moving and making no sound, so I waited until dawn again. Ye Wu's father didn't want to listen to her thoughts. Ye Wu had already expected that her terrible brother still frightened her and there was no room for turning around. Only Asura, her loving brother and sweetheart, did something unforgivable. At that moment, Asura didn't choose Ye Wu. Maybe Asura never made a choice. Ye Wu, because doting on Ye Wu is recognized by everyone, that is, it is considered right. However, if no one helps Ye Wu, everyone including Indra and his father also think that Ye Wu should not be helped. That is wrong. It is as shameful as having sex with his sister. Will Asura still help? He will, and Asura will help Ye Wu, but it will be secretly, secretly helping, but Asura must make a choice, to help or not to help? Without the possibility of secretly helping, his reputation would be as tarnished as being with his sister. What would Asura choose? They will be in a dilemma. Neither Asura nor Indra dared to publish these shameful things. Since they didn't dare to do it, they dared not do it, so they didn't do it from the beginning. But not only did they do it, but they also made Ye Wu pregnant with a child. You may know how dangerous it is to have a child. Not to mention ancient times, even modern times are very dangerous. Didn't Ye Wu die later because of giving birth to a child? Of course, this does not mean that Ye Wu is not wrong. She indeed cannot be with her brother, but her fault is not as good as that of Indra and Asura. Indra's compulsion and Asura's intolerance. If Asura could endure it, would things have turned out like that? The children she desperately gave birth to killed each other, and she died due to childbirth. She also had to endure the forced and unwarranted blame from her brother, the pressure of public opinion, and the condemnation of conscience. No one cares about Ye Wu's inner misery and inability to control himself. He can't be with the one he loves, and is abandoned by the one he loves. This is already the case, and he still has to be forced to be together by his brother. Asura is listening on the side, indifferent, Ye Wu cries sadly, doesn't he love Ye Wu the most? Even if they can't be together because of their reputation, can't Asura save Ye Wu and let her get rid of Indra? But he chose the most hurtful acquiescence and turning a blind eye. The author said that Asura chose responsibility, but I said that Asura chose weakness. Since becoming the heir requires the reputation of the Ninja Sect, why should he compete with Indra? It was said that he was fighting for Ye Wu, but after he won, he chose to give up in the name of responsibility and watched his sister, his beloved woman, cry bitterly. Even if he was not with Ye Wu, he could still help Ye Wu get rid of Indra. Yes, Ye Wu no longer had the face to face everyone, but just let her live with a man who made her suffer? Asura has no masculine responsibility, and I suspect that he never chose the female protagonist from the beginning to the end. He did it secretly, in secret, for fear of being seen. This time, and the last time, among those choices, Asura never chose the heroine, let alone Indra, and Hagoromo never listened to his little daughter's thoughts and took it for granted. Perhaps it was limited by the times, but because of the times, can we be tolerant of these injustices? Is it possible that foot binding will be tolerated because of different times? No! Wrong is wrong and will not disappear just because times change. Moreover, these remarks by the author are very disappointing to me. I have read several of the author's works and like them very much. However, the author said something about green tea whore, which made me feel that the author is a bit misogynistic. When the heroine chose Indra and Asura, I felt uncomfortable. How does the heroine make a choice? Does she choose the father of her child or the one she loves? How to choose? I don't know what the author is doing. How can the heroine get rid of the author's humiliation? Determined not to get involved with them, renounce the relationship, treat Indra and Asura equally, and then when the time comes, marry a decent person, but one you don't know? The reason why people are human is partly because of the strong family love, etc. She will be afraid of alienation because of Asura's indifference because of Asura's closeness to her, and love will sprout because she only spends time with Asura. (If Yewu can be with other people, If he comes into contact with a boy, I'm afraid she may not like Asura.) She will oppose her father's approach because of love, even if it is because of her own will - marrying herself to a man she is unfamiliar with or even doesn't know. I deeply doubt that the author is really the so-called big one? In this novel, I can feel the deep malice towards the heroine. If the author's thoughts about the heroine are consistent with reality, I'm afraid the author is too harsh on girls.
After watching it, I can only say that I no longer regret the tragic ending of Indra Asura in Naruto. It is all natural. After all, I feel that the beginning of everything was because of Indra's coercion. Later, even the heroine's sunshine Asura began to force her! What did the heroine do? Half-hearted? She was smiling on the outside but happy in her heart? But she wasn't? She had always rejected Indra, who was only loved by her brother, from the beginning to the end! She finally compromised because she was too weak to resist and had expectations for family affection. As for Asura, what should I say? She doesn't seem to have done anything, right? I feel that the heroine has always been bitter in her heart (maybe it was sweet, but only a little). In the end, not only did she not get happiness, her beloved brother did not get happiness, even her people and her children had to continue to kill each other. What did her beauty bring to her? If she were a bitch, her life would be much better than the ending, at least she would be happy in her heart! It's a pity that she didn't. Her sin was that she had a beauty that men couldn't resist, but she didn't have the strength to match it. In Naruto's world, weakness is the original sin, and she is guilty
Ah, do you look down on scumbags? I actually became bee woo woo woo