I awakened.
I discovered that I was living in a romance story about an immortal and a demon, and I was the vicious second female lead. The heroine was my junior sister.
She was reborn, and after being reborn she gained the ability to hear people's thoughts, though she didn't know it herself.
Every day, I could see all sorts of thoughts from my junior sister:
"This time, I have to protect Fifth Senior Brother and make sure his foundation isn't damaged, leaving him unable to cultivate."
"On this trip to the Ten Thousand Ghost Cavern, I have to stay close to Senior Sister Xu and make sure the monsters don't capture her and blind one of her eyes."
So, during the sect's trial tournament, Fifth Senior Brother used my junior sister's thoughts to avoid the demonic cultivators' plot and became her devoted lackey.
In the Ten Thousand Ghost Cavern secret realm, Junior Sister Xu followed my junior sister's thoughts and dodged a monster's deadly claw, becoming her ardent supporter from then on.
Thanks to her thoughts, my junior sister became the sect's darling overnight.
But my junior sister didn't know that whenever her thoughts appeared, I could see more than just those thoughts. I could also see the comments floating above her head from another world:
[I've topped up a little cash, just waiting to shower my daughter with gifts!]
[Don't anyone stop me. I'm going to spend a fortune on my precious Yaoyao!]
I couldn't understand the words in those comments, but after a demonic cultivator destroyed my junior sister's spiritual root, I saw the comments spend money to give her an even better spiritual foundation!
Thinking of all the hardships I'd endured in the original story, I understood.
So I swallowed my blood and tears, watched the story's comments, and did my best to play the part of a gentle and kind person. Little by little, I tested out the kinds of characters these viewers loved most, hoping to make them seal away the demons for me, go mad over me, and finally defy fate on my behalf!
And I, too, would eventually stand at the peak, despite being nothing more than an ordinary mortal!
Thanks to my friend A Bu for the cover, mwah (*  ̄3)(ε ̄ *)
1. The blurb is in first person, while the story itself is in third person.
2. There will be some comments early on.
3. I'll say more when I think of it.
Two upcoming titles:
Upcoming title 1: The Plot Fell Apart After the Main Cast Heard My Thoughts
Blurb:
After transmigrating into a xianxia novel as a vicious second female lead, Jiang Yunmiao was told by the System that if she faithfully followed the plot to the end, she could return to her original world and get a bonus of fifty billion!
So, after reading the entire outline, Jiang Yunmiao set about dutifully following the plot.
What Jiang Yunmiao didn't know was that, because the System had malfunctioned, every member of the main cast could hear her thoughts.
When she followed the plot where she threatened and tempted the heroine to leave the male lead: [Sorry, pretty girl. If I could, I'd love to cuddle up with a soft, sweet girl too, but this damn main plot is something I have to follow. Waaaah!]
The heroine smiled at Jiang Yunmiao. "Big Sister, you smell so nice~"
Jiang Yunmiao: Why is the heroine acting weird??
When she was trying to curry favor with the male lead: [If it weren't for the five hundred billion, who'd put up with that dead man's face? I'll go find some gorgeous mermaids later to soothe my wounded heart!]
The male lead's cold expression darkened. He asked ominously, "I've been craving fish-head soup lately. Which tastes better, mermaids from the South Sea or the North Sea?"
Jiang Yunmiao: Is the male lead threatening me?!
When she provoked the villain: [Damn, this villain is way hotter than the male lead. I want to copy... slurp...]
The villain casually opened his collar, revealing his beautiful collarbones. "It's getting a little hot..."
Jiang Yunmiao: Wait... Is the villain trying to seduce me?!
Jiang Yunmiao diligently completed every main plot mission.
Just as she was about to reach the mission that would write her out of the story, the plot fell apart...
The male lead threatened her with a knife: "Be with me, or I'll kill them!"
The heroine turned into a fierce puppy: "If I'd known Big Sister liked wild ones, I wouldn't have pretended."
The villain revealed his eight-pack abs: "Don't you really want to come over and feel them~"
Help! What on earth went wrong?!
Upcoming title 2: I'm a Food Streamer in Ancient Times
[Useless Master X Genius Disciple, a hopelessly lovestruck male lead's daily self-seduction!]
Blurb:
Jiang Yurong transmigrated.
From the start, she was faced with a house stripped bare, three of a family of five dead from hunger, and the two little ones who remained barely clinging to life. Jiang Yurong wasn't worried. As a flirtatious streamer, she'd bound herself to a livestreaming System, her golden finger. She could exchange her viewers' gifts for food, and turn around even the most hellish start!
But the System had a bug, and the channel that was supposed to feature beauty became a food channel!
As someone who was hopeless in the kitchen, Jiang Yurong nearly blacked out. She could flirt on camera, but she couldn't scrub a stove!
