Global Warming [Hoarding Supplies]

You can write about stocking up, but there's no need to write it in such detail. The article mentions that the weather is now 40 degrees, but the protagonist doesn't feel it at all. Why does it have to be mentioned by those junior high school students? You will definitely be sweating profusely when you go back and forth to stock up on goods. You really don't need to be careful where you should be. If you want to stock up in a more detailed way, you can simply copy the ingredient list of each type of food. This article will be renamed a collection of major vegetable markets.

Seeds are either bought by the pound or by the bag... Who buys the seeds by the grain? [Question mark] [Question mark] [Question mark] The author has never been to the countryside, right?

I think I have a little bit of stock, I'm not used to it hahaha

I know the author is stocking up, but it feels like it's too scattered, it's just food, and there's no plan. Even if you divide it by category, you should hurry up. We have all realized that something is wrong and may break out in advance. Now we need at least one set of survival items. Simply buying them for food is too little and too unsafe. And should we talk about downloading information in advance?

Nearly half of the 9,000-plus words in this document are about the portions of various foods.

What we're saying is, if you join V, don't make up the word count like this. Listing them all really feels like you're trying to make up the word count.

The protagonist is becoming more and more mindless and arrogant. I can't stand it any longer and have withdrawn.

The author can write about hoarding goods, but your writing is too detailed. Up to now, you have still written about food for hoarding goods. In fact, just write a broad category. Your writing style is very similar to that of just starting to learn to write essays and trying to make up 800 words. Food, clothing, shelter, transportation, defense, daily necessities... There are so many categories. You have to write this for as long as you want. The focus of the article should be how to survive later, otherwise the result will be an anticlimactic or the article will be super long.

Personally, it is easy to cause problems if you buy them in bulk like this and forget them. It is recommended to make a list, and you can also try to simulate opening a large supermarket, so that you have more reasons to ask people to deliver goods directly to you. After all, a supermarket can basically summarize most of human needs.

It's a bit contradictory. I like to eat jelly, but I only buy one hundred pounds. I'm probably insensitive to the weight. When I go to the supermarket to buy bulk jelly, I often buy two or three kilograms.