To keep herself and her younger siblings from starving, Jiang Yurong could only scrape by with the System's daily tasks.
She followed every step in the cooking videos, yet still ended up with a pile of blackened dishes! So Jiang Yurong turned her attention to the handsome young scholar next door.
Sure enough, scholars have useful brains!
Jiang Yurong watched him perfectly recreate the food from the videos just by following the steps she recited aloud, and was overjoyed! Yes! As long as she clung to this thigh, she could complete advanced tasks every day, and her whole family would soon be living comfortably!
*
Bai Heyu had been a little troubled lately.
The eldest daughter of the Jiang family next door, Jiang Yurong, seemed to have become much bolder ever since she recovered from her illness.
She used to sneak a single glance at him with adoring eyes. Now she dared to come by every day, claiming she needed to borrow his kitchen stove to cook.
Did she think he didn't know that her family's stove was bigger and more convenient than his?
And she knew their family's precious recipes, passed down for generations, by heart, yet she claimed she couldn't cook and begged him to help. What a flimsy excuse!
Still, the Jiang family's eldest daughter was truly devoted to him. Bai Heyu thought he must study twice as hard and pass the imperial exams one day, so he wouldn't disappoint her deep affection!
But she was still young, and having her come over to his house every day wasn't good for her reputation. Maybe he should arrange an engagement with her as soon as possible?
Theme: Striving to survive
The boy next door who was torn to pieces is put back together?
Although it was not the intention of the original heroine, in fact she is a disaster! Her magic weapons and opportunities are all based on the bones of cannon fodder
Where has the heroine gone?? QAQ I want to watch the female protagonist
At the end of the previous chapter, the heroine changed her mind and took the little boy away, but in this chapter it turns out that the little boy followed her without her knowledge. Hasn't it been changed?
Why is Xie Tangyao so annoying?
It feels like the writing is broken, and there is a feeling of neither light nor heavy. The fate of each character is either dead or injured, arranged, and made into a puppet. It is never an unsolvable proposition, but it is difficult to accept.
Looks like a new author? Support it. There are a few points that I like very much: the author did not write the junior sister as a porcelain mirror villain with a thin personality, and did not discredit the original heroine. In the author's description, the junior sister also has her own advantages. She will love her brothers and sisters very much (although only those who are close to her), she will always work hard for the sect, and she is generally kind. Moreover, her efforts were always noticed by her senior brother. The last words he said to her were quite touching. For the male protagonist and female protagonist, the author did not arrange for them to only indulge in personal love affairs, but arranged career lines for them respectively. And the better thing is that both the male and female protagonists have the most ordinary mortal origins (unlike in ordinary novels, the male protagonists have a glamorous origin). I was also a little surprised by the arrangement of the ending. Generally, if you want to reach a higher level in fairy tales, they usually say that the protagonist saved the six realms of beings, including immortals, demons, humans and ghosts, etc. There are very few novels that highlight the survival rights of "ordinary mortals". Anyway, I have read no more than 5 novels of this type. I'm surprised that a new author can have such a pattern. Following are some small suggestions: The relationship between the Qingyun Mansion world, the Guiyi Zong world and the barrage audience world does not feel well concluded. I wonder if the author will mention the relationship between these worlds in the extra story. (The barrage setting appears less and less in the future. I can understand what the author wants to express. For the heroine, she is a living person and she lives in a living world. The barrage only plays a supporting role in the heroine's growth. The heroine mainly relies on her own perseverance to achieve it. But I feel that the author still needs to explain the heroine's mental journey more clearly.) Then there is no description of the emotional line between the male and female protagonists. It only explained that their fates were closely intertwined, but there was no detailed description of their emotional changes. Although it is good to focus on building a career, the CP brain still wants to see the two of them being sweet, and if the emotional line is described in the early stage, it will be more touching in the later stage when they are separated due to their respective identities and missions. Here is the author's side story of the male and female protagonists. Then, the author did not describe the main line of "mortals should have their own destiny" clearly enough in the previous plot. It was not until the finale that I understood what the author wanted to express and why most of the training scenes were related to mortals. When I read the previous chapter, I thought the author wanted to express the theme of equality among the six realms, haha.
Is this the end of my story? Is the matter with Qingyun Mansion okay? It always feels so fast, I really don't like Xie Tangyao, (screaming. Ipg) I thought she was a cool Wen Kou Ya (although it was also cool), I feel like there is still a lot to expand on (twisting)
Teacher, I'm here. I fell asleep while playing King yesterday (???) Pay attention to your health! Use cold compresses to relieve pain and hot compresses to reduce swelling. You can make your own choice?
The story line is over! (But it feels like it's progressing quickly